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Because details determine success or failure, if the details are not handled well, or the details are handled very roughly, the reading experience will be average. For example, the recent 93 Chapter investment movie. 1. Before the original work contract expired, you counted song writing as investment, which obviously left hidden dangers for the future. 2. If you invest in movies as an individual, how much income tax do you think you will have to pay in the future? 3. Where has financial supervision gone? The main investor didn't know anything about it, so you just divided the shares? The director has seriously overspended, but he can still keep 5% unchanged. Do you think the capitalists are fools? 4. Can you watch the movie schedule whenever you want? Why do theaters schedule shows for you? Are you looking for that father-in-law again? Another example is the previous daughter going to school. 1. I really don't understand the necessity of sending my daughter to school at the age of 5? Just to add conflict to the plot? 2. My grandpa is a professor at Peking University. Why does Peking University Affiliated Primary School look down on him so much? Grandma is a middle school teacher, but she doesn't like her in several elementary schools? Fangcaodi and Central Primary School near Hujialou are both ranked at the top, so why don't you look down on them? The Huangchenggen Primary School near my grandpa's house is so much better, why don't you go there? 3. The person entrusted with the matter is the section chief of the district education committee. Grandpa's students are the so-called county officials who are not as good as the current ones. Only when the principal of the elementary school loses his mind and goes crazy will he offend the section chief of the district education committee. Why don't you just add more desks? Are you really afraid that parents will use public channels to report you, the principal, for illegal admissions? Don't write in such detail if you are not absolutely sure of the details. It can be completely transformed into a transitional plot. For example, if you invest in a movie, you write and write, and later it can be said that it is all handled by the agent. You just make some suggestions and adjust the plot. Now it's like a piece of rice with something uncooked. If you take a quick look, it's pretty good; if you read it carefully, it's all awkward and really unnecessary.
The title of the book is "Leisurely Days", but the actual content is extremely busy. I am either writing songs or on the way to writing songs. A bunch of coincidental things pave the way for song writing. There is a daughter who keeps saying that she is a daughter slave. In fact, there is very little interaction between father and daughter. All of them are for the mother-in-law's family. Take it with you, show your face once or twice when needed, and there are also female college students who send sex pills thousands of miles away, and find a reason to return it to the other party after sleeping. The other party doesn't want him to be responsible. Tsk tsk, the protagonists all have daughters. In the future, when the protagonist's daughter grows up, what will the protagonist think of sending sex pills thousands of miles away? There are also various ambiguous sisters-in-law, young co-workers, female stars, tsk tsk, the author also has a slight literary and artistic style of eroticism, creating a good man who does not take the initiative, refuses and is not responsible (only if the woman says she is not responsible, then she will not be responsible), a daughter slave in the variety show mode (I am a slave when I need it, but who are you when I don't need it). In addition, I have a lot of things to do in my career to match the word leisure in the title of the book. I have read more than a hundred chapters and even skipped a lot of them. It does not affect the reading at all. The overall feeling can only be described as bland as water.
In name, it is about a leisurely life. In fact, the author wanted to create a middle-aged, talented and free-spirited love prodigal. However, he wrote a scumbag who is surrounded by beauties and licks all women. He has no bottom line, especially Chen Guo, his mother-in-law, and his sister-in-law. The only effect of his wife's death is to let the pig's feet loose. Anyway, he is irresponsible if he doesn't get married.
When I saw Chen Guoguo, I gave up the book. Why did I have to add a girl like this? ? ? ! ! ! There was a previous description about a singer sleeping with a fan in the company, so what does his behavior mean? In order for a girl to say that I am not a good girl, I go out to look for freedom, find a stranger, a so-called talented man to offer my services, go home and continue to act like a good girl, and then find an honest man to take over?
To be honest, there is a problem with your idea. You want to be leisurely and have some pretense and slap in the face scenes. Also, either don't copy it or copy it well and let the classics from another world reappear. The most embarrassing thing is to be neither up to nor down. And this sister-in-law, either take it directly or stop being so ambiguous. She is such an adult and she was over 40 in her previous life. To sum up, the character who is both fake and established is really embarrassing.
Not asking for copyright is as uncomfortable as killing me. I could bear it when I gave away the first one. After all, I have to repay the favor. The gambling god who helps the female colleague in the back is really poisonous, just like giving money everywhere.
I heard that the protagonists of novels written in leisurely series are busier than the mules of the production team? How is this? Have you ever tested poison?
There are no big poisonous points, but there are constant small poisonous points.
Talking leisurely while rushing upward?
I feel that the author is quite speechless, because it is really not the cover that makes it popular. If you keep playing Bai Suzhen and Journey to the West every year during your summer vacation, you will understand. It feels like there is no common sense author in many places.
I read a few more chapters and it's too toxic. The protagonist's songs are not for sale. He is working part-time. He still wants to live a leisurely life and live without money. What do you write about the author?
To be honest, after reading this article, I have a very bad impression of people engaged in music, especially music festivals. I feel that if you are not promiscuous or even Western, you can't do music well. It's disgusting.
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Based on the readers' suggestions, the settings in the article were modified. Pig's Foot has the copyright starting from the second song, and some plots in the book were also modified accordingly. Thank you for your support!
Do any of you like the old Huayin tune? It's like a donkey's braying. I really can't hear it.
Is this a harem novel or something? I was so addicted when I saw that scene with Chen Guoguo. What's the point of arranging such a personal arrangement? Can anyone tell me? I don't want to see it anymore.
My sister-in-law has either fallen in love and written like a silly sweet girl. If she continues to be so vicious, she will have to give up.
The protagonist has a daughter, but the plot doesn't show how to take care of her. She always runs here and there, and when she takes a break, she goes to a bar with some buddies to drink. So why create the character of a daughter? Is this something a middle-aged man with a daughter can do?
Anyway, I gave up when I saw the blind man taking the initiative. How powerful does the protagonist think his connections are? You can challenge the reviewers. I have read so many novels before, and others should respect reality when writing. Those that can pass the review will pass, and those that cannot pass will not pass. What is wrong with this protagonist, that he thinks he is so capable?
As a female reader, I can understand Chen Guoguo's part when it comes to emotional drama. At least there is passion, but it is true that the sister-in-law is so disgusting. . . , Especially when I saw that the male protagonist's parents said that according to rural customs, if the elder sister dies, the younger sister can continue the relationship, but they were poisoned to death. There is also Chen Yun, when she had feelings for the male protagonist at the beginning, she must have had a husband at that time. The author is not only full of lust for the sister-in-law, but also for the wife. Can you write some normal female protagonists?
Compared with other entertainment articles, your kind has a daily routine, is very leisurely and comfortable. Other entertainment articles are just like running accounts, with the same routines.
I have read too many rebirth stories, and there are many repetitive plots and routines. This book is innovative. The author wants to express the indifference of middle age. This style of writing is unique and eye-catching. Come on, author, and I wish you better and better results! 🤭🤭🤭🤭
The ending is for readers Wei Xiang, the plot of the Minotaur
Based on my more than ten years of experience in reading books, one way to judge whether a book is good or not is to look at how many characters the character names have. If most of the names are two characters instead of three, then there is no need to have high hopes. It is definitely a rubbish book.
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The plot is so crudely written! I know everything, and I have to have a hand in everything! I don't think people can live a leisurely life in middle age. I have many abilities in middle age.
I came in based on the title of the book. You mentioned a leisurely life. How can the protagonist be so leisurely? He is pestered by several women every day for songs and scripts. He is busier than anyone else. The emotional lines with those women are a mess. It would be better if you didn't write his wife to death in the first place. Shouldn't reading a book about a leisurely life make people feel happy or peaceful? Why is it that when I read your book, I became more and more angry and angry? ! !
Just ask, where can I relax? I wanted to read some different entertainment articles, but they tricked me into it. After I finished reading, I changed the soup but not the medicine.
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