After Gaining Wealth and Freedom, I Became Deeply Affectionate

The book is good. I hope I will never accept my ex-girlfriend again. Now that she has written well, let her exit (the author has not written it now, mainly because some other authors have written similar ones before, and I am a bit scared)

I still feel that the author's writing skills are definitely good, but the overall writing style is a bit weird, and it's not very enjoyable to read. Maybe it's just not refreshing enough. I feel that the author will change his writing style when writing the next book, and it will definitely be more attractive.

Wow, it's so uncomfortable to read. Does it feel like a campus romance novel written by an urban tycoon? I read more than 500 chapters, but I didn't see a single happy point. They were all about daily love affairs with girls. Lots of nonsense. The happy points about career were skipped directly. The happy points about life were skipped. The cool points brought by the cheating system were not there. They were all inner monologues and narrations about love. The personal style is so strong that you can describe a female supporting role in 30 chapters for dating. If you use too many words, it will make people feel confused and confused. Do you want readers to read it with the attitude of reading and comprehension when reading a great article? The start is really amazing, but it's a pity that it starts high and goes low. The writing is also good, but it makes people more and more uncomfortable. I'm really going to vomit blood.

The writing is good and the setting is good, but it doesn't feel like a cool novel. It's a bit literary and youthful, and the plot is a bit messy.

After reading the free chapter, I was a little confused. What is this talking about? What's even more amazing is that I can't remember the previous part after reading it!

It doesn't feel smooth, and it's a bit uncomfortable to watch.

It's so procrastinating. A date with the heroine An Ruo actually took 15 chapters. The 300-chapter storyline only progressed for two or three months. The plot advances too slowly. If you write 2,000 chapters this way, it won't even end.

The college entrance examination of Chapter 140 is over, and the results of Chapter 320 are out. It's not a big problem to write 8000 chapters in such a simple way.

In the process of writing about one woman, the other women all disappeared, and even their names did not appear in dozens of chapters. The plot was written in such detail. I only reached chapter 140 before the plot progressed a little. I feel like I could write this book in 10 million words.

To be honest, it really annoys you writers who think you are self-motivated. One person said it and two people said it. So many people think there is something wrong with you. Do you still think there is nothing wrong with you?

The beginning is really good, but by the end of the writing I have no desire to read anymore.

The writing is very strange, hard to describe in one sentence😕

My current feeling is that some content is unnecessary. For example, in these chapters, an inexplicable female character named Gu appears, there is also this inexplicable large-scale marriage plot, and there are large sections of reasoning content in the article. The writing of these contents feels strange. It is the kind of bland pretentiousness that is not very satisfying, and it does not necessarily promote the plot very much. It feels a bit inexplicable.

This book is a bit esoteric and I can't understand it. You can get a full share of shares by earning a career, right? And then you don't see how the protagonist earns a career. He keeps squandering, so why can't he get 1% of the shares to squander?

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Having been talking about love all the time seems a bit frustrating and not fun.

I read Chapter 60 and I can't understand what kind of protagonist you want to describe? What about the affectionate introduction? Even if he's not affectionate, he's still a scumbag... What exactly are you describing by cutting here and there? Or you can pursue a career in the system upgrade style and have a romantic drama at the same time. You have a lot of nonsense here, what are you doing? The insertion point itself is very tight. It was one year before the rebirth. Logically speaking, the timeline plot is very tight. You are just a confused protagonist doing confused things.

I didn't understand the story. The content was really confusing. Is there a main storyline?

When are you going to take revenge on Chen Daochuan for killing that Zhang? Please kick me, but I guess it's because a certain heroine surnamed Chen let it go easily. There are too many tricks like this. At first, she made a vow, but later because women treat persistence as farts.

The writing is good, but the pace is too slow. Too procrastinating

I feel that there are a bit too many logical explanations of mental activities and behaviors, taking up most of the space. It would be nice if they could be reduced.

I feel like the next few dozen chapters are pretty good.

Originally, the writing was pretty good, but I started to struggle a month ago. I didn't write the outline well.

Did Liu Jiaxin suffer any harm? In which chapter? Let me tell you, I watched it while jumping