I Am a Superman in Tokyo

The identity of the protagonist was revealed too hastily. Encountered a battle with superpowers by chance - affected by the battle - the beautiful teacher was injured and left without the backpack - the battle ended - the main superpower in the battle, cleared the road - found traces of the protagonist rescuing people - found the backpack - identity exposed

Wow, I forgot one thing. In foreign countries, superman represents a hero, but in China, superman only represents ability.

It's an old cliché, but I'm convinced that you lowered a person's IQ just by writing.

The look and feel is okay, similar to spiritual energy recovery, but there is one thing to say. Since the first chapter mentioned time travel, after the moon shattered, you can already feel that you can absorb solar radiation to strengthen yourself. Can you carry out photosynthesis in the future? ? ? This is stupid. Since it is time travel, the ability to absorb solar radiation first makes you think of Kryptonians. You can call Hyperion or Sentinel, etc., But you don't know about time travel? Or you can make up the setting later and travel from a parallel world without Superman to another parallel world, otherwise it will feel a bit poisonous

The emotional line in Chapter 23.4 Is very poor. Is it a dialogue about being in heat?

The beginning of the chapter is okay. It's a bit cliché to start the chapter by directly seizing the body, but it doesn't hurt! I've read seven or eight chapters so far, and my impressions are pretty good.

It would be nice not to be exposed so early. You can also make a guest appearance as Spider-Man. If you get involved with the country too early, you will be used as a gunman if you have no strength.

Author, you are really writing a novel using the structure of anime 😅😅. The memories can last for several chapters, and the progress of the main plot is very slow.

I found the author's narrative method strange and encountered some characters. I have to tell the story of that character in one go, but I still felt a little split when I read it.

What does the hidden sentence here mean? Looking like weeping with gratitude? Is the author deliberately portraying a hypocritical character for the protagonist? Aren't you going to write Superman?

The protagonist does not look like someone who traveled back in time when he was thirty years old. He is completely a high school or junior high school student. He is very, very immature. He behaves in all kinds of embarrassments, grievances, awkwardness, etc. That only students can do. Don't say that he is really thirty years old and has no life experience at all. It is really speechless. .

Looking at the title, I thought he was an ancestor. . .