I Popularized Yuanshen in Douluo

{"TopicId":"837157464037916672","TopicName":"I popularized Yuanshen in Douluo"} Please give me an evaluation and see if there are any shortcomings in my novel. I may not be able to change it at first, but I can change it later.

As expected, Ten Hair Gold uses lifespan to gain gold. I won gold once in a lottery. Douluo + Genshen had full expectations, but it seemed like a running account... But Qiqi is quite restored, Qiqi yyds

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Although I really like this type of writing, the writing style looks like a running account, and I really can't follow it 🙂

The author admits that the description is not good, and then he simply stops writing and the more he writes, the more troublesome he gets.

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The subject matter is okay, but the writing style is uncomfortable.

This is the first time I met a fan who completed the plot of time travel - awakening the martial soul - entering the martial soul palace - absorbing the soul ring - seeing the moon pass in three chapters. To be honest, it could have been more "watery" 😂, and there would be more content to watch.

There are also many people whose names are misspelled or incomplete, such as Tinari, whose name is simply misspelled

Regarding Dan Feng and Nata, I can't think of anyone at the moment. If they are added later, they will really become a polished commander.

Uh-huh, fire, one hundred degrees, uh, how should I put it, forget it, I won't comment, it's almost as good as seeing this comment

A rare and shocking idea "◦㉨◦" Come and play in the group ˚*̥(**⁰͈꒨⁰͈)*̥Wow~

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Two points that I never thought about actually come together. It's really imaginative and the writing is good. It's okay.

I read the previous article by the great master, and then took a look at mine. I resisted the urge to delete the book and revised the novel, and now I can barely read it.

To be honest, it's quite average, without any logic, and the writing style is also very average. You are the first one to write about summoning the Genshin Impact into Douluo (the other Genshin Impact Douluo are not in the summoning style). I was originally looking forward to it, but after seeing the latest chapter, I really felt that it was not that good. It is just an average cool article. Once you use your brain to read it, you will find that it is full of poisonous points. It's just that when people watch the Genshin Impact character coming to Douluo for the first time, they want to know what will happen, so they ignore these poisonous points. I hope the author can improve his writing skills and deal with those poisonous points.

Niubi, one second I was thinking about Genshin Douluo, and the next second I realized it

Reading your book, I even thought about the plot. The protagonist drives the Hyperion, takes Teyvat away from the world, and finds Teyvat a new home.

It is actually possible for your original god to come to Douluo. The main thing is to deal with the problem of why they came. My idea is that the protagonist, the captain, drove the Hyperion and saw the development potential of the world of Teyvat. He was not willing to let such a world be submerged in the quantum sea, so he communicated with Tianli and dragged this world away. As for why you chose Douluo Continent, it is very simple, because this world is a tile floor. For safety reasons, it is quite reasonable to choose a weak world.

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I silently opened the calendar, looked at it, and found that it was 2023. How could there be a novel in 2013?

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We just want to say, was one person writing this before and after? And what is the relationship between the protagonist and the character of Genshin Impact? In the beginning, the protagonist directly traveled through Douluo, but later it was shown that the protagonist and the characters in Genshin Impact seemed to have a plot. Did I miss it?

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No, it ended a bit hastily.

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You don't have a wife, so wake up.

Your verbal and picture curses are no defense against me.

On the last day of my show off, I released a new weapon in the weapon pool. Although I wanted to protect the demon, it was still very good.