Dragon Clan: Lu Mingfei Returns from Boxing Wan

Can Lu Mingfei go to Kama Taj to see if he can become the Supreme Mage? Or what would happen if Lu Mingfei traveled to Jackie Chan's Adventures and became the Holy Master.

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Now that Quan Yuan Lu Mingfei is here, will Haihuang Lu Mingfei be far behind?😏

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There are a lot of problems The perspective is confusing, the writing style is bloated, there is a lot of nonsense, and the rhythm is unclear. The most important thing is that what you write about Dragon Clan fandom is not Dragon Clan at all, and people who read it will not know what it is. Two suggestions First: Don't create original plots when writing fanfics. To be original, you must dilute the impression of the fanfic. You can't have both. You can't win two rabbits but one rabbit Second: Cut the next book quickly.

Congratulations to Lu Mingfei for adding another member to the family

The writing in the middle is too messy. Originally, it would be a great idea to unify the underworld in the jungle, but it somehow switches to Chu Zihang's perspective. When I return to Lu Mingfei's perspective, I skip the process of unifying the underworld. After that, the plot is so messed up that I can't connect it together.

Nono, my Nono🤤

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The author is a novice, so I feel that you are forcibly imitating Yang Zhi's style, but the problem is that your level is not enough. I feel that the writing is very messy, the fragments are very jumpy, and there is a sense of fragmentation. It is recommended that you learn how to write online articles first, and then develop in other areas after you have finished writing.

To be honest, the plot of this book is too fragmented... It jumps a lot, and it progresses to the next stage without understanding the cause and effect. At the beginning of the summer camp, it suddenly jumps to Chu Zihang without explaining the cause and effect clearly. Then Chu Zihang's side just connected to the main plot and started, and then jumped back to Lu Mingfei's side and directly skipped a large part of the plot. Then when Chu Zihang appeared, Chu Zihang's plot was skipped again. If only it were the plot part of the original work, that's it. The jump in the plot of the original part is really uncomfortable.

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Have you ever been insulted by Lu Mingfei?

Zero sauce! Yeah

To be honest, I feel a little uncomfortable when other fandoms return from a certain time world. I don't know why the Dragon Clan doesn't feel this uncomfortable.

I haven't read the book, but your subject seems interesting. I have no money and can only contribute 500 points. It's well written and the author praised it 🤭

Lu Mingfei, the ghoul, hasn't come yet.

It doesn't smell like dragons at all.

As expected of the traveling frog Lu Mingfei

The author's writing is good. I would like to recommend the book he wrote. Friends who are book-hungry can take a look. Just click on the avatar. It is non-toxic.

In terms of martial arts, I probably can't beat Xia Mi.

The writing is pretty good among Dragon Clan fanfics. Why won't the author put it on the shelves?

I wonder if anyone has considered writing a fanfic about where Nono came back from to protect Lu Mingfei?

Is the fist wish a bit low, but the blade teeth are about the same?

The story is well written, but I just can't follow it.