Immortality Begins with Eye Changes

Want hemp? I'll give you a suggestion, just go super mutate, have your consciousness run into your eyes, act like a big-eyed monster, play mind control, and not be a human being

There is a question. The protagonist rushes towards ghosts when he sees them, but does he have the strength? This book has too little description of the protagonist's strength. The protagonist's strength must be rated! It was clearly stated that the protagonist's mutated parts were trembling, but the protagonist still rushed forward. It was inexplicable.

There are various loopholes in the front of this book, so you can barely read it, but you can't read it at the end. There is a weird department or something, and there are a lot of beauties in it. The directors, deputy directors, and captains are all beauties. Doesn't the author feel that there are some problems here? I understand if you are all women, women can hold up half of the sky, but the problem is that there are so many beauties together, I am speechless! Is there no ordinary woman? And basically all the women the protagonist sees are beautiful.

Chapter 1 The protagonist goes to the hospital to seek help for treatment. He said he had the same nightmare for half a month in a row. Later, the world announced that monsters were killing people. Then the protagonist's sister told the protagonist that she had the same nightmare consecutively. The protagonist didn't take it seriously. What kind of intelligence dares to write this?

Shen Nong guides the poison. Readers passing by drive here. This book is a forced introduction of wisdom.

The government has already notified that there is a ghost, and then as a member of the agency, when I meet someone who is suspected of encountering a ghost, I think it is fake, and I sleep soundly during the protection period, resulting in the person being protected being killed by a ghost, and this is the second time. What defiant logic?

I just read Chapter 27 and it's full of flaws: 1. The protagonist's strangeness will damage the body and blood. The protagonist forgot about it after discovering the system. Later, killing ghosts and transforming organs can increase the life span of the body. This shows that killing ghosts and alienating body organs should be done as soon as possible to eliminate possible hidden dangers. 2. The protagonist is a rich man who collects information. Why not let them collect the haunted information and analyze the authenticity and send people to find him on the spot to kill him? Instead, he is very leisurely at home and just looking for random exploration with his eyes. He clearly sees the powerful wandering ghost but has no sense of crisis and subjective action to become stronger. What about the random blind box? 3. In Chapter 27, shouldn't you take your sister and run to save someone you can't beat? And then you think wearing a mask and a hat means hiding it? You are so funny. As long as you check the video, you will find that there is also his sister based on the clothes, pants and figure. The two of them just now are now one.

Ah, this year is 2023, why are there still articles like this? It's an ancient routine. We need to innovate, not be retro. It's okay if you have a good plot. It's feeble and has a halo of wisdom for all the people. There is little foreshadowing for the characters. , Very abrupt, the protagonist's level strength is not obvious, and the number of words is set to a system. In terms of setting, it is system text + strange flow + spiritual energy recovery (evolver) + city (all departments are girls). Various settings are mixed, I don't know what to say.

Leaving aside other poisons for now, this is really enough to keep the protagonist from appearing for ten chapters. .

The male protagonist obtained a skill that could extend his lifespan, and his lifespan was increased to tens of thousands of years, but his cultivation level did not increase much. Then a woman was seriously injured and her lifespan was about to be lost. She had no choice but to use the secret technique of living and dying on the male protagonist, robbing him of half of his lifespan. However, he did not expect that many years later, this woman would survive one after another of her old opponents and she was still alive.

In a strange world, there are parents, cares, and not orphans. There are many tricks that cannot be done. After all, the consequences of mistakes will affect other people, which is not fun enough.

I've read twelve chapters, and the main plot is just like an ink mark. I don't know how many supporting characters have been written to death. The protagonist is useless, but he still has time to go on a blind date... With this pace, if he can kill a ghost in a hundred chapters, it doesn't matter if the author has so little integrity! Don't believe it, the protagonist is the only one who can see the eyes of ghosts so far, and there is no trace of ghost-killing methods at all!

The system is too cumbersome and the word count is simply too low. According to the protagonist's upgrade method, this book will collapse sooner or later.

I think it is better not to have any ancient gods, Buddhas, demons and immortals appear, and to develop a new system in modern times, or to use ancient knowledge to innovate, and it is best to surpass the ancient times. The older the setting, the stronger it is. I'm a little tired of seeing it. —— Just like the vast majority of cultivation literature, they will only inherit things from the past and cultivate to the level reached by the strongest people in the past. Those protagonists seem to have the power to change everything, but they change nothing. —— It is impossible to surpass the predecessors. The decline of the past will only reappear in the future. It is just reincarnation in the same circle, not a spiral upward.

Author, the more you read, the more speechless you become. Long life is of no use in this strange world. If you don't have the ability, even if you live forever, you will still die.

If he is not poisonous, just cover his face and he will not be caught by the police. Crimes do not happen every day. Anyway, he goes out at night and will be caught by the police with all kinds of plans. The protagonist, just cover his face and cannot be found.

It feels uninteresting and not exciting to write out all the body parts of the protagonist. It is better to practice martial arts and create some unique skills. I suggest the author to read "I am Your Natural Enemy". This book is very interesting and the protagonist has a good personality. There is no shortage of monsters and monsters. It is weird.