Luoyang Is Five Thousand Years Old

I would like to inform everyone that since the author is currently a graduate student, the updates may be irregular on weekdays, but I will write as much as possible and ensure two updates as much as possible. I hope everyone can continue to support~! Give Luoyang a chance. Now that I have written it, I must have the attitude to write it well. Only with everyone's support can I and Luoyang go forward together. 😡

Signing Post Luoyang has signed a contract. I didn't expect to reach the 30,000-word signing threshold. First of all, thank you for your support! Thank you very much for your recommendation votes and for those of you who can't bear to sweep Luoyang off the bookshelf! Whenever I ask for tickets in the future, I have to shamelessly ask for an extra monthly pass~! I wish you all good fortune and happiness~ Happy New Year in advance.

You asked me to take a look and I took a look. Now that you have signed a contract, you have to think about going further, right? When writing a book, you have to consider the look and feel. You can't just write it yourself. You have to think about how the readers will feel after reading it. For example, this technique, there are so many skills reported at once, and there are explanations. Will the readers have the patience to read it, and will they not be able to stop reading it? I can remember that this row feels pretty awesome when I flip through it. The author's writing is first-class, but if you don't read it, you just flip through it. The result is definitely not what you want It seems that there are a lot of fighting scenes now, and there are too many explanations in the current fighting scenes. You have to write scenes and shots to give readers a dynamic vision as if they are watching a movie, instead of It's a turn-based explanation It depends on you after five chapters, who is the male protagonist, what is he going to do, or is he the Riddler? In the sixth chapter, he suddenly returns to reality and complains about the hero. He still doesn't know why. He has the strength of an outsider and is so strong that he can't find any meaning. It's hard to continue this look. The suspenseful Riddler needs to be linked one by one, so let's not talk about it. What sense of urgency, at least let readers see the clear tasks of the characters, not so loose and aimless That's what I saw, the writing is very good, think more about how to tell the story in your heart to the readers clearly, instead of emphasizing the sense of atmosphere, first be a simple and unpretentious presenter, come on

I found it, I found it {"TopicId":"833954779428028416","TopicName":"Recommendation"} The selection of "Five Thousand Years Old in Luoyang" on the mobile client - Category (Urban) - Popular serials - After clicking in, the first place (˵¯͒¯͒˵)~ Give me a big call!

How can I ask the author to add updates? 🤔. Let's brainstorm

This update speed can't keep up with the speed at which I read novels. Please update as soon as possible!

Wow, I want this too. I'm so envious. Damn it (*￣m￣). I'm going to publish a new work. I don't know if it will pass the review? Wooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooong, but I must also support the author greatly

[The Importance of Pursuing New Books] Thank you all 😡 Now is the time when we urgently need to read~ Listing!

It's wonderful, so wonderful. It's the kind of style I like. I watched it from beginning to end in one breath.