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After reading Chapter 13, tell me your feelings.
It's rare to find another werewolf of this type. But I didn't feel comfortable watching it, maybe it was a personal problem. When I saw the stars were all written with "stars", I felt a little weird (maybe it's because I don't like so many repeated words in one chapter). But I can bear to watch it. But I couldn't stand it any longer during the rest time. In a chat room with a number of comments, the male protagonist actually answered all the questions, and many people answered them at the same time, one sentence at a time. It feels very bad to the senses. I feel like the players in this chat room are just a bunch of fools. I can accept it if they are all new players, but I can't accept it if there are also old players who have played several games. I think it would be better to explain it as a high-level veteran player to gain popularity. . . I haven't read it yet, but when I saw in the comments that it would be an independent world without its own follow-up, my expectations for this book dropped a lot. Because in this game, as long as you have points, you will not die, the tension is not enough, and the sense of anticipation is average. I don't know if I will continue reading. I'm a little bored now, so I'll save it and see if I'll be interested in coming back to it in a few days.
I have read many werewolf novels, and this one is the type I like to read. The protagonist does not have a golden finger like opening eyes, but the protagonist must be strong and logical. As long as you keep writing as you are now, you will definitely read it. Some suggestions, if you like reading this kind of novels, you also like to watch the game. You can make some extra worldviews to fill in, but don't make too many extra worldviews, because the expanded worldview of Werewolf is not very interesting. Don't write a heroine or create a harem just to force the plot to be a bitch and flamboyant, because it's easy to subvert the character and make the character look awkward, and it won't sound sweet but will only make you feel awkward. If you just want to be happy for yourself, then write whatever you want. If you want to write some achievements, please think about the audience of readers of this book.
This kind of subject matter is relatively niche and difficult to write about. A pure game session would be more exciting but less exciting. It would be nice to add some original plots outside of the game. Werewolves invade the world. Hidden wolves hide in modern cities. Werewolves come out and kill people at night. You can get special cards or abilities by playing games. For example, if you draw a hunter card, you can get a hunter's gun and bullets. Only the hunter's bullets can kill werewolves. If only the game session has dangers, then I think it will be too monotonous. Of course this is also my own opinion. So far, this book is quite good, protect seedlings🌱
The brothers have finished testing the poison. To sum up, the other Werewolf book can be deleted. I didn't have a choice before, but now my opponent has come and I have to decide!
From a novel perspective it's not bad, but from a Werewolf perspective it's just average, like a novice game
I've read the third chapter, I can die, it's a poisonous book You are a prophet who hunts down werewolves, and you ask the werewolf police to take pictures of their identities. The good guys in the back don't talk about this explosive point. Now the threshold for writing about werewolves is so low?
Let me remind you that the first book about werewolf killing is the book please start your performance. Don't read it. It's a forced wit and a hard lick!
What does it say? The wolf gun is brought by guards but not by hunters?
The second pure werewolf novel, well written.
Isn't the part about the gravekeeper too deliberate? The three good people are gone, the werewolf has a police badge, and if you can't tell the difference between Da Lang and the 912 call may indicate his identity, No. 4 Can be placed outside and belong to the same position. Look at the protagonist and No. 8 Ticket types to distinguish Da Lang... There were only nine on the field at that time. Now, Shiro of the Wolves team has a police badge on the scene. The protagonist, Dancing Dalang, can tell who is real and who is fake if he doesn't follow the number 4 return vote. It would be better if he follows the number 4 vote. It directly controls the field with 5.5 Votes to produce a good guy. He will continue to return to his position the next day. If Dalang is put at the end, wouldn't he win directly?
The novel is still good. After watching two episodes of Beijing Masters, I found that the novel is still restrained. At least there are no outrageous operations. A witch infiltrates the wolf team from the time she goes to the police to wash the head of a rebel policeman with the werewolf. Then the bright wolf on the non-toxic field sent away a prophet who was against the four wolves. There are a few others. The woman did not say anything about her gangster deeds throughout the whole process, and the votes she cast were inconsistent with what she said. It was a matter of whether she wanted to vote or not. There is no doubting her in this way. If I don't send her into the wolf pit, I won't be able to watch the game anymore. I'd better read my novel, my heart can't stand it.
Let me give you some objective suggestions. I hope you can add your own original world view and create conflicts between factions. If you only write about the game part, there will be no ups and downs and no highlights. But I think there should be some. Should we wait until we get ten stars before introducing the world view? To be honest, it's a little slow. At present, there is only one main character, and the portrayal is less. It does not stand up and does not reflect its characteristics. For example, his dirty tricks are not reflected. I hope it can reflect the characteristics of the character and make it easier to remember him.
I still think there is something wrong with the 11th game. There is no problem with the protagonist being the policeman and standing on the side 1. However, in the tie PK, it is actually because 1 dares to fight the wolf pit and is a prophet, but 12 does not dare to fight. This is not logical. Everyone's operation and habits are different. It is wrong to use this to distinguish the prophet. In addition, the identity of the wolf is obvious at first glance. It is too bad to speak, but it is still promoted. (Besides this, I also have a personal opinion, that is, the protagonists should not all stand on the opposite side. This would make more sense. Otherwise, the protagonist will know who the prophet is, and it will be too easy to find wolves. I hope the author can consider it!)
I feel like the Gargoyle Gravekeeper's board was a bit of a failure. It can be seen that the author's level of werewolf killing is not low, but the Gargoyle board seems to be unfamiliar, and the use of functional cards is a bit taken for granted. If the gargoyle can test people, it must jump to the seer? In fact, the gargoyle's aggressive jumping can easily disturb the werewolf's perspective. Because it's really unclear, the tombkeeper must jump out and look at the perspective? The tomb keeper is not a knight. The knight does not know if he does not activate his skills. There are also guards. The correct way to play the tomb keeper is to guide the good people to stand aside based on the information, rather than stupidly jumping out to find a knife.
To be honest, I'm not afraid of your word count. At least one game should be written in a week.
Chapters 109-110 are narrations on the world view (which I feel are really worthless). If you are not interested in reading, you can not subscribe. This is to save everyone; (What kind of inexplicable icons popping up on the body are the products of insanity? This is too embarrassing.) To be honest, this kind of novel originally did not expect the author to write the parts other than the game well, and everyone is basically not here for this. It can be understood that the author wants to explain the world view in a self-explanatory and reasonable way, so that the work can have Depth, unfortunately, I don't really have much personal interest in it. Some of the depth shown now has been played badly by Infinite Streaming for several years; Although it is always said that the other book was because of the female protagonist's intelligence, which is indeed the case, but I actually think that the regional joint knockout competition type written in that book is not bad. If the author wants to use off-site factors to introduce pressure and increase the atmosphere, it is an option. On the contrary, it is a bit awkward to carry out some tasks that are not completed or die immediately.
I don't know why you set up werewolves to self-destruct in the second game. In the case of 9 people, four wolves, three civilians and two gods, or four wolves, two civilians and three gods. No matter what, the werewolves have the upper hand. If you dare to jump the gargoyle, you have to match the ticket with me. If you don't match the ticket, it means you are not a gargoyle. Then I will know who the real gargoyle is. At night, I will directly drop the witch card reported by the real gargoyle. Just get up during the day and listen to the information reported by the real gargoyle. You can just blow yourself up. If you can't tell the gargoyles apart, let the werewolf blow himself up. At night, the suspected gargoyle will drop a knife. Did you write this because you treat everyone as an idiot?
The game of Miracle Merchant was too screwed up, it was a fateful duel, and they were all veteran players playing like this? No points will be deducted! So irritating Bye
Let me ask a question, in the 13th game when the wolf and bear were planted, why did they use the knife witch instead of starting to slaughter the people? At that time, the male protagonist had already recognized everyone's identity, and No. 3 Was the anti-push position. After the knife people pushed No. 3 Away, wouldn't it mean 2 wolves and 2 people? The protagonist can win by just blasting and slashing. Unexpectedly, he had to add one more round and was almost pushed out.
After watching two games, I feel the level is so low.
I'm scared to death when I look at the author's statistics. There's nothing we can do about monthly ticket rewards and subscriptions. Let's brush up the interaction volume and fan data. I just found a few online pictures and deleted them (? If you're not the author, why don't you create a character? Otherwise, how can I brush it up)
I'll give you three monthly passes, but the updates aren't enough.
Afraid of Raising Death I caught up with the latest chapter! For me, this rhythm is just right, and there are no verbose things about love and love.
Update quickly. If there is an outbreak, there will always be something in stock.
What are these recent posts about? . . Two games in a row were too watery. . .
It's well written. I love reading it. I hope there will be more chapters. I can't eat without reading it for a day.
No need to look at it, the protagonist has a rubbish identity, and he can still be ordinary. Who the hell cares about ordinary people?