All Heavens: Starting from Douluo

Alas, if the heroine is that Xiao Wu, then bye bye

Is it the same style as the major in the Royal Knights of the Church?

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I feel that the writing is a bit self-indulgent. I couldn't bear to see the protagonist in the library talking to Xiao Wu. I won't talk about Tang San and these people, which are a bit inconsistent with the original work. After all, Douluo's current reputation is well understood, and everyone has his or her own opinion. Keep up the good work, author, but this book doesn't quite suit me. Slipped away

There is a disgusting point. Every male in the original novel is black, and the female is relatively white. If you want black, you will be black, and if you want white, you will be white. This kind of different treatment is really disgusting.

The only flaw in this book is Xiao Wu. Why does the protagonist like Xiao Wu, a rabbit? The mainstream of Douluo fandom nowadays is to abuse Tang San and Xiao Wu, Ye Lingling, and Dou Dou. Aren't these royal sisters delicious? Another flaw is that it is clear that Shui Bing'er is the younger sister and Shui Yue'er is the older sister. Shui Bing'er is the captain of Tianshui Academy because Shui Bing'er is the strongest. Many people mistakenly think that Shui Bing'er is the older sister and Shui Yuer'er is the younger sister because Shui Bing'er has a stable personality and Shui Yuer'er has a lively personality. Many Douluo fan fictions also make this mistake. Only a few Douluo fan fictions correct it and explain.

Hmm... How about you become a master and open an academy with the characters of Jiang Ye and the divine inscriptions of the calamity of all races? If you can make ordinary people practice and balance the world, then you will be awesome.

The protagonist has a good gold finger but he doesn't know how to use it? Let's just talk about cultivation. The protagonist has low qualifications. What's wrong? Not to mention the Yi Jin Jing improves your qualifications. Directly embody a technique that can refine energy. Then a handful of Great Return Pills and a handful of Blood Bodhi. The level keeps rising. After all, don't you always accumulate energy and level up before becoming a god in "Douluo Dalu"? Not only did the protagonist find a place to retreat, but he went to the academy to talk about beasts with Xiao Wu, and to form some bullshit force? Can't the protagonist's martial spirit ask for information? Just ask if the place is safe, and then go into seclusion. You will be banned for one year, and the limit is three years. In four years, you can beat Qian Daoliu to his knees and call you grandpa. In ten years, you may be able to beat the God King until you cry and call him dad. With this method, you don't need to have much imagination. These are the most basic ideas. Can't you think of the main character? And can't the protagonist's eyes be cured by a drug? If it doesn't work, I dig out my eyes and replace them with a pair of Sharingan to make do with it. Maybe I can get double pupils later on, right?

This book can be called a stream of consciousness

I just read the first fifty chapters. The creativity of the book is okay, but the protagonist is too confident, arrogant and self-righteous, right? There is a feeling of being too superior. If you are strong and can explode with your martial soul at level 60 or 70, that would be fine. But at level 30, it feels like you have reached the sky. It really doesn't look that comfortable. And if you eat so much fairy grass, even if your talent is level one, you won't reach level 12 or 30, right? This talent has already improved after taking so much, and it is still very good. Yu Xiaogang and Nine-leaf Zhi can turn into a normal genius talent. This is outrageous even before it reaches the level. Moreover, Light Acacia Heartbroken Red can be easily upgraded to ten levels at a low level and is the same as playing. Didn't you forget that there is an upgrade effect? It stands to reason that it should be normal to eat so much and casually reach level 50 or 60, and then it is right to be so confident. And there are too many important plot points that are not written down, and then they are posted in the comment area, right? Some things still need to be written into the plot, otherwise no one will understand it. It seems that the preface does not match the follower, and the reading experience becomes worse. I don't want to criticize you, but I feel that this is indeed a shortcoming, and I hope it can be changed. It's still very innovative. I want to read it carefully. I also hope that some things can be changed, especially the protagonist who feels too arrogant.

To be honest, the first few chapters of this book are much better than most Douluo fans. Judging from the writing, the author is indeed not too old. But the same problem is to embarrass Tang San. Tang San really won't bully a blind man like you. As the village chief and a well-known good boy in the village, Tang San can't possibly destroy his own character. On the contrary, he may lend a helping hand to the protagonist, not because he is a good person. A good child who helps others when he is in trouble can gain sympathy and support from the village. He also helps the protagonist with just a little effort, but it satisfies his own spiritual comfort. Tang San: Everyone else bullied him, but I was the only one who helped him. You see, what a kind saint I am. This kind of mentality is most likely what Tang San would have. Let's talk about another point. Tang San in the original book almost ignored life. Except for Cheap Daddy and Old Jack, he didn't care about anyone else in the village.

Douluo Dou Po is a must-see

Did you suddenly go to Dou Er? Where did you end up in this fight? The conversion is too blunt. . .

The part where Jiang Nannan confessed was disgusting to death. In the original novel, Jiang Nannan didn't know that Xu Sanshi was taking care of his mother. Jiang Nannan fell in love with Xu Sanshi completely after knowing that he took care of his mother. What you wrote here about Jiang Nannan is so disgusting, and being a Cao thief is also disgusting. If you want to attract women, you might as well just write about the domineering spirit, which is more reasonable

Author, some murals cannot be spoken out. Knowing each other and speaking out are two different things.

Is your heroine Xiao Wu? Come on, she's just a troublemaker, and she's also a bit irresponsible.

The author, I think the character of the protagonist is a bit weird. Although he has great potential and can even be said to be completely invincible in the later stage, but now it is obvious that he cannot beat the Titled Douluo, which gives people a feeling of arrogance. I don't know if it is my problem. Also, the author, please stop making so many complaints. After you have finished your complaints, what should we complain about＼(`Δ')／

I can't understand what's next to Douluo, so I haven't subscribed.

It feels a little watery, and there are too many explanations and narrations.

Arrived again, a rare book that falls off the shelf after ordering Stream of consciousness, not a big problem Theory of human-animal alienation? There is a conflict (Civilization agrees with the racial theory growing up in the country? Have you never watched Journey to the West and don't know sentient beings?) After that, he attributes great power to himself to deny the soul guide. The rational dog cannot see this. Apart from courage, perseverance and wisdom (this is half), nothing is fake or foreign.

It's inexplicable how to write it

By the way, how many full orders are there for this book? This is the only book I have ordered in full Additional details

. . . . It was pretty good to watch at first, but later on it felt a bit nerdy, and the harem plot was really messed up, and the plot was a bit off-kilter. Although there were other aspects that made people feel uncomfortable and puzzled overall. The settings are good, forget about the rest.

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How many harems has the protagonist collected so far? Has anyone kept statistics?😰