Devouring Begins with Panlong

I've read dozens of chapters and can't stand it anymore. The writing is good, but there's no sense of immersion. The protagonist should have been set as a native from the beginning. Well, let's put it on the bookshelf...

About updates Lao Niu updates four thousand words every day. It is not divided into two chapters for the sake of plot continuity. As a part-time employee, Lao Niu considers himself dedicated. I never ask for leave, and I never update. Even if I come back late at night, I can code more than a thousand words. From the time I started writing books, until now, I still insist on typing even if I have a fever or illness. It's just a matter of how many words. In order not to handcraft, in order to keep updating. The last book was not brilliantly written, and the results were not good, but I persisted in finishing it. This will be the same principle in the future. I will never ask for leave. I have an old book that never stops updating for a day, and my words are tough. You can scold me for being a bad writer, but you can't scold me for not being diligent. Anyone who has written a book knows how difficult it is to persevere. Who has never had an emergency? Congratulations! Note: In the previous book, the daily average was more than 5,000 words. The specific data will be counted to single digits after the completion of the book and reported to the readers.

After reading more than 20 chapters, I feel that Buu is the protagonist, and the protagonist is just a tool that provides plug-ins.

Some books make me want to read them at first glance, while some books just can't be read no matter how much I read. This book gave me that feeling, and there was nothing that attracted me. What to do

This combat power positioning is too outrageous. In the original work, Linley has three lower-level gods, plus the will power of soul mutation, Augusta. You, the middle god of three lines of mutation, plus Dzogchen's 4+4 fusion mystery of water and fire, and 2 more willpowers of 4+4, you tell me that you have just reached the lower limit of the rule of law???

I don't know what I'm writing about, but the protagonist's IQ is inexplicably off the mark. Traveling through a different world, I don't practice cultivation, and I don't make money to settle down. I spend every day tinkering with my friends about what to eat. Looking at the catalog, I was baffled.

Just ignore the commemorative sticker.

After reading the introduction, I wanted to complain about the title of the Lord of Chi You, but it turned out that the protagonist's name was Moliqi! What do you think?

Who is the protagonist? It feels like Morich is like a cook. All the good things are given to Buu, and he is eating the leftovers. The benefits obtained from the same thing are not as much as Buu's. There are more descriptions of Buu than the main character (twenty pictures ago)

How dare you keep up with reading every update a day?

I was attracted by your advertisement and read it three times. Each time I couldn't read Chapter 30. I really don't know what you are writing.

The protagonist doesn't know the plot of Panlong, and doesn't know that this is the world of Panlong.

Brothers, Lao Niu has evolved! Lao Niu feels that there is hope for the 6,000 words in the third update, and it should be able to maintain it, and he will post it as proof!

I recently watched a movie, Coiling Dragon: The Storm of Okaron. It was very well written, with good writing and clear thinking. It is not a full system, nor is it a soul mutation. It only majors in the wind system. There is no main character who has not yet become a god. I feel that I will definitely achieve perfection. I look down on the main god.

The writing is unexpectedly good. It can be regarded as an independent novel borrowing the Panlong system. However, the title of the book sounds like shit. I suggest you change it to another one.

I don't know why, the writing is pretty good, but it doesn't feel engaging at all.

Why do I break sentences so frequently? Is it to make them look longer?

The Coiling Dragon is gone, and I don't really like the Devouring one, it's just that the Coiling Dragon is too short. Pity

The protagonist's name is too off-the-line and has no sense of substitution at all.

Life is a journey. How many reincarnations have we waited for the opportunity to enjoy this journey? We will eventually lose this short life. You might as well be bolder. Love someone, climb a mountain, and chase a dream.

I would like to recommend a star-swallowing fanfic - "The Mystical Powers of Flesh and Flesh of the Star-Swallowing Sky". The protagonist has obtained the inheritance of Pangu and practiced various flesh-and-blood magical powers to travel across the universe (special emphasis: there is no magic modification of the original setting). If you are interested, you can check it out.

Send me thirty-seven sheets. If you don't explode, you have no motivation. How can you subscribe and vote monthly?

I can't stand it, it's not interesting! Moreover, in the first chapter, he released his golden finger in front of people, and I was convinced!

I'm good at water. The water in Duandong River is really strong.

I also voted for monthly votes, but these are the two?

One chapter a day is so short, I can't keep up.

I didn't get the helmsman even after all the bookings were made, you can't do it (disgusted) . . . Come on next time

Ye Heniu is an excellent novelist. His works include: "The Devouring Begins with Coiling Dragon"/"Panlong: Proving the Way by Eating", "The Blood-hoofed Coiling Dragon"/"The Coiling Dragon's Bloodhoof Tribe". The novels are exquisite, each word is exquisite, the plot of the novel is ups and downs, exciting, and the plot and writing are excellent.