Qiu Yueqi

It's not well written. If you have any questions, please ask and I will improve. Thank you.

Add a few chapters, and then update them regularly. If you want to achieve results, you have to do this. Update more or fix it, but updating less will definitely not work. Even if it is not good at all, you cannot update less.

Thank you for collecting it! Welcome back to read Detective Pete

Write more short sentences, more deletions, and fewer adjectives. Be careful not to blindly describe the expression. (Description of expressions and expressions will definitely correspond to psychological activities. If you write too much and cannot grasp it, you will be happy one second and cry the next second.) Read it a few times. You will feel good at first, but problems will be exposed over time. Grasp the key points of the characters' communication, do not go off topic, and the content of the chat should not be meaningless. You can bury pits appropriately and add foreshadowing. It is best to determine the character's personality to avoid OOC situations. The reading experience is not very friendly. I hope to pay attention to the natural length and shortcomings.