After Resigning, I Became a God

Now that I have finished reading the chapter, I would like to share my thoughts. Good points: 1. Although the subject matter is old-fashioned, urban literature has finally got rid of genres such as courtyard style, time-traveling business war, and time-traveling back to Xiaobai campus 2. There are not many brainless plots, and the narrative is okay Bad points: 1. In order to emphasize family, family affection, etc., Too many descriptions are made. It is estimated that more than 1/3 of the whole film is about the interaction between Shui and his daughter, which seriously affects reader retention. Many chapters are completely meaningless, and they are basically read quickly! If the daughter is not a key clue, it is strongly recommended to reduce the description and add more meaningful and informative descriptions! 2. I don't know what the context of the novel is. It just describes encountering ghosts, solving wishes, and getting wish points. If you continue to describe it, it will become boring and meaningless. Keep up the good work, author. At least the overall feeling after reading this article is okay. The above are all suggestions.

Childlike innocence, true love in the world, full of positive energy, so healing!

Monthly tickets for the first month have been provided

It feels a little off again. If it is not corrected, it will most likely be as hasty and messy as the last book. The reason why so many people read it is because each of the cute babies is wonderful in its own way and everyone likes it. Now that I have written this book, I want to write about everything, but how many things are there that are impressive or warm? Destined to be more than ordinary

As long as there is no water behind it, this book has the qualifications to become a god! ! !

The book is good, it can arouse your emotions, cheers you up.

I'll add a few more pictures, this fragment is a bit awkward.

A mature circle of book friends must have idioms. I wish all book friends will grow older and stay young, and be happy and carefree

The title of this damn book is really annoying. I didn't read the title three times, but it's really a good book. Can the author use snacks in his name?🤫🤫

This book has the potential to be popular, it is warm, it solves crimes, it has a nanny, it has cute cubs, it has spirit, it is cunning and it is tender. All it lacks is some silver tycoons. I am a poor person, so I can only talk about this book.

Already 47 chapters unread! The willingness to continue reading is very low, and I may give up. Why have we reached this point? After brushing up on ordinary humans again, I figured it out. Because of the lack of security. Not long after the protagonist got the jar, he had to go against the jar's eternal previous owner. Why should he win? Although I know I will win in the end. This is a story about a baby. If there is a strong opponent, why should you protect the baby? How to make people feel at ease?

The reality is already cruel. Many evil causes are forced out. The novel should be better!

The author can't figure out the point and doesn't have a clear positioning for the book. It's enough to write about cute children, help the villains fulfill their wishes, and help people fight injustices. The main theme is a slow daily life. What kind of villain should I write about? After the villain appears, the pace has to speed up. Are you fast or slow? If it's fast, it doesn't match everyday cuteness, if it's too slow, it's procrastinating.

All the settings of this book are okay. How can I put it? I feel that the protagonist Wei Guangzheng is a character in the book at first glance. Sometimes I can't relate to him. Also, he is not very interested in money. Do you feel guilty for taking money from the bad guys? Even if you don't take it, you still have to feel entangled! If these problems are corrected, the character will live. It is our human nature to be selfish! I'm not very good at saying that I can't express what I mean.

I think that after entering Taoyuan, the two plots were not handled well: the protagonist's wife should not return to the earth again. Although it sounds like a happy reunion, there is a difference between yin and yang. Just miss her. If it doesn't work, just let her stay in Taoyuan. Anyway, the protagonist can come in and out at any time. Secondly, the traveler is allowed to see his family at any time. If that doesn't work, just give him a day off. Again, there is a difference between yin and yang. Only by letting go of the dead can the living continue to walk on. You can't ask for anything, this is the normal state of life

In fact, I have always had a thought in my heart... Regarding the materialized Wei, does it have unlimited physical strength, does it work for free, is it... No, if I keep thinking about it, I will be hung up on the street.

Nuannuan

Dear author, my dog ​​that I had accompanied for 12 years and four months passed away last week. In the real world, I feel that the possibility of encountering it again is basically gone. Can you help me meet it again in the world of novels? Thanks.

Nuannuan~ Little cute

What is Chapter 525 about? Isn't it fun to write down the first girl who has an infatuated crush on the protagonist? After spending so much space on her, is this it? To contrast his unchanging love for his wife?

If you keep thinking about it, there will be a response~~~~~Boldly add another name and make a cover

Just add some refinement 😁

What a miserable man. His wife's soul has been occupied for twenty years, and her body has been resurrected and used as a concubine.

The author reads it to me, and I solemnly swear: starting from today, I will never update it. I will not watch dramas, travel, or get sick. I will play no games, no hydrology. Strict self-discipline, cherishing time like gold, perseverance, hard work, advocating first-class, striving for brilliance, taking pleasure in coding, being tempered into steel, and worthy of readers, worthy of youth, and worthy of the future. As an author, I solemnly swear: I firmly believe that I am an excellent author. Coding is my bounden duty. I have unlimited potential and am not afraid of hardship! I can code words diligently. I am a keyboard in the dark and a guard on the Great Wall of Internet. I voluntarily dedicate my life to code words every day and every night.

Why am I not in the mood to watch it? Let's complain about a few settings, 1: The heroine shouldn't die, and she won't have that happy and sweet feeling if she becomes a sly! And I personally feel that when the protagonist meets the heroine, he should not just write side stories all day long, but should mainly take the warm and heartwarming route. 2: You can set it up like ordinary people, setting up a prop to guide the way instead of driving out to try your luck all the time, resulting in only spending time with your children at night. 3: Although I don't want to complain, the protagonist's ability to make money is too poor! The reason is also understandable. It is set to cause trouble when driving everywhere! But after making money, you can still try your luck by driving an online ride-hailing part-time job. 4: The time I spend with my children is never longer than the time I spend with my children. The author deliberately ignored the entire day and focused on the night after running for an online appointment. It seemed like he spent a long time with his children, but in fact the whole day only lasted three or four hours. Even when the child wakes up and his father is not around, his first reaction is to go for an online appointment.

Battle

Where can I be happy, please update a lot, it is so beautiful, there is no book to read, in the new year, I wish you all the best and all the best, Let's try an idiom solitaire, I will be satisfied with 100 floors

Can I have a finer one?

On the 6th, all 14 votes have been cast...

I booked all ordinary tickets, 7 monthly passes. . . But I can only give away five. . . . How can this be done? I'll reward you with 5,000 points before giving it away hahaha