I Traveled Across the Stars by Controlling Beasts

This is the first time I saw a beast-control novel with a male protagonist It's a pity, otherwise I could have followed other beast-control novels

If you are optimistic about this book, I hope you can read the latest chapters and complete this follow-up reading. Because this is a very important process for an author with a dream, I will mention it a little here. As you can see, this is a new book with great potential, and it is necessary to continue reading it. Also, I am just an ordinary reader here, don't think about other aspects (I am not trusting you) This is just a very serious comment, and it can be regarded as a encouragement to the author. After all, there are many novels that start to feel weak in the middle period, and encouragement from book friends is also essential.

I'm a waste of naming names. If you have any ideas, please feel free to be bold (crazy hint)

Come on, author, it's very, very beautiful!

You can take a look if you like the little cuteness of the beast-fighting style (◦˙▽˙◦) (By the way, please ask the author for a highlight)

Yuzhu Wen Xiaomiao, please give it a try, the author.

Will you update it again? It's really beautiful.

First of all, because I am not the author, I just give a brief opinion based on my years of experience and intuition as a bookworm. I hope the author doesn't mind. I think that when the author describes how the heroine is excited, it is recommended not to cry every time. I know that the author wants to express the heroine's excitement, but it is recommended that it is best to express the heroine's emotions through other descriptions, metaphors and the like. As for the reason It's because the character of the heroine I see now is contradictory. The heroine suffered so much when she was young, so it will inevitably lead to various psychological problems. Maybe the author failed to describe this aspect, which leads to the character of the heroine being very thin in my mind now. Including the heroine's parents, brother, the pain they experienced in the years when they did not find the heroine, the joy, regret, anger, etc. Of finally finding the heroine, etc., I have not seen them all, including the brother. I think I can describe the brother's psychology, For example, 'My sister gave herself the only chance to escape. I clearly promised to find my sister, but it took so long to find her, causing my sister to suffer for so many years, but what about me? , Apart from not finding my sister, has there been any suffering in these years? Looking at my sister who was deeply troubled by the torture, she felt the pain gradually spreading in her chest. The hand hanging by her side suddenly grasped the clothes on her chest tightly. Like a sinner on the verge of death, her body had curled up tightly, but she was still begging for forgiveness, ah! What should I do? The overflowing self-blame and guilt are almost crushing me. ' Or 'Obviously I am the brother, why was I the one who ran away first, and I promised to find you, why did I wait so long, and we are obviously twins, why can't I bear your pain now, sister, I'm sorry, I'm sorry, I'm sorry...' Xingcheng In a daze, he saw someone holding his hand and pressing it against his bowed head. In a daze, his palms seemed to feel moist, and he felt the sadness coming from the other person's face. For some reason, Xing Cheng didn't want him to cry, but before he could say anything, his vision went dark, exhaustion hit him, and Xing Cheng fell asleep again. 'Sister, don't blame me, I should be happy, but why can't I be happy? ' Psychological descriptions such as this help to enrich the character's personality. At present, my biggest feeling is that the character lacks these side descriptions, resulting in a thin character. Now the heroine's parents and brothers give me the feeling that they are like a tool man's background board, with no sense of existence. I would like to state again that this is just my personal feeling and suggestion, and the author can take it for granted. 😌😌😌