After Rebirth, I Rejected Bai Yueguang's Confession

The writing style of this book is indeed better than that of its peers. The topic of youth is like the white moonlight. It is beautiful, but also very impetuous. How to control the overall rhythm details requires determining an emotional main line. At present, the emotional details can be written better. The main reason why it does not attract more people is that the emotions are not ordinary, but are suppressed by the bookishness, and there are no reasonable contradictions to advance the plot. I hope the author can write better

The literary talent is good, come on, come on, there is no one for such a good book

In fact, reading novels is like eating fast food for me, it just feels good, but this novel has such a youthful feel that I slowly savored it. Gold always shines, the author's literary talent is quite good, I will follow him

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As long as the characters are made three-dimensional, I don't mind the harem, but I'm afraid of the assembly line.

If you don't have poison resistance, you should buy a set of poison resistance equipment first, otherwise the mobs in Chapter 1 won't be able to survive.

Seriously, the first chapter is toxic. The writing is fine!

It's very well written. Good luck to the author.

The first chapter has been changed and looks much better, and the writing is okay.

After reading so many rebirth books, yours is one of the few that suits my taste.

The heroine, don't do it too much, people will become invisible in the later stage.

It's been a long time since I've seen a novel with such a strong sense of empathy. Come on, author 😰

To be honest, I used to hate literary youth. I don't know why the author's book is so literary. I found it very interesting.

Very nice. I finished reading it in one go.

The author's writing style is good, and he describes the mental journey of a scumbag very delicately. I hope it won't really be written as a harem. Not to mention it's a slap in the face, but I've seen it too much and I've been disgusted.

Xiao Yuan handled it well. The male protagonist did not conceal the deception but took the initiative to confess. Both of them knew that there would be no result but still started. The characters became more vivid and the story gained tension.

Are you a eunuch? Why have you released a new book?

Okay, okay, the Chinese version of Sayu, black and red are also red. This doesn't seem to work in the novel, because people still watch the anime even if it sucks, and there are so many newbies in the novel, and the newbies are all on free platforms.

The previous essay is good but awkward There is also a dialogue. Is there really such a dialogue in reality? Although this is a novel. ... This is a good book, only the dialogues and short compositions are not to my taste. Overall, a good book, at least a quality one.

Why are there only five chapters? I've finished the book.

What the hell, I planned to post a chapter review and complain about the bad points, but it turned out that I couldn't click on it. I exited and re-entered and there were only five chapters left😅

Your comment section is a bit strange! Some people are boasting, but others are saying that the first chapter contains poison. What kind of poison is in the first chapter? Can someone please tell me?

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