I Picked up Cards in Conan

It feels like the author is like a novice. In the early stage, the author constantly carried out psychological descriptions and authorial words. To be honest, it was not good because too many jumps in and out cut the story into pieces. It was not until the last two chapters that the situation got better In addition, the author's character creation in the story needs to be strengthened. A refreshing article is also a novel. To be enjoyable, you must first have a sense of substitution. Without a sense of substitution, it will not be enjoyable. Originally, the requirements for character creation in fan fiction have been lowered, because it has a relatively complete world view and the main characters have been created. All it takes is to add the original protagonist. However, the author's excessive psychological description makes the character creation lacking. Normal people will not have so many thoughts in life, nor will they explain why people do what they do. The author does not need to use psychological description or a direct third party to describe and introduce the protagonist. That would be too pale. The character creation is based on what he does, what he says, and his understanding of things. (Of course, a good writer will even express the characters in the environment, which is not required for online articles) There is no clear character line. For example, I know that Conan goes to school, solves crimes, or plays detective games. Amuro is working undercover and working around. But there is no protagonist. My impression of the protagonist is that I watched the play, went back home, and solved the case. What about the protagonist's daily life? In the scripts he wrote, in the consultant's documents, he even wrote down that he went to buy a table and got up. Regardless of just the daily routine, it plays a great role in enriching the character ( For example, a soldier should get up on time and be neat and tidy; a lazy person drags his feet again and again, sets three alarm clocks before he wakes up, and wanders in his mind even after sitting up). In reality, leisure means doing nothing, but this is not the case in novels. Everyone else is jumping up and down, and the protagonist is looking at the sunrise with morning tea in his hand. Only when this is written can he be called leisure. Of course, the author's imagination is still good, and there is nothing wrong with the three views at present (I can't understand some authors, isn't a children's show just a dream? Why write about such reality? Isn't this just like Doraemon discussing technology. Children should be about love and justice. I am here to recall my childhood and make up for my regrets. What kind of reality do I want? As soon as I sit down at work, I will understand what reality is) In addition, the plug-in designed by the author is actually very interesting, but the self-awareness of the clone is actually a poisonous point, because it is difficult to control and it makes it uncomfortable to watch. In fact, it can be written as a puppet, which is very interesting. For example, the protagonist's body participates in the daily actions with Conan in one identity, without involving the core; and the protagonist's puppet participates in the protagonist's daily life as a disguised identity of the Zuowangdao organization, and exchanges heartfelt opinions with Conan. When the body meets, it can also cause drama with each other, and plot conflicts will arise. However, the plot must be reasonable and logical when designing. You can also write about the mutual influence between the two people. Zao Wangdao went to provoke Ginjiu, causing the street to blow up, while Tixiu drove to a place and was so jammed that he missed the sun. Or you can pull out a transformable robot card later and use it to seduce Conan. Conan wants to turn into Shinichi to comfort Xiaolan, which can be used as a handle to tease Conan (making Conan think that the use of robots is limited and cannot be used for 24 hours will ensure that Conan's main line does not collapse, and you can also watch Xiaolan's new candy, so that Xiaolan will not become a Wangfu stone), etc. There are actually many ways to play

I remembered again the story of Gin being persecuted in various ways. He stole a car, planted a bomb in the car, mocked Qin to his face because his hair turned white because he was an undercover agent, and discussed with other black team members behind his back whether Gin wore a hat because he was bald...

This introduction is too fucked up, Brother Rongguang of the winery Is there another failure that will always run through life?

6 This introduction is too crude

The red side must win, and the black side is not qualified to fight with the red side. There is a big hooligan behind them. Who is behind Black? But there has never been a red recipe. Gin is a borrowed knife that kills people. Is the winery better than the intelligence agency of the five good men? He discovered his opponent's person in the winery and gave Gin the information so that he could take the blame. If there is a red side camp Climbo: What do you want to do by getting so close to CIA? MI6: What are the FBI people looking for you for? Japanese Police: You went up to lick the American dad before I was dead. Do you really want to replace me? How many lives will be lost if we cooperate with other organizations without permission?

It is recommended that there be no female protagonists and not write about female protagonists. Instead, only stories about the characters in the plot should be written. It is recommended not to go as far as romance. Most fanfics with female protagonists are not very good at writing about emotions.

Ah, this smell, yes, it's the smell of a happy person You can't fool me, you sit and forget the way Hey, look, look, he believed it, he believed it It's so funny that it's so funny

Click on it and you will see my sister Bei 🤓🤓

What's your relationship with the newspaper guy? 😜😜😜

Well written, good luck to the author! 😁

I was just about to watch it when I saw the update time was three days ago... Is this a cut? Or has something happened to stop updating?

Come on, I think the book you wrote is pretty good⌓‿⌓

Where is Xiao Ai? It just lights up and disappears immediately, right?

The end of Chapter 15 and the beginning of Chapter 16 do not match up at all, and are even conflicting. In the first part, after giving out the gifts, it was time to try out the new equipment, but then suddenly it became Hattori and Heye going home separately to compete with the protagonist. Is the author of these two chapters the same person?