Teyvat: the Last Magister

This is an ancient artifact

The description of the other supporting characters is too weak, as if the protagonist is dead without him. Amber is also a knight, how could he be so weak that he can't defeat even a few Qiuqiu people? There is an ordinary adventurer in Mondstadt, an ordinary person without the eyes of God who saved Teyvat.

The description of the original character was too weak. I was tired from shooting arrows. Is the elemental power of the Eye of God just that small? I shot more than a dozen arrows. Finally, there was a rain of arrows. I jumped off a cliff and passed out. I went. It was too weak. If the original game was so weak, it would die before the plot started. I was really speechless.

In the past few days, I have seen many people say that this book has no desire to read and is not enjoyable. This is indeed the case. The first volume does not have many enjoyable points because the protagonist's character is like this. He will not do anything that he is not sure about. He will only let go and do things when he is very sure. Before that, he was just a "waste". There are also writing methods and shortcomings. The author is just a newbie, so he doesn't know much about many things. There are also big problems with the writing method. I will work hard to make it better in the future. I am very happy when someone comments, because I will feel that I am not alone... I am very happy when someone complains, because this proves that my writing is at least salvageable, and everyone still wants to complain a few words after seeing it, instead of directly deleting the book and crossing it out. The author will gradually improve. Let's read the second volume. The plot structure and other aspects will be better... No, there is no need for the second volume. I will try the next few pictures. All the props given above will be used, including the first few characters that appear. All the pitfalls in the first volume will be filled in the first volume. The second volume is a completely new beginning and a brand new pitfall. The second volume begins with the struggle between gods and gods, kingdoms and kingdoms, ideas and ideas. Everyone who reads it will not be disappointed. I tried my best for this.

Has the author only played Genshin Impact? You probably haven't heard of miHoYo's other games, right? The seven-element force should be related to the art of imaginary numbers, or to the quantum sea. It is not an element in the normal sense, but a kind of energy conversion. It should be converted from the internal energy of imaginary numbers. Honkai energy is also a kind of imaginary internal energy and the seven-element force. It should be said that Honkai Impact will occur to different degrees in different civilizations. For example, the collapse of Europe in ancient times was caused by the Black Death, while in Teyvat it was based on elemental power, and Teyvatli also said that elemental power is corrosive to ordinary people, so the seven elements here should be different from the seven elements in the magical world where the protagonist lives, unless his world is also in the Tree of Imaginary Numbers

The original fan who wrote this book is also a mage-style and invincible-style. There is no golden finger like any system. The only golden finger is the protagonist's own strength and [truth] reserve. But people who have never played the game will have no problem reading it, because I will write some settings and characters in great detail. Each character who has a plot later will be given a similar introduction to the plot at the front. There will not be a big character in the game suddenly appearing, and then there will be no plot in the novel. Also, I have saved the manuscript. You can read it with confidence. I guarantee that Yaersuo's character will not suddenly become a eunuch, but I can only write about it based on everyone's reading, so—— Pursue reading (λಡ_ಡﾞ), reading is really important for newcomers and new books! ! (*´･人･*)Please

The content of the first volume of this book is impossible to achieve results according to the current online literature market. I know it very well, but since it is the first book, I will continue writing it until it is completed, but it remains to be seen how many words there will be. At present, it seems that the fourth volume will probably be completed. The content of the next two volumes has not been thought out yet. I only want to think about the second volume - the advent of the Kingdom of God. If you are interested, you can go to the end of Chapter 49 to read the introduction of the volume. When you are reading the book and you see some typos and feel there is something wrong with the writing, you can post a chapter about that paragraph. I will usually change it within a day ... Also, please follow up (*´･人･*)

It's so weird, it doesn't feel any better at all. The protagonist has been being used as a gunman, and even though he wants to help the Knights, he doesn't take it seriously. The plot is completely different, and the protagonist's influence should not be like this. Talk about things that didn't exist at all. Without the protagonist, everyone else would have died long ago. This is completely different from the original plot, and the participation of travelers is completely different. I have a little doubt. Have you carefully watched the original plot? And he inexplicably recruited a subordinate who was extremely selfish and completely disobedient. I felt really sad when I saw him. What's the use of that subordinate? What technology are you talking about? I just don't feel it's necessary. Moreover, he has no control over his subordinates at all. He can do whatever he wants. What kind of subordinate is this? Consider him his father. It's really strange that my subordinate is not a goddaughter, but an ancestor.

It's just a Western fantasy novel covered with a layer of original god skin.

This is a Western fantasy of cheating. Still of the nature of Long Aotian. The smell is too strong.

It's so frustrating. If I didn't plan to show my strength at the beginning, strengthening the character interaction can make up for it. Now there is basically no character interaction, so I can't calm down and watch it carefully. I just want to watch the protagonist show off. It's a bit worth the loss.

The shouting skill makes me so embarrassed Amber's arrows are raining down, so it's raining down.

So the protagonist is beaten to death without showing his strength.

Can we still see this kind of routine in 2023?

The following are all personal opinions, please don't comment if you don't like them. 1 The character of the protagonist does not fit the setting and is too peaceful. Crazy is not something you can just talk about, it can be dissolved into peace. The protagonist is shown to be too calm, allowing his thoughts and actions to be a little more extreme without being too obvious. For example, when dealing with a robber who only steals money, the protagonist believes that he must be killed, but his colleagues believe that he should be handed over to the local police. This deviation is slightly more subtle and can make the protagonist's crazy personality more prominent. If you really can't write, you can refer to the description of the gray gentleman and the priest in Samsara Paradise. 2 Plot flaws, mentioned above about "sister" and the two gods of life, there is a slight problem here, that is, the protagonist knows that "sister" was created by the two gods, so what will he do to the two gods. My suggestion is to go black and destroy the god, and then your own church should be tempted by the alien gods and the protagonist should go black and rebel. This way the plot will be more interesting. The current archbishop can make her a victim when she comes into contact with foreign gods, which will facilitate her darkening later. 3 Regarding the attitude towards mortal believers and the Seven Gods, I personally suggest that if you want to be darker, you can refer to P Society's war criminals. If you are kinder, you can make the mortal believers become his shortcomings, so that the betrayal and blackening will be smoother later. Mortal believers here specifically refer to ordinary people and general believers. 4 Magic problem, space magic is too little and monotonous. It is recommended to expand your imagination, such as adding defensive magic to the body and then applying thousands of one-way space teleportation on the body. This will increase the offensiveness. Or combine alchemical poison with space magic, like a person seeing the poisoned space, and then the poisoned space is transported to the person. 5 Issue of power, the mage who is about to become a god has no vassal? There are too few descriptions of the old world. You can assign a few loyal younger brothers from the old world to the protagonist. They think the protagonist has become a god, and then develop the church in the old world. This can be the base for the protagonist after his darkening. The setting is to identify a cult by the mainstream church and jointly destroy it, but the power that the Kingdom of God can give to the protagonist is too strong, thus forming a small number of strong and loyal fanatic believers, which is more reasonable. The author, keep writing, old bookworms are optimistic about you. The setting is good and the plot is average. Come on comrade.

A novice tutorial can cover ten chapters. . .

What the hell are you writing about? There is simply no sense of experience. The first volume was not that exciting. How do you want people to look down? You yourself clearly know this problem and don't change it. Face the difficulties, right?

Alas, the enemy camp is already so strong now. How to increase the combat power in the future? Will it all depend on the protagonist's level of strength? The combat power is too uneven.

I've read Chapter 40 and I can't stand it anymore. There are too many flaws.

_(:з∠)_After reading it, I don't have any thoughts. It's like drinking a glass of cold water.

Use all the original people as the background for the protagonist to show off. After all, Amber can clear three camps by herself.

Well, there are a lot of secondary settings, and it feels like it has little to do with the original plot of Genshin Impact, and the travelers have become dispensable. . . But I can still watch it. It is recommended to refer to the book by Fengxiangren. It is also quite original, but it does not feel too abrupt. Come on!

It feels very good! Come on, author!

There are forces of the three realms in the continent of Teyvat, and the power of the seven elements is only a manifestation of one of the forces of the three realms.

The main character, a great mage, feels too weak

A bit boring

I only read the first few dozen chapters. There are many members of the Mondstadt Knights with Liyue names. They are also drunk. Has Mondstadt been occupied by Liyue?