When You Are in Teyvat, You Can Draw a Lottery for Yangshou.

It feels like Sun Tzu started the game, got into trouble after time travel, was targeted all the time, and still stayed there to die. He was framed and had to prove himself, and he didn't owe the old demon hunter. Wouldn't it be nice to go it alone and farm monsters and then strengthen them? Why are you guarding a senior brother who cares about you, an old demon hunter who doesn't speak up for yourself (this old demon hunter is relatively strong, I really can't accept it, don't you know the virtues of your own children? You believe the protagonist when he says he uses the evil eye, and you ask with a straight face, how can you?), Just for those so-called secret skills that need to be used for a lifetime? Aren't Liyue's immortal spells, the spells practiced by the Yelan family and Chongyun better than these? Even if you learn the swordsmanship of the Guhua sect, you can become stronger. Why don't you learn the secret technique of Krypton's life? Wouldn't it be good to save your life and draw a lottery?

I push such a young seedling... I don't know what's going on. I can't see anything at the moment, just wait for the follow-up.

Look at the picture and guess the source

Let's put it this way, the routine is too old, the rhythm is too tight, and the protagonist's emotions look like a teenager pretending to be mature. This is exposed in the first three chapters and is suitable for writing in Feilu.

Brothers, let me ask you, I have the idea of ​​revising the article, and the outline has also been changed, and it should be changed to something like a peach essay. But once I revise the article, many things I have written now will collapse. I am afraid that I will not be able to take it back, and I will cut it when the time comes... But after all, I still don't want to cut the first book, so I want to ask for everyone's opinions. Should I change the article, or should I just start a new book (?)

Author, although you are a second author, you must base your opinion on the facts. In Liyue, generally speaking, the names of the characters are Chinese style. It is a bit strange that you have two foreign names.

Happy New Year everyone, I wish you good health and all the best!

Now that I've seen it, I'm an old fan.