Demon Hunting Started as a Teacher

I just hope that the author can handle the details more carefully, both in terms of plot and characterization. This kind of theme + emotional line + online IQ = great potential! ! !

It's like dragons and Harry Potter. It feels right. Some settings are really trying to avoid similarities, but they still leave a lot of shadows. It's not easy to mix originality. It's really not as good as a human. But this is my first time writing. The story will definitely not be repeated. This book will be completed seriously. If you want to see me write dragons or Harry fan fiction, you can leave a message. I may consider it in the next book (⁄ ⁄•⁄ω⁄•⁄ ⁄)

Let me be honest, I think a lot of people don't like the character Lin Xueshuang. Why does it still have the highest number of likes? I don't understand whether I like it more or don't like it more. Let me see what the readers think. I posted a QQ group but no one found it + 😢 I can only ask here (⁄ ⁄•⁄ω⁄•⁄ ⁄)

I'm very happy that everyone can read my book, and I have written what I want to write. This is an invincible article. I originally read the online article to relax. I hope this can make you relax. Thank you for your support. Your support is the motivation for my writing, hehe~

Was this written by a newcomer? It feels like I have lived in vain for several years. It's high quality, in-depth, has foreshadowing, and the content is coherent, but it has one shortcoming (too little).

There is no need to use specific events and scenes to create the characters of supporting characters, otherwise they will be indifferent and even take over the main role, such as Xu Xiuming (this is really boring)

No, who is the protagonist? Why do we keep writing about Xu Xiujie? Bai Lu seems like a passerby.

Isn't Bai Lu a supporting role or a protagonist? I feel that the one named Xu is the protagonist. In a desperate situation, he burst into a coma with power. Isn't this a dragon? That Siberian brown bear is really disgusting. Normal people would not like such a person who makes him You are someone who has been toyed with, humiliated, and beaten like a dog. If you want to write a group portrait article, change your introduction and book title. You are going too far than trying to sell someone else's meat. The plot of the protagonist is as light as water, and the plot of the supporting role is impassioned.

Damn it, I'm alive! Families! There is actually a recommendation! First book! I'm so happy! (๑＞ڡ＜)☆

Give me some cum? The author wrote an invincible article, but from what I saw in the article, except for the protagonist, everyone was defeated, which made me feel that he was not invincible. The main enemy ran away, and the trick was over, as if he had strength but no brains There were a lot of meaningless descriptions. During the battle, he could write (Cherry's little mouth opened wide) This is fighting, there is no need. The author is a newbie, and it can be seen from the some old-fashioned routines and text. From the writing, it has a dragon-like flavor The school teacher style, plus the talent to escort new students to school Talking about the female protagonist, some people think it is not good, some people like this type, but they started to filter it from around chapter 10. She has a desire to control the male protagonist, the male is the stronger one, the female protagonist is not as talented as the female protagonist, but she still wants to, she feels like she is trying to suppress the male protagonist. (The author doesn't have a girlfriend, it's a new relationship drama) Poisonous point, Chapter 10 was not well described or not clearly written before the start, and the next 14 chapters or so will feel abrupt, the battle is unprofessional, distracted, and the enemy will run away after playing around for a while (the author will explain it later in this chapter Also, the male and female coaches are beautiful and completely different from the people around them. For example, the heroine's mother is described as a beautiful woman. After seeing the young and high-quality professor, she has no doubts about the hero's problem or criminal record. It feels like she wants to send the heroine there. If you can resist the above, then you can probably read this book. For me who has a lot of poison resistance, it's okay. I won't talk about the rest. If there are more spoilers, then you don't need to read it.

By the way, when I release chapters every day, should I release two chapters at once, or should I release them separately like now (⁄ ⁄•⁄ω⁄•⁄ ⁄)

Although it is only the first chapter, there are too many descriptions of people's appearance. In addition, everyone is a fairy with beautiful eyes and pink fists, which gives people a feeling of being young and artificial.

It's pretty good to watch. I feel like the author's writing is very good and the plot is okay. Why is there no one here?

Chapter 27: Xu Xiujie, the poisonous male supporting actor, you can just watch 27. If you don't like it, you can just leave (Shen Nong himself)

I have read a few chapters and the writing is good. I will keep it for a while.

The emotional drama is too distracting. First of all, the male protagonist is just a silly and sweet virgin. Author, do you think no one would appreciate this kind of high-quality resource in college? The heroine's emotional intelligence is also relatively low. Of course, I can understand that. After all, the protagonist's IQ and emotional intelligence depend on the author's level. You can read about this in other masterpieces. Since you want to set the male protagonist to avoid strangers in the emotional scene, then you should write the emotional scene in a more detailed way. If not, then be more straightforward and don't pretend to be innocent.

To be honest, I came here for the label of Invincible. This style of mixing Harry Potter and Dragons is really not suitable for Invincible. And there is a big problem. The male protagonist has very few roles at the beginning of the academy plot. Now I only see male supporting actors being deflated, explosive and Lockhart-like villains, but what about the male protagonist? ? ? ? ? It's not that it's not well written, it just feels like it's wrong. But I still have to cheer for the author, it's really not easy to be original these days.

Since you have learned from the Dragon Clan, you should know that there is a natural chasm between A and S. Not to mention C and S. Even if you only show A, that is not a reason for clown provocation. This wave is a forced intelligence reduction.