All Heavens: in the Beginning, Feng Yuxiu Was Kicked Hard in the Lame Leg

The messy plot connection, what the hell is this?

Did I remember it wrong or the author made a mistake? Feng Yuxiu doesn't seem to be lame. He has long and short legs.

People who have never watched this film will not know what you are writing about. The plot transitions between scenes are confusing, and the scene descriptions are not in place. For this kind of novel, you can at least explain the characters clearly so that people can read it. Otherwise, do you think everyone else has seen these dramas?

Why can't you beat a woman when she's old enough? ? Does the author discriminate against women or men?

The writing skills are okay, but the plot is really a bit messy. There is no introduction, no connection, seamless switching - even stitching. It's not that stitching is impossible, it's just that it's messy to begin with, and it gets even messier after stitching. It is possible to improve the writing.