
One Punch Man Lu Mingfei
一拳超人路明非
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 120k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 3y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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The writing is okay, at least it has some logic. It's not like Lu Mingfei's return from One Punch Man, which is a bit flattering to say that he is a novice. Although you are also a novice, you can still read it. At least there is not so much nonsense. I hope the author can write the plot well. The protagonist can be strong but not too brainless. Also, you can't write about emotional pig's feet without losing your IQ🙏
This is even more painful than the original. The protagonist is a bald man who was first killed by Odin Gossamer and Chu Zihang's biological father in front of him. Then Old Tang invaded Kassel and forced the whole painful plot to come out. Poor grades are not without reason.
I want to see the earth parted in the middle
Come on, please post more😡😡😡
Is there any place Lu Mingfei hasn't been to yet?
It feels the same as the original, nothing has changed. The author wrote an invincible novel like One Punch Man but did not dare to change the plot of the original work. Odin killed the monster with one move and insisted on following the plot, leaving the protagonist frustrated. Makes me feel a little uncomfortable. But the author, please keep writing
After reading it, Liu Shui Wen basically follows the route of the original work. There are too many other two settings. Invincible Flow does not look like Wudi Flow.
Since I am following the invincible style, I will go straight to the invincible style. At the beginning, I arranged for the protagonist to be defeated by Odin. What do you think? He said he was trying to make up for his regrets, but he still couldn't be saved.
Shock the billions of people on earth with their bald heads!
Is there a female protagonist? Single heroine or harem? I hope Lu Ling or Lu Nuo, the heroine, are tired of watching the little monsters. You can also use other ones.
It's completely like One Punch Man transformed into Lu Mingfei
Now that I have read Chapter 35, let me give you a brief review Xiaobai's writing style is very average. The dialogue is awkward and interspersed with various superfluous plots and descriptions. The more you go to the back, the more you let yourself go and become more and more perfunctory Many characters are also strange and deviate from the original work. The plot is also a bit cliché. The protagonist is an idiot when it comes to emotional problems. Since the author does not plan to write a female protagonist, he will reduce Lu Mingfei's interaction with other girls and focus on advancing the main plot. What you said is a bit unpleasant, I hope it can be improved.
No, I want to see countries organize lunar exploration!
Eriyi competes high!
Ah ah, Lu Mingze, do you know that the prophets will fight each other every time they see one?
I feel that none of the recent books about Lu Mingfei's return are as good as this one. They really nailed Lu Mingfei's bad guy character. This one is really pure Qi Yufeng, and there is another one about Lu Mingfei's pure defense. The first one is so passionate, and the second one is so passionate.
Very well written, hopefully it will become a hit
I really hate this Lu Mingfei's aunt.
The writing is good, can it be worth 10,000 per day?
I feel that the writing is a bit abrupt and sudden. It's really you. From the first year of high school, I thought you had written about a happy high school. Unexpectedly, you had some contact with your senior brother and broke off immediately. Write a Saitama version of Lu Mingfei with hair, that's not bad
Let's just change this to Saitama traveling through the Dragon Clan. It's a bit strange when he suddenly becomes stronger.
Lu Mingfei, who came back from the one-punch world, fell down
Lu Mingfei adds another general to the universe