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The update is too slow. It will take 10 million words for the protagonist to reach the Premier League.
She does
Quick, quick, quick
It's a bit watered down, but the plot is quite interesting. If you read it as a semi-entertainment article, it's not considered watery. I just want to say that the author didn't write about the birth of the emperor's uncle 😎😎
I don't want to follow this book anymore. I didn't intend to read this book with my brain, and I had to be force-fed with poison. All kinds of pretense without any brain, it hurts to read. If you follow your pace, it will probably take more than 3 million words to write about playing in the Premier League and Champions League. I don't know what the author thinks. The Messi template started next door. After one year of training in the Bundesliga, a free agent joined Manchester City with a signing fee of 100 million pounds, a weekly salary of 2 million, and all kinds of other things. Reward, the same word count of about 600,000, do you have the nerve to show off with a weekly salary of 2,700 pounds? Now you have all kinds of awesome writing methods in high school, and only a few adjectives. How will you write in the professional competition? Do you think you are the same, writing from the English League to the Champions League... I suggest you skip the unimportant games, and quickly upgrade to the Premier League, otherwise not many people will follow. Goodbye
There are a few questions. The protagonist picks up training results, such as physical results, strength results, and dynamic passing and receiving. According to the author's description, the corresponding abilities are added when he picks them up. For example, the strength is strengthened and the physical recovery is improved, but why the attributes don't change. You must know that the training results are training results. You should add the corresponding number of attributes according to how long you train. It is two different things than giving 1 free attribute when you pick up 100 extra points. Now it seems that you have lumped it all together and only added free attributes. ,9Pass the ball accurately. You are only at level 1 now, which is equivalent to just getting started. Once you learn how to use it, the accuracy of passing the ball should not be too high. If you want a certain accuracy, you must be at least level 3 or 4. The same goes for other skills. Otherwise, what is the point of your level? It's better to reach full level directly. I would like to give the author a suggestion. First, list the overall attributes to give readers a clear data. To be honest, I see that the protagonist has no idea about the attributes now. Then, for example, if the physical fitness is 70, how many attributes have been added after training for half a year? How many attributes have been added in how many hours of training based on the training results? The free attribute points are calculated separately.
This book is a disgrace to football writing
I have finished reading them all now. It is quite a novel idea. It conforms to the times and does not engage in useless plots starting from high school. The daily life is also interesting and eye-catching. I wish there were more.
I feel that as long as the author wants, this book can be the same as the one about School Beauty. A book is passed down to three generations, and the book remains after people leave.
What is chapter 370 about?
The weekly salary is increased to 8,000 pounds, and the liquidated damages directly increase to 50 million pounds? Author, are you not funny? The liquidated damages are not limited to 50 million pounds. Your annual salary should be at least 15-30 million pounds. According to this conversion, if the weekly salary is less than 500,000 pounds, should you sign? You signed this contract just to disgust the next person who is willing to poach you. I vomited writing
If you don't know how to write emotional scenes, don't write them. Also, the protagonist, a straight man, is disgusting. The emotional scene with Sophie was too crotch-inducing!
I have no objection
I have no objection
This book is really speechless. It is a football novel. It has 309 chapters. It has not played a single official professional game. Moreover, it is English League One and the English Championship. If you write it at your pace, you will not be able to complete the five major leagues in twenty years. I hope you can finish it in 2045.
It's almost 300 chapters and I haven't played a professional game. It's really dragging 👍👍
There is a problem with the zoning of this book. It should go to the bottomless hydrological zone. It has been written to the professional club stage. It can actually write dozens of transitional chapters. There is not a single game in it. It is still in the transition until now. The new season is far away.
It took 940,000 words to get out of high school? Is the real book going to be unfinished, or should it be written with more than 5 million words?
Self-stimulating poison emmmmm is basically either a bad product or a eunuch. Readers beware.
Is this an urban novel or a football novel? There is a focus. After reading 60 chapters, there are less than five chapters about football?
I feel like this is what makes it interesting. Other football articles are all about football games, with no personal life at all. They write about people, not football machines.
After seeing Hathaway, I had no idea of reading this book Mader Is there an aesthetic problem? Bad figure No brains Poor character The key is that the facial features are not harmonious Licking one by one, it's not funny
Beautiful
The imaginary setting is very interesting, but after reading the first two chapters, I felt that the writing of the protagonist was really awkward, and the protagonist seemed dumbfounded. I didn't see any of the three golden chapters, and the three chapters of persuading people to quit were almost the same.
I was a little interested in the subject matter, but when I saw the photos of the heroine, I became more interested. What a b-aesthetic, so ugly 😰
Beautiful
Being able to write such rubbish in the first few chapters is also a talent.
What the hell? ? The finale? ? Looking at the table of contents, it's the end just after joining the Premier League? ? Where's the golden ball? What about Mr. World? What about the European Cup? ? Shall I wipe it? ?
Crazy
I saw that Chapter 65 was going to be a paid chapter. I was still playing in the high school competition, so I looked through the table of contents and found that I had finished writing more than 200 chapters about the high school competition. This is an unheard-of way of writing
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This author's other conveniences, such as the relationship aspect, are quite enjoyable, but his games are really too watery. I really don't want to complain. Almost every game has to be written. A game starts with 4 chapters, and sometimes a game has 8 chapters. Can you believe it? Water is not so exaggerated.
After reaching Chapter 639, I feel that there is basically nothing interesting to read in this book. The exciting points that existed in the early stage: cheats, skills, Hollywood female stars, and domestic pursuits (live broadcast software) are basically invisible. Golden Finger has not been mentioned in dozens of chapters. Skills are also passed by in passing. Domestic ones are also mentioned with "vacation". Those female stars who have slept with have not appeared in dozens of chapters. The rest is a cycle of competitions and star introductions.
That liquidated damages is unreasonable
Generally speaking, the liquidated damages are three to five times the annual salary, which is normal, and the main team stars, who are indispensable, are generally ten times the liquidated damages. No matter how many players there are, they are not fools and cannot sign. They all have great rights and obligations. If you don't pay, why should you sign such a high liquidated damages? 5 Million liquidated damages for the first 3,000 weeks is already an exaggeration. Yes, it's thirty times. Okay, the team is kind to the protagonist, so if you sign it, you can treat it as a return of kindness. What do you think about the 8,000 weekly salary and 50 million liquidated damages? It's directly a hundred times. You are just treating the protagonist as a fool. You want 50 million liquidated damages. You can increase the weekly salary and the benefits. There is a saying for this, it is not about how much you think. The liquidated damages are as much as the liquidated damages. The annual salary of 5 million and the liquidated damages of 50 million are about right. Why should the liquidated damages increase if your salary cannot be raised? I owe you. The benefits the protagonist brings to the team are already greater than the kindness. The protagonist didn't spend a penny to sign. It's not that the protagonist didn't help the team. Look at the five million for a labor certificate. Whether the team can be sold or not, it sucks the blood of the protagonist like crazy. The team has always suffered losses. There is no equality at all. Even if you look for an agent, you also know that you will leave later. Who is loyal to you if you set such a high liquidated damages? Even if the previous team left and kept so much money, you can't get any benefits. I am moved, I only see the club's bad blood-sucking and the stupidity of the protagonist.