Traveling Through the Strange World, I Can Simplify My Skills

I read Chapter 9. To be honest, I felt a little uncomfortable reading it. I felt that each chapter was a bit stiff and fragmented.

The protagonist is like a nouveau riche. He teaches his skills casually and talks about everything. Holy Mother... Read another novel when you have time ~ Gou Becomes a Martial Saint in a Different World ~ You have to learn to follow the trend. You won't survive long if you treat time travel as a game. You are not cautious enough

I don't want to see reality being actively co-opted. How can I still act like a dog when I have the power? Isn't it right to go straight to invincibility and return to the rule of reality? Are you taking the initiative to be included? Disgusting people.

The male protagonist of this book is a pure virgin. He is a friend who has some friendships and wants to help others take care of their families and do something for others. It is difficult to live in this weird world. He also wants to help others and help the group. He blinded the golden finger. If he was not the protagonist, even if he had such a golden finger, he would have been tricked by others. The virgin heart is too strong, which is a taboo in online writing.

The protagonist couldn't find a girlfriend, so his father drank pills and committed suicide. What kind of nonsense is this? Do people like this still exist today?

What is the failure of this book? The personality is severely divided. One moment he kills people without any scruples and acts recklessly, and the next moment he chokes up. How can a protagonist with this kind of character be so good at being so good if he doesn't have a panel?

It's so poisonous. I tell others my trump card at will, hoping that the whole world will know it. You like to be a virgin bitch, the life and death of others has nothing to do with you, and you rush to give away secret books and experience, and a random woman can't control it like a teddy... People in their thirties still fucking cry and complain in front of others that their parents are not, and still shed tears, holy shit, one word, absolutely!

Everyone is mutual, and it is okay to do things for the government. What are the benefits? What about national merit? Is this a normal person who also provides free medicinal materials to time travellers? In reality, he is just a normal clerk who has gone to guide the world and become a holy mother? I don't know anything about social experience and the ways of the world...

If you die in another world, so will reality. With this setting, if you don't hide quickly, will you be ignored? Something is wrong. You are not the protagonist, how can you be tricked to death without even knowing it? If you haven't been tricked to death, I will give you a word when I come back. This is an organizational task. You must obey the arrangement and continue next time.

Officials are just like retarded people, they're gone.

What kind of parents is this written about? Disgusting batch

I don't understand why the protagonist feels so aggrieved when he didn't steal or rob. The author wants to write about human relationships, which is fine, but relationships take time. It doesn't mean that if I save your life today, you will be willing to die for me tomorrow. The feedback is not as fast as in games. In addition, the forces in reality are no longer small, but they have completely missed the pattern.

Generally speaking, it is of average level. There are some good things and some bad things. Personally, I am good at criticizing but not good at praising, so I will talk about the shortcomings. As for the realistic part of the plot, some of the plots related to Guo Jia are indeed handled in a general way, such as the shark people, the right of self-defense, contempt for the "natives", talking about family, etc.; And the family background setting is a bit inconsistent and does not match the "temperament" of the book. The alien part of the book is crisp and clear, while the family part is fragmented and muddy. The contrast is too obvious. I wonder if the author is "involving private goods". There are also a few bugs, such as the cultivation of spiritual level skills. The cultivation sequence described earlier is completely gone in the end. The protagonist even forgets that there is a cultivation sequence. To be honest, it is a bit uncomfortable to watch.

There began to be many gods, and the so-called real ecology was added. In the martial arts world, the strong were respected and the weak were ants. Secular laws and moral kidnapping cannot restrain them, they are all their prisons. I wish you a speedy eunuch death!

It doesn't look good. It's not scary to carry private goods. It's annoying to be annoying.

In reality, this is not necessary. . . . . .

It was so exciting in the first chapter, but how disgusting it was to read the eleventh chapter. The first ten chapters were cautious, violent like thunder, be stubborn when I should, be cruel when I should be, and once I returned to reality, I became two extremes with the other world, accidentally hiding, licking the official, official mentally retarded management, the heart of the Holy Mother, and all the poisonous points that should be written out.

If you don't travel in groups and don't write about reality, you can still read this book. If you have the first two things, forget it. You can't even dare to be a king in reality and defeat the enemy at a very close distance. What's the point of reading your novel?

This book advises you to give up as soon as possible and take a new class

Can't God write the plot well by describing the bad things that happen between men and women in detail? Now that men are all losers who care about lust, why don't they have no lower limit and write something happy and positive when life is not going their way?

After reading Chapter 30, I felt so wet and so poisonous.

Once you see Chapter 11, you will know what the answer is.

It feels like I am following the work of martial arts from another world.

The other world strikes hard, but reality is submissive. Blind guessing that the author wanted to write about reality, but was afraid of 404, and ended up writing something completely different. For example, how many zeros does a real national-level family have in assets? How many zeros can it reach this scale? Is it a few hundred million short of it? Looking at the IQs of several family members makes people anxious This is the first person in another world. The person in charge of the family is so short-sighted. Don't you know how to invest in the early stage? How to put it, I just want to write about bad people, but they are not bad enough. I want to write about the character of the protagonist, but I am afraid of being harmonious and making people feel awkward The overall situation is good, but I can't read it in detail For example, compilation, looking for weaknesses, auction of skills, the character of the protagonist, things that the family does It feels like a small family style, not majestic enough You are an organization, and the brains behind it don't know how to analyze the character of the protagonist and build a character model. I feel that the collection is too rigid, and conducting experiments in other worlds to find weaknesses is too childish. You used to have a monthly salary of several thousand, but I will give you tens of thousands now. You are satisfied, right? Wait, the plot is okay, but the small details are not handled well Overall I feel good, I will give you a monthly vote later But I can't stand it after seeing the auction, bye

Suspected of plagiarism, Gou became a martial saint in another world

No reader likes to see a protagonist who is extraordinary but still within the system. To pick one out of a hundred, the author wants to select high-quality readers! Another one is too high-profile!

It's a bit the same as the Martial Saint from another world. However, Wenrou Township has more water and

It's better to have one protagonist, and all the characters in the group are the protagonists

I voted for you with a monthly vote, I hope you can keep up the good work!

I really can't understand, the realm is too blurry? The fourth level of the Sun Scripture should break through and become the true element state, why not?