I Will Practice More During My Journey to the West

The biggest problem is that whether there is a data panel does not affect it at all. The protagonist is a traditional cultivator. The soul power that is useful is wasted in the early stage and is not given for half a day in the later stage. All realms are improved and the card is stuck. The experience bar is useless. The progress of magical skills also depends entirely on the author's mood.

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"I Practiced More in Journey to the West": A breakthrough work by an old author [Recommendation] The author's writing style has been tempered to be quite mature. At the same time, he chose the theme of Journey to the West to maximize his strengths and avoid weaknesses. He gave full play to his expertise in small plot descriptions in a world that everyone is familiar with. Judging from the data, there were more than 30,000 collections before it was put on the shelves, which is enough to show that it is very popular. [Theme] Xianxia·Fantasy Cultivation [Author] The Cat Dreaming in the Deep Sea [Number of Words] 305,700 [Story Background] When he woke up, Lu Fei came to a different world, turned into a little monster, and could see the attribute panel. Because of his yearning for cultivation and worries about his own situation, and because his cultivation results can be seen intuitively on the attribute panel, Lu Fei is very enthusiastic about cultivation. As the plot progresses, Lu Fei develops more uses of the golden finger, and the practice effect is remarkable. He gradually gathers some younger brothers and begins to secretly develop his own power... [Comment] The author of "Cat Dreaming in the Deep Sea" has already had three works before, two games and one Infinite World. Although they are only a few hundred thousand words, it can be seen from the writing that he has gradually matured. This time he tried to write fairy tales to try to make some breakthroughs. The Journey to the West theme has always been popular. Although it is difficult to break through if the writing is not good, it can indeed provide a lot of help to some authors in terms of world view. It can save a lot of descriptions of purely original world structures and quickly immerse readers into the atmosphere of the book. In terms of writing rhythm, this book can give the protagonist certain improvements or rewards in a timely manner, allowing readers to feel that the protagonist is constantly improving, and thus have higher expectations for him. The characters in the book all have above-average IQs. The protagonist Lu Fei is able to assess the situation even when his cultivation level is very low, and develops in a low-key manner, which is worthy of recognition. The book currently has more than 30,000 collections, which should be considered a good number. The book has been released on March 1st, and there are already a lot of words, so you can start reading. Recommendation Index★★★{"TopicId":"847235287436099584","TopicName":"New Book Trial Reading"}

I really like this book, please don't be affected by the reviews. I really like all the characters in the book.

The five demon kings of Langlang Mountain

Suddenly I discovered that the three protagonists are the fake youth versions of the Three Demons of Shituoling, Red Pig and White Elephant, Crow and Golden Roc, and White Wolf and Blue Lion.

When I read the latest version, I felt a little pity, because the writing skills in the later parts, starting from my apprenticeship with Wuzhuang Temple, were obviously already at the level of Wan Ding and above. The selection of golden fingers is inappropriate, the opening plot is slow, and the title of the article tends to be a pretentious white article with no brain upgrade, but the content is actually not and counterproductive, which can only be said to be a pity. I think this title and golden finger may have been done for the sake of early results after discussing with the editor, but I feel that with this kind of writing power and writing style, there is no need to do this in the next book. Try your own style, maybe it will be the next bad book.

Let me write a small opinion, it only represents my personal opinion After reading from the beginning, I saw many chapter comments saying "Why don't you use the master to crush the three monsters of the Great Wilderness Mountain", "The fox must not dare to kill the protagonist, why should you care about his face", "Will the protagonist be afraid of the Lion and Camel Ridge with the Wuzhuang Temple at his back?" Contrary to this view, I think the author's handling method is good First of all, we have to understand that Wuzhuangguan is a very low-key sect, and Zhen Yuanzi is also a very low-key immortal. Just because he protects his shortcomings does not mean that all his disciples can do whatever they want Secondly, the protagonist must not have been able to defeat the fox at the time. If this is a real world, are you so sure that a person who can kill you now will not dare to kill you because he is afraid of your background? The protagonist's background is Niu. If he is killed, he will die, right? Set up the background, let the other party be wary, and then do not anger the other party and coexist peacefully with the other party. This is the thinking logic of normal people We must understand that Zhen Yuanzi protects his shortcomings by saying "If a disciple is bullied, I will come to find him." "The saying" is not "disciples go make trouble, and then I help the disciples make trouble." If Zhen Yuanzi is willing to help the disciples make trouble, then Wuzhuang Temple will definitely not be a low-key sect, and why should the disciples be asked to climb mountains to train their minds when recruiting disciples? And if the protagonist is constantly asking for foreign aid, how can this book be followed up? The protagonist doesn't need to practice anyway, and if someone is protecting him, according to normal logic, if the protagonist troubles someone once today, others are willing to help, and if the protagonist troubles someone once tomorrow, others are willing to help, but what about the third and fourth time? The fifth time? The sixth time? Ask someone when you encounter something. What do you think of this book? And I also saw some people who said "Why not go to the Dragon Palace and the Underworld" who felt that the protagonist tossing around in the mountains and fields was too boring and the price dropped Should we consider the cause and effect when we do things? For example: Sun Wukong achieved great success and returned to Huaguo Mountain. The monkeys from Huaguo Mountain thought that the king should have a good outfit, so Sun Wukong went to the East China Sea Dragon Palace to "borrow" the outfit. Look at it this way, the reason why Sun Wukong went to the Dragon Palace was because "Monkey Monkey Sun said that the king had no clothes, so he went to the Dragon Palace to get a set of equipment." With this reason, he went to the Dragon Palace, and then he made a big fuss in the Dragon Palace The protagonist has now opened two new maps. Then the protagonist is lying in Wuzhuang Temple, and then suddenly thinks, "How about I go to the underworld to make trouble? How about I go to the Dragon Palace to cause trouble?" Is this logical? In the early stage, give the protagonist a human reincarnation, a clear distinction between good and evil, and a character with great perseverance, but later give the protagonist a behavior that loves to cause trouble for no reason? I do not deny that the author is naive in some places. I can guess that a brother must die before I can open a new map before I have read the latest chapter. I do not deny that some places are not rounded out, and I do not deny that the writing is short and honest. But at least for now, the rhythm and behavior of the book are generally normal, consistent with logic and character. Some chapter reviews are mindless in pursuit of a moment of pleasure. If written according to this, it will only lead to the end of the book.

Old man: Monkey King, your journey has just begun                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                 . The old man gave the monkey a mortal peach. After he got out of trouble, the monkey still remembered him and helped the old man fight the invading robbers. Alas. The monkey looks young, but in the eyes of the old, he is an old man.

In the early stage, it can be said that there are good books on the mountain. After becoming a teacher, it becomes more and more difficult. You either don't become a teacher. You can open the skill a little more, and it is easier to obtain soul points. You can use soul points to evolve magical powers and techniques. This way, the protagonist can be compared to the monsters with backgrounds. Then let the protagonist slowly work out Or don't go back so early after becoming a master. Why are you going back to be that monster general? His cultivation environment is still safer than Wuzhuang Temple. You can at least let him cultivate to the level of human immortal, or even divine immortal, or earthly immortal, but he has to be a little golden elixir demon, someone who is a little bit awesome and can step on his feet? It's really just food at the beginning, but it becomes more and more poisonous later on.

I forgot to put down what I saw.

Let me make it clear that the 36 Tiangang Laws are stronger than the 72 changes. This is a magical power, not a change. It is the universal view of most people at present. If you insist on something, this is what Wu Chengen said first, then why don't you find readers from the Ming Dynasty to praise your book? Writing must conform to the changes of the times and blindly focus on archaeology. Why don't we read history books? In addition, isn't it natural to use the sword of this dynasty to kill the officials of the previous dynasty!

In fact, in the original work of Journey to the West, monsters are not races, but names of behaviors. There is no demon, only spirit. The word "becoming a spirit" is used 42 times in the original work of Journey to the West. The word "become a demon" is a word that does not exist in the original work of Journey to the West Starting point Now you can watch Journey to the West for free

A group of monsters surround the building; It's a headache to think of a name. Is there any book friend who wants to be a monster?

Finished reading it, overall it's pretty good. Some people say that the ending is bad, but I disagree. On the contrary, I think most of the prehistoric novels are not as good as this ending. Many of the prehistoric novels end with the saints in the Three Qing Dynasties turning into chickens. It is really hard to read. Unless the protagonist was born before the creation of the world, he would be a quasi-sage until he died, and the level of Erlang Shen would be the end. It is unrealistic to punch Tathagata and kick Sanqing. The author did not make the protagonist feel aggrieved, nor was he willful enough to stop Tathagata from suppressing Wukong. And the ending is also wonderful. The title of the book is Journey to the West and it ends with Journey to the West. If you don't have a dog's tail to continue the mink, write the next part and it will be like a fairy. This one is really good. It's worth reading, and I plan to follow the author's next book.

The author wants to write about the love and justice of monsters But in fact Journey to the West is a suppression of monsters So the contradiction lies here As a monster who seeks immortality, it is quite contradictory whether the protagonist's position is on monsters or immortality Going to Huaguo Mountain was the instinct of human beings in the past At least when you have some ability, who doesn't want to see the Great Sage Going to Shituoling is the current status of monsters The monsters' preying on the weak lets the protagonist know that his level is really good It's not to the point of being a slut But maybe it's because the protagonist's realm is low that I value the monster brothers But in fact I feel a bit separated Like the three kings of Shituoling, they can all be regarded as authentic Xuanmen They all have resources and backgrounds But their realm is too high, and the protagonist's weakness makes people feel a bit unqualified. Faced with this situation, the first principle to let the brothers live well is not to bring them back to Longevity Mountain, or other methods. Although the golden elixir is already quite powerful for the brothers, from many perspectives, nothing can actually be changed. (Just think that I am helping the author wash it) I think according to the protagonist's setting, the current growth is quite normal. You can now participate in battles that you couldn't participate in during the demon general period. Your brothers are also in danger, and you have made some achievements in your own practice. In addition, the master's background is deep. This part of the cognition can indeed make people feel a little confused. So the protagonist can also understand these operations. The above personal opinions, you are right. I support different views. If you don't like it, just think I'm talking nonsense.

It's a pity to open high and go low. Fortunately, I stopped the loss in time and didn't book all the money.

If you are determined to seek the truth, you will stay in Wuzhuang Temple. Even if you go back to see your younger brother, you will just take a look. If they are doing well, they will go back to Wuzhuang Temple. The reason why they can run away is far-fetched. Can you run away when the gap between realms is too big? Are all monsters afraid of the protagonist's sect? This can still be explained if he didn't go to apprenticeship. When you seek the truth, seek it diligently, which is similar to three days of fishing and two days of posting online to tell others that you are serious. There is still a hookup with the snake girl. What kind of operation is this? There is no foreshadowing and even the protagonist does not like the monster girl. This plot is disgusting. In the past, the problems were small and could be ignored. This time, there are two big problems. If I don't revise it properly, the book will collapse.

The protagonist can stand alone on the top of a mountain like a black bear spirit, build a cave (of course excluding people who want to take the military examination and go ashore), usually fight monsters, level up, farm, practice, and slowly integrate into the journey to the west. When the monkey still has to knock down the ginseng fruit tree, give it some color.                                     ，，，，

I'm drunk. How can the seventy-two transformations of Earthly Evil be stronger than the thirty-six transformations of Tiangang? One is the method of a saint and the other is the method of a Qi Practitioner. There is no comparison at all. Also, the seventy-two transformations of Earth Evil are definitely not all transformation techniques. I am speechless and gave up.

Author, I feel like there are some problems with your settings. First of all, Wuzhuangguan should be the top boss in the world of Journey to the West. You are also the direct disciple of Zhenyuan Immortal. If you go to be the disciple of a wild demon king, does your master have to be equal to this demon king? In this fantasy world, the most important thing is the order of hierarchy. Do you think your master will beat you to death? Will your senior brothers beat you to death? You are insulting the master. Secondly, the protagonist was determined to follow the Tao in the early stage, and now he is hooking up with Mrs. Hua Snake. It is indeed a bit inconsistent. Is it because he can't control himself or because he feels that he can have a backstage? The master has clearly kicked him out of the master, so there are no taboos. Your master is still here, and you think your master will agree with you having such a Taoist companion. Refer to the legend of the White Snake. The white snake is about to become an immortal, but what is his status among those immortals? You will know how failed your writing is. Moreover, what you wrote at the beginning was not a happy novel type, but a struggle type, so it conflicts with your early settings. Third, the author should provide the protagonist with a good struggle route. Don't be unable to control the lower body even if you have some strength. It should be noted that people who are firm in the Tao have practiced hard for hundreds of thousands of years, not to mention those things. Taoists can do it, but what practitioners pay attention to is common progress and improvement. Finally, I hope the author can clarify his thoughts and wish the author's works will get better and better.

Don't write the name Lu Fei anymore, just call him Bailang. The two names are always exchanged. The key point is that they don't have any special meaning. After a few chapters of formal cultivation of immortality, there will be multiple Taoist names. I really feel that there is no need to use so many names.

The latest pictures clearly show that the protagonist is also a troublemaker. Why did he lick Sun Wukong in Journey to the West? He knew that he wanted to rebel against Tianting, but he still went to join in the fun. Zhen Yuanzi is Zhen Yuanzi, and Tianting is Tianting. If you do this, you are causing trouble for your master. You haven't even graduated yet. The ancestor of the Earth Immortal must also be given an account. If morality cannot stand, won't he have to suffer a loss?

Afterword: It can be said to be a high-quality book before it is put on the shelves; it is not recommended to watch the paid chapters. Those who do not believe in evil can buy forty or fifty chapters and take a look. It is a mess and there are traces of changes in many places. However, the preface does not match the postscript, and some parts are just nonsense. I am angry that a good quality book is ruined like this. I watched Chapter 160, bye

When I write about the time when Sun Wukong comes to meet the protagonist and kneels down to him, the plot after that is really a mess and I can't watch it at all. He has to get involved in the trouble in the Heavenly Palace.

It's a pity to drive high and go low. I gave up after seeing the roc defeated. The setting started to be unreasonable.

Book title: [Journey to the West: Starting from the Tiger Pioneer], 300,000 words have been added, and is being updated. If you are interested, you can check it out to see if it suits your stomach. There is a direct link in the post~~