
The Peerless Patriarch of the Tang Sect God
绝世唐门神之牧首
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- Completed
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- 329k Words
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- Light Novel
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- Male
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- Fan Fiction
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- 3y ago
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- Qidian
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The ice god's inheritance place may be in the Wanzai Xuan Bing Kiln in the far north where Tianmeng Bingshen stayed.
There is no Ice God in the God Realm. Tang San had rumors outside the God Realm, but there are rumors of an Ice God in the Far North. The Titan Snow Demon King among the Three Kings of the Far North also has the blood of the Ice God, so the Ice God exists, but the Ice God has fallen. Maybe the Ice God is the god of the soul beasts, so some of the soul beasts in the Far North have the blood of the Ice God. Huo Yuhao, before the third son of the Tang family did not change it, the god he set was the Ice God, so the inheritance of the Ice God Huo Yuhao must go to a familiar place, but the three kings of the Far North don't know where it is. According to the inference, it is the most reasonable to be in the Wanzai Xuan Ice Cave where the Tianmeng Ice Silkworm sleeps every day and eats Wanzai Xuan Ice. Because Tianmeng often sleeps and does not explore, it is not clear. It is reasonable, but he also knows where the Wanzai Xuan Ice Cave is, so it is a hidden line. The same is true for the Ice God inheritance place, which can only be in the Wanzai Xuan Ice Cave. Therefore, the third son of the Tang family did not change the original setting that Tianmeng and Yuhao came to the Far North again to complete something, but an accident happened and they fell into the gap where Tianmeng fell into. They returned to the Wanzai Xuan Ice Cave where Tianmeng Ice Silkworms eat black ice every day and sleep. They discovered that the Three Kings of the Far North had almost found the entire Far North. The inheritance place of the Ice God turned out to be underground, and it was in a small Wanzai Xuan Ice Cave. It was very reasonable.
Question one, where is the Wanzai Xuan Bing Kiln? Question 2, who is the Ice God? Where is the inheritance of the divine throne? Question 3, is the Golden Dragon King male or female?
After reading Chapter 19, I was confused. The character is a person who has traveled through time for several months but is still too young to dare to do anything. His personality is still a coward. There is no main plot. He knows the plot but has no brains. I don't know why the protagonist knows what a cheat is. Why are you still thinking about your Douluo power system? Fantasy. Sewer, not to mention that you have no equipment, no level, and no skills now. Later, when you get up in a random place, the Douluo system is not just casual fighting, but also professional. Dad, not to mention that cheats ignore restrictions and so on. You can resist and fight. Also, you have no weapon restrictions. Does the weapon you take really have no attribute bonus? Epic? There is also the issue of props. With so many DNF props, there are always one or two that are unparalleled in this world. The protagonist can almost go up and do three geiges as soon as he sleeps...
Author, do you know what you are writing? There is no main plot, and the settings are incomplete. You didn't even clearly explain what your martial soul is. I won't go into detail about the world view and the creation of the character. You can't understand these things, and it's in vain if you write them.
I suggest that the scene of the Soul Emperor fighting Soul Douluo be changed. How could a bronze-awakened Soul Emperor fight a Soul Douluo-level evil soul master for so long? His methods are even weirder! In the early stage, the main spirit can skip levels because the quality of the spirit is high and the effect on the body is very large. The spirit ring can also be absorbed by leapfrogging. But in the later stage, at the level of Soul Douluo or Titled Douluo, which spirit is of lower quality? Which talent is bad? It is recommended to change Soul Douluo to Soul Saint. If that doesn't work, change Bronze Awakening to Silver Awakening, or change Soul Emperor to Soul Saint.
What are you writing? I really know that Douluo can write less, but this DNF is really poisonous. The first chapter relies on cheats to watch the natives, which is interesting. This is stinky and long in Douluo's abyss. If you like to fight in the abyss, you can directly travel to Arad. When writing cheats, you have to insert other worlds into it. It's so poisonous.
To be honest, I didn't understand it at all, or I was just confused because I had never played dnf before.
Does the author overestimate the combat power of Douluo Continent? I think Douluo is invincible at first, but then he kills gods like dogs when he wakes up.
Some professional Sanjue have become agents of God, and some have conquered the entire back alley with bricks and tiles 🙂
I looked confused here. I don't even know what Wuhun is. I only know that it is the spiritual system. I don't know about the soul skills. It doesn't make sense. I read it twice. I don't even know what the martial soul is. I don't know what the soul skills are. I only know that it is the spiritual system. I look confused.
There is also a bug in the original book. According to the population of hundreds of millions mentioned in the book, the economy will definitely collapse. After all, buying a Conferred God Platform can cost hundreds of millions, which is outrageous. I think it can be changed to several hundred million for soul masters and tens of billions for ordinary people, because most soul masters are cannon fodder at the bottom, so this ratio would be much more reasonable?
After reading Chapter 19, I still don't know what the main plot is.
I'm very curious about how old Zhang Lexuan is. She was already level 80 or above when Huo Yuhao was 12, so she was at least 24 at that time, which means she was 12 years old than Huo Yuhao. The protagonist is almost 4 years older than Huo Yuhao, so she is 8 years younger than Zhang Lexuan? How did this happen?
Did you make the game level equal to the Douluo level?
Let me take a blind guess, is this book a single heroine, a post-official novel, or multiple heroines? Let me make a blind guess. The first rule is to rule out a single female protagonist, it is impossible to have no female protagonist, and it is impossible to have a queen and multiple female protagonists. One of the female protagonists must be more than two. Am I right?
Author, I'm talking about the Ten Thousand Years Mysterious Ice Cave in Tianmeng. There are so many Ten Thousand Years Mysterious Ice Creams and Ice Divine Crystals there, which are enough for every ordinary soul beast in the far north to rise to the one-million-year soul ring level. There must be a reason for having so many of these things. Don't forget the Dragon God War in the Douluo Continent before, so The City of Slaughter, the Eye of Ice and Fire, the Valley of Qian Kun Qing, and the Dragon Tomb are all treasure places formed by the fall of the gods and the place of inheritance. In addition to the Lake of Life, a forest that has accumulated over hundreds of millions of years, every drop is water of life. There is even life force at the bottom of the lake condensed into solid living gold. The Wanzai Xuan Ice Marrow is either the place where the Ice God fell, or the place where the Ice God inherited it, or it is an accumulated treasure like the Lake of Life. The ice element and water element accumulated over hundreds of millions of years are combined and condensed to form the energy required to make a low-level ordinary ice soul beast leap to the million-year level. No matter which one it is, no possibility can be let go. The premise is that you have the ice or water system to have the greatest effect. Because ice water is like this, and it is colder than water. This is true. 🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔
Emmm, after reading about half of it, I actually think that in this type of fan fiction, the power scores should be biased towards the direction of the original world rather than the imported world view, otherwise it will easily collapse. This book feels that the early plot is too DNF-oriented, so the power increases too quickly. In this way, the original plot will need to be completely revised. If it is not good, the book will be gone.