The Last Literary Giant

I just read the first ten chapters, and here are some comments from an old bookworm: 1. It's best not to write things that have no effect on the plot. For example, portable space is superfluous. I saw the author said below that it was purely for the convenience of life, but it had no effect on the plot, but directly destroyed the atmosphere of the three golden chapters. Readers thought you were going to write about urban supernatural beings. 2. Secondly, at the beginning of the plot, the character travels to a junior high school student, which means that the first dozens of chapters are devoted to the youth campus. Even if the author quickly skips the middle school and college years, this extreme way of writing about youth and fame was several years ago. Now readers like more immersive content. A better way is to skip the student days and start by entering society. The theme of this book is literary heroes. Literary works should reflect the current social situation, changes of the times, satirical politics, magical reality, etc. You write about a youth campus and put it into a drama. . 3. It's not impossible to write stories about parents' ambivalence and conflicts between relatives, but side plots must serve the main plot. Your main plot should be the protagonist copying one classic work after another, rather than rambling in the first ten chapters. The side plots in the early stage can only be foreshadowing and foreshadowing.

I felt like the author was so soft-spoken that he was bullied every day and had no time to deal with it. As a person who read it, I got angry. The protagonist was bullied casually and didn't fight back at all. I was speechless. The plot continued like this. I had no choice but to abandon the book. I really couldn't stand such a soft protagonist.

If you don't take it seriously as a writer, give me a fighting spirit. That would be fun.

Don't you think the poems you wrote are awkward? Everything you do has a source, right? If you start copying the poems of great men without any foundation in classical Chinese and sufficient literary style, you will definitely be known by knowledgeable people that you can't write such poems at all! When we read a poem, sometimes we may not understand the meaning of the poem, but we can definitely feel the author's mood in the poem. This is the expression of the author's emotion! Poetry is not about imagining a world by writing novels, but the release of the poet's external emotions!

I haven't read it yet. There are fewer and fewer such novels now, and many of them are too fast-paced. I think we should start from magazines and improve the writing step by step. We can not use cheats, but instead use memory partitions to update, and through self-study, we can further optimize the works.

Literary hero is more than just two words. I hope the author knows what it represents.

I don't want to read the last few chapters! Pig's Feet has written so many masterpieces but has not won any awards. Suddenly, there is a kind of begging for help. How does Buffett trade in stocks? It's like a group of poor losers voting whether to invite Jack Ma and Wang Jianlin to eat instant noodles together!

Chapter 3 Exit The protagonist's setting in his previous life was obviously an ordinary person busy with life, and after time travel, he didn't love studying since he was a child or had a family background. "Magnolia" has no foreshadowing at all. If I were a person in the book, I might still think that the protagonist may be a genius. Unfortunately, I am a reader who opened the God's perspective. The supposedly reasonable golden finger can make up for it, but you still wrote a terrible thing. That's it

Just being a literary copycat will not make you a literary giant. The protagonist must at least have his own thoughts and his own works. It is best to incorporate the protagonist's thoughts and writing style into the literary copy's works.

It is tasteless to eat and a pity to throw away.

I'm so depressed that I'm speechless, and it's too deceiving. As an author, I don't even have a channel to speak.

You are really awesome for using Great Man right from the start

This book left me speechless. Shennong is dead, and the second half directly ascends to heaven. It's just a waste of money.

If you are young, don't write more in-depth novels. You can write about youth and emotions. Hasn't the heroine recently come out? You can break up when you graduate from high school, and then lead to a dislocation of time and space, and have a guest when you get married 😁😁😁

Personally, I feel that the writing is a bit stretched and sometimes incomprehensible. Forget it, writing is not easy, the author keeps working hard. . .

Um, why can't it be written that the female protagonist also gets admitted to Peking University, the same school as the male protagonist?

It's very off-putting to always have villains like this, and it's understandable to create conflicts to develop the plot, but the plot is a bit unnatural no matter how you look at it.

Slow-paced entertainment has always been my thing, but what can I say about this book? It's not that the author doesn't care, but so far I haven't seen what the protagonist's character is like. In the early stage, I wrote about a lot of people and things that had nothing to do with the main plot, such as the grudges between uncles and uncles from the same village, and the protagonist was not involved at all. In fact, you can use these events to describe the protagonist's point of view to shape his character. Whether he is angry or unjust, calm, or proactive in resolving the situation, etc., Can shape the character of the protagonist. Whatever the character setting of the protagonist is, he can deal with it in a way that suits his character, and use his character to drive the development of the plot. Every supporting character's appearance should have its own role and have nothing to do with the main plot or the protagonist. Then the appearance of these people and things will become meaningless.

The third picture, seeking refinement🙂

Come on, author!

The speed update is just waiting to be put on the shelves. Why don't we give it a boost?

The protagonist's character is indeed a bit soft. It's softer than in reality.

The plot is getting a bit nauseating at this point.

At present, I am still very optimistic about this novel. Although I don't have a monthly ticket, I will dedicate 2 recommendation votes. I hope the author will continue to update

The second picture😁

I saw a few comments saying that the protagonist is relatively soft, which is true. You still need to fight back, otherwise you will make others become more aggressive. If you kill him with one hammer, you can avoid a lot of meaningless things.

It's so popular now that I introduce movie and TV drama plots every day to fill the word count, and copy and paste them to Baidu to upload them.

Personally, I feel like this book is showing signs of collapse in the latest chapter. Before going to college, I was very exciting in junior high and high school, but then gradually came to the edge of collapse. The reason is that each climax plot cannot be elaborated in detail, and the pace is not too fast but too low. It was very rushed, there were no details, and I felt that time really flew by. Only a few chapters later, I had graduated with a Ph. D. And stayed at the school as a lecturer. It was too fast. The four major masterpieces were written and published so quickly and royalties were collected. This is a literary novel, not a snack in a fast food restaurant. Now that I have seen the establishment of an entertainment company, I will go crazy if I don't talk about what is stuck in my heart! It is recommended that the author slow down the pace and write carefully to write a good article. I hope it doesn't end hastily, I hope it's the same! Please support me again!

Just a few days into the pit, updates have stopped!

This chapter is about the plot of the movie and the feeling of watching the movie, which means the word count is piled up.