Douluo: Chase Zhu Zhuqing at the Beginning

I feel that this book is a rare book among Douluo Yi, in which the protagonist has a brain. Each supporting character has his or her own interests and calculations, which makes the portrayal of the characters very real. The description of the entanglements of interests and intrigues between various characters is also very interesting personally. When reading, it feels like reading a historical conspiracy novel. For some people, this may be a discouraging point, because the people in the book are too smart, and they don't look like the "simple folk customs" of Douluo Continent hhh Although the heroine Zhu Zhuqing has many scenes (compared to the original work, it is considered to be darkened and OOC), it does not cover up the charm of the male protagonist's image. The male protagonist has mediocre talent (very rare among Douluo fans). He was only in his twenties when he appeared (Tang Shenwang was banned at this age). He came from a humble background and worked as a shady assassin, so he met the female protagonist during the mission. . . . . . To be honest, this kind of setting makes me feel more involved than those protagonists who are born with full soul power and various nb twin martial arts souls. For ordinary people, Douluo Dalu's world view is actually quite cruel. The awakening of your martial soul at the age of six determines whether you can become a soul master, and your innate soul power level determines your future height. Talent basically determines everything. Geniuses can realize their talents through hard work, but ordinary people who are born with low or even no soul power will have no effect no matter how hard they work. We expect to escape the heaviness of the real world in illusory online novels, but the Third Young Master of the Tang family has built a world for us that is more desperate than reality. The pleasure of this type of novel does not come from the protagonist breaking through the constraints of birth and class through his own efforts, but from the fact that the protagonist himself is a member of the ruling class and can enjoy the various privileges of the ruling class. The conflict between Wuhun Palace and the two empires is essentially an internal conflict within the ruling class. Although Wuhun Palace is also quite bad, as a villain, its image as a villain seems to be more majestic and upright than that of Tang San's camp. It relies entirely on the support of its peers. This is the real reason. In other words, the original protagonist's butt is very crooked. In the context of this world view, the protagonist of this book comes from a humble background and desires to become a god in order to control his own destiny. He has made various efforts and plans to this end. In my opinion, it is more like ordinary people struggling in the face of fate and trying to break the shackles of fate. I think that when the protagonist truly becomes a god, I can't help but cheer for him, just like I cheered for Andy who escaped from Shawshank prison from the sewer.

🤫In fact, the core is to be a nanny for Zhu, and then get it

The book is overall good, but who is it about? The protagonist appears for a while, but other chapters are inseparable from Zhu Zhuqing. The protagonist is simply mentioned in one stroke, which is too downplayed. Anyway, it feels a bit strange. The book is good, but it feels too bland and even a bit frustrating to read. However, it is normal for ordinary people to travel through time. I hope it will get better and better.

After reading most of it, to be honest, the writing at the beginning is actually very innovative and I read it quite well. But it feels like after entering Tiandou City, the protagonist has been scheming with others, even the soul master competition that is supposed to be the climax of the plot has been written down in one stroke. Then he returned to Tiandou and continued to plot with Qian Renxue and Tang San. The key protagonist talks about wanting to practice hard, but he is forced to participate in the calculation, which makes him feel very aggrieved, as if he is writing a power-based workplace essay wearing a Douluo suit.

Ah, start as a mouse and then become a nanny 🤭🤭 Why not just write the biography of Zhu Zhuqing 🤔🙂

After reading it, I would like to say that the writing is good, and it can be seen that there is an outline. Various characters are interspersed to lead to the plot, and the helplessness of the little characters is written. However, I feel that many things about the protagonist are completely avoidable, which creates a forced feeling.            1. For example, the pair of brother and sister named Tong, the protagonist is wanted because of Zhu, which makes me feel that Zhu is disgusting (but it is indeed because of the brother and sister named Tong that there will be a subsequent plot) 2. The protagonist's allegiance to Zhu is false and submissive. It is like a soldier king protecting a savage young lady. I feel that many have to rely on her, and it should be better to be obedient and submissive 3. Another thing I don't understand is that Why teach the protagonist Zhu the stunts that he relies on to survive? How can she, a level 7 innate, have direct enlightenment? 4. In the end, the protagonist spreads kindness to the Liang siblings for some inexplicable reasons. I feel that this makes the image of the protagonist no longer distinct. As a killer, he has no guarantee of his own safety and still takes care of others. Even if it will cause the next plot because of them, it is still not in line with the killer's choice at that moment. Summary: After seeing a rare good book, I couldn't help but say so much. If there are any errors in my remarks, please point them out. If it affects the author's mood, please don't care too much. Just write your own. Don't be affected. You can delete it.

Comment when you see the latest chapter 1. Who is the protagonist? Is it Ling Feng or Zhu Zhuqing? In a novel, the protagonist drives the plot. I just feel that you treat Zhu Zhuqing as the protagonist and write her to make her crazy. Ling Feng, the time traveler, is more like the protagonist who leads to Zhu Zhuqing. 2. Purpose. Zhu Zhuqing became stronger in order to control his life, but what about Ling Feng? I'm not bragging, the time traveler knows that the plot is all about me, the boss, Tian Lao Er, and Ling Feng doesn't have his own personality at all, and he has a happy-go-lucky vibe. 3. If I read correctly that Lingfeng's little plug-in is the overclocking mode, I don't understand why Zhu Zhuqing can do it casually, but you can't even create high-end operations like self-condensing soul rings and create deduction techniques by yourself? I don't see where Ling Feng's advantage as a time traveler is reflected at all. I don't know what to say, but this book is okay. It is a story about ordinary people traveling through time, and there is no so-called brainless aura. It is just a bit frustrating to read. Maybe it is because I am used to seeing Douluo fandoms all being invincible. I hope the author can control it well. I feel that it is easy to abuse the protagonist. Now I am very boring to read this book.

The advantage of this book is that its logic is self-consistent, but the disadvantage is that the characters are vague and the sense of incongruity caused by the vague characters. Why? It wasn't until I read the latest chapter that I discovered that this book contained almost no character's inner activities, nor any setting explanations or narration. The writing method of this book is to give a linear description of specific objects and events in time, especially when it reaches its peak after it is put on the shelves. Before it is put on the shelves, there is still a little inner description, but after it is put on the shelves, it is almost completely gone. The advantages of logical self-consistency also come from this, but so do the disadvantages. For example, when the protagonist let the two children go, there is no psychological activity of the protagonist. The original text is that the protagonist found out that someone discovered his identity, but ignored him, and then it was over. Why did he let them go without writing about it? Another point is also caused by the lack of psychological description. So far, the protagonist has no goals and no "roots". It seems inexplicable. He is not serious about doing something. For example, the protagonist becomes a teacher. After achieving the goal, he stops doing it seriously, and then becomes a student. When someone asks questions, he does not respond. Let's not say whether this kind of character is lovable or not. It is understandable to step away after finishing what you want to do. What happens after that? After withdrawing, the protagonist did nothing and spent more than ten chapters like this. The whole story is: I don't want to go, but I have to go, it's so troublesome. I don't know what other people think. Anyway, I was infected by negative energy after reading this. It's not that you can't have no goals. You can have a plain and ordinary life, but the author doesn't write about daily life, nor about emotions, nor about any warm little stories... There is really no goal to write, and even "wanting to be ordinary" can be a goal, but the protagonist doesn't even have this goal, and has become a tool man, which makes it look very dry.

Why do I feel more and more frustrated the more I look at it?

It's boring, I thought I killed Zhu Zhuqing

I am very optimistic about this novel. The plot, setting, and logic are reasonable. There is no harem, and the character is not like the Virgin or evil. It has a bit of conscience but not much. This book is not about the protagonist Long Aotian, and there is nothing forced to show off. I can only read the harem and Long Aotian's illogical and cool novels, and you can leave.

It's not a cool novel, it's not an invincible flow. The core of the story lies in Zhu Zhuqing, and the plot is based on Zhu Zhuqing's growth. As for the protagonist, I'm really unfamiliar with it The supporting characters are a bit OOC, but I can still see the shadow of the original characters. Due to the changes in the plot, the relationship between the characters has changed. There are also some subtle changes in the character The author's better grasp of the character is that he will not deliberately vilify the character and then slap him in the face. Therefore, there are very few particularly disgusting plots in the book. For example, Yu Xiaogang feels good about himself and thinks he is invincible in theory. Does Tang San understand that you already have a way to die? It doesn't feel like Douluo fans are making faces. If you want to read a pretentious slap in the face, or an invincible and refreshing novel, this book may not be suitable for you to read so far. I quite like it, but I don't know if it will suddenly take off. Sudden instant kill of Contra title, etc. The Douluo system is so big. Once you reach the highest combat power, there is nothing to write about. Most Douluo fans are invincible at the same level in the early stage, which is quite good. Later, they don't know how to leapfrog and kill people. I feel that after the protagonist is number one in the world, there is nothing interesting to watch. He is already so awesome. Whatever I write, I feel why I don't push it equally, or I just brag about the villain. I am afraid of this and that, and I am cautious. It gives me the feeling that I don't have to write anymore, it's just like growing vegetables, when the vegetables are ripe (their strength is reached). But if you don't harvest (end), the vegetables will naturally wither (unfinished)

If you reveal that Xiao Wu is a 100,000-year-old soul beast in a dangerous moment, how can Soto City still have the energy to care about you?

It was his sister who came from time-travel to pursue Zhu Qing. What do you think her sister would have died if she wanted to kill her? Even if Zhu Zhuqing was killed by Pig's Foot, would Pig's Foot have the life to take 100,000 gold coins?

The author should pay attention to who the protagonist is. Even if Zhu Zhuqing is the heroine, he cannot always write about her. He should focus more on the protagonist.

When encountering Tang San, the protagonist Triangle Cat Kung Fu can actually survive... Tang San is the way to get rid of death. Basically, meeting him is the way to get death. There are waves of poisoned hidden weapons. The other time travelers use plug-ins to defeat Tang San. The protagonist... I guess Tang San thought that the protagonist was taller than him, so he decided to kill himself by poisoning a whole city, and he also wanted to poison the protagonist.

In fact, the low popularity of the author's book is a good thing for readers. Most of the people who don't like it have been screened out, and the rest basically really like it. I am no exception. But having such poor grades makes me worried about whether it will affect the author. If the author becomes a eunuch because of such poor grades, then I will really feel bad.

After reading dozens of chapters, the protagonist appears more in the beginning, and Zhu Zhuqing is the only one in the rest of the time. I don't know what the author thinks.

I have no idea who the main character is.

Very good, there are no brainless cheats, the characters also have certain IQs, and there are no brainless tricks. The character of the protagonist is also good. Although he is a killer, his methods should be more ruthless, but people are contradictory creatures, and they will always make choices that they would not normally make based on their whims. Come on

The author is writing his own story, not just fan fiction.

This kind of novel is an excellent fan work in my opinion. It is logical and organized, and cheating is okay, but what's the point of pushing it all the way? Many fans can take a look at the protagonist's abilities and know what is going on behind the novel with their eyes closed. Many protagonists in fan fiction have no strength or background, so they deal with strong people and force their wits. In reality, people's hearts are unpredictable, and so are those in the world with extraordinary powers.

I feel that the plot is very floating and has no real sense. I feel that the protagonist is like a tool, with no main line, no core and no purpose.

The first thing is... The ending is complete, thank you for accompanying me~❀ Although I only started reading it after it was finished (very quietly) Then Did the author not want to write at the end of the writing?

In more than ten chapters, the character of the protagonist has completely collapsed. The killer turns into a bodyguard, the bodyguard turns into a nanny, and then the nanny turns into a dog licker. The description of the protagonist changes every time.

The protagonist does not have a soul ring that is more than 100,000 years old, which is too disqualifying. It is even more disqualifying than a ten-year soul ring.

When will the author publish a new book?

Rush rush rush!

To be honest, the author should not create too many suspenseful plots, as these have nothing to do with the main plot. Douluo is originally a cool article, and fan fiction is even more cool among cool articles. The most important thing is to advance the main plot. Write as little or even nothing about other things as possible. Emotional scenes can be written appropriately.

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