Martial Spirit and a Gun Can Start a Thousand Times Ice and Fire Body Refining

Li Yusong is not that awesome, he can still find twin martial souls, why can't he find Tang San's? Don't you use your brain to write a book?

Can you get rid of Xiao Wu as the heroine? Is it interesting? There are also different lineups of female protagonists. When I saw that Rascal Rabbit was still the female protagonist, I didn't want to read this novel.

Author, take a look, the heroine Xiao Wu and Miss Ning have very little love, and they don't like you to tear down the CP of these two women. I simply don't like these two women, so I might as well divorce them and replace them with the Shui family twins, or Huo Wu, or Ye Lengleng, or Lonely Yan. They are both more popular than these two.

Six bombs, Shen Nong was killed

6. Author: This is the best book you have ever written. Stop writing it. I was born at level 20, took jelly grass and trained my body for 6 years, and I am only at level 40? Excluding the level 7.8 Provided by the fairy grass in 6 years, that is to say, it takes 6 years to upgrade to about level 12. This is still an innate talent of level 20.66666666666666666

In current Douluo fanfics, seeing Zhu Zhuqing as the heroine makes me sick, and I'm tired of aesthetics. I'm very curious, why do I have to lick a Douluo fanfic like Zhu Zhuqing? Wouldn't it be possible to write without Zhu Zhuqing? She is much more talented than Zhu Zhuqing, and in the anime, Zhu Zhuqing's character model is much better looking than her. Someone here said how hard she worked and how difficult it was. Alas, I am very confused. If you want to control your own destiny, if you don't work hard, who will work hard? I don't have enough talent, but I also want to control my own destiny. If I don't rely on my own efforts, how can I rely on love?

Six years and 16 years old, the protagonist is such a loser. There is also a cheating physique like the Poison Body. As long as the crazy Krypton Poison body is banned for six years, it is not a problem. The protagonist is so stupid and speechless.

This book is highly toxic, the plot is a bit taken for granted, and there is no foreshadowing. It is unreasonable and incomprehensible to believe anything Titled Douluo says. It is unreasonable and incomprehensible. After reading Chapter 11, I can't stand it anymore. It's hard to resist.

Dear author, have you ever watched the Swallowing Starry Sky? Can there be a plot about Devouring the Starry Sky later in this book? Xu Xin, Aunt Wenina, Janet, Jiang Fang, Enchanting, Zhen Nan...😍

Travelers should not join forces

The writing is pretty good, but there is indeed little foreshadowing and it looks bland. And there are many unreasonable settings. In the first chapter, a titled Douluo appeared to give rewards to the protagonist?

This martial soul skill has an effective distance, and it feels like the level has dropped a lot. In the early stage, the effective distance of the first soul skill is a lot, but in the later stage, it is still so many. You can't change it to the basic distance, and increase the distance and power with the amount of soul power.

It's really boring to see these guys again. First of all, Zhu Zhuqing's martial arts talent is really poor, Ning Rongrong will be a life-long level 79 thing without fairy grass, and Xiao Wu's status as a 100,000-year-old soul beast is a time bomb. There is really no need for these people to be heroines.

It's rare for someone to write a book so casually, and he can easily knock people away ten meters away. Why, is this person just cotton? Can't wear it? What body? They are ordinary people, and there are also first-level soul masters. Can you be more reliable? Even if you are hit by a car, you can't fly ten meters. How powerful is it? Ordinary people can fly ten meters and still not die?

The protagonist licks the Qibao Glazed Sect a bit too much. This kind of dog-licking story really makes people dislike it.

I came in by name, and then I saw that there was a system for kowtowing to Sword Douluo, and I couldn't accept it. People must have integrity and neither be humble nor overbearing, otherwise who would read a dog-licking article?

The rogue rabbit is the mistress's irritant

I was careless, I didn't miss it, I went from 24 episodes to 30 episodes in 6 years. 🙂