Travel Through Naruto and Unify the Ninja World

In the first few chapters, the protagonist practiced ninjutsu and was not discovered? Jinchūriki, don't the Sandai and Danzo send people to monitor them closely? You suddenly practice ninjutsu, why don't you come and ask and investigate?

This plot, why does it feel like my name is Naruto Namikaze?

I seem to have accidentally deleted the comments of two book friends when I just replied to the comment. I am very sorry. I have adopted the suggestions of the two book friends and changed them in the second chapter. It is normal to have problems when writing a book for the first time. This book is originally used for learning, so I will refer to the book review regardless of whether it is good or bad and will not delete it.

If you want to follow what Namikaze Naruto wrote, don't commit his evil points. Momojiji is just talking nonsense and saying righteous words whether he should be killed or not, which is really disgusting. Also, the battle strength at the end was also severely reduced. Neji's reincarnated eyes could not open the chakra mode, and he could be held back by Jiraiya for a long time. The protagonist Liu Dao fights two super shadows, grinding and moaning, and the description is as if he is about to lose.

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