Tang Dynasty: Zhenguan Begged the County Magistrate

Shuangwen, you can read it without thinking. With so many good things, can the rich and powerful be blind and not see it? Do you want to build a new city if you want to?

There were some unreasonable things, so I just couldn't bear it and kept reading until I saw the part about people redeeming themselves. The more I thought about it, the more unhappy I became.

Enlightenment? Beggar? If you don't even take the introduction seriously, how can you expect the novel to be good? Moisturized!

How should I put it? The development is too fast and does not conform to scientific laws. If you are not smart, you can take a look.

Every few chapters, the reader's resistance to toxicity must be tested, and how many readers will be left at the end?

I couldn't stand it anymore when I saw the young master at the beginning. When writing about the Tang Dynasty, you should at least understand the title clearly.

Your outline is really useful

Write some suggestions after reading more than 30 chapters Personally, I feel that the pace of the article is too fast, and what the protagonist has to do is done in one go. In fact, many of the things the protagonist had to do would have been difficult in ancient times. To use many technologies, we must consider how to adapt the technology to history. For example, like Pinyin, the tones in the Tang Dynasty were different from those today. If you want to use it, you have to adjust it accordingly. Just like the tones in many dialects today, you can't spell them out with Pinyin. There are many examples like this in the article. We should not use them as doctrines to believe that advanced technology will definitely produce the effect of dimensionality reduction. Write more about how to solve difficulties and solve problems step by step, and the article will be much more practical. Chapter 30 allows a place to go directly from solving famine to urban development, which is so smooth. Another problem is how to deal with the relationship between the characters. It seems to me that it's all a bit clumsy. The merchants just listen to the protagonist's plan and throw money into it. There is basically no picture of the refugees. Craftsmen can realize whatever the protagonist gives them, and historical celebrities appear like cabbage around the protagonist, but it's of no use. I hope my suggestions are useful and that subsequent articles can be written better.

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Why! ! Licking started. Can't watch it