Conan the Dark Age

The writing is very good. A pure black Shirley has always been relatively rare, not to mention an online IQ. The development of the plot is full of twists and turns.

After basically finishing it, let's talk about some pros and cons. The author has been talking about why so few people read it. After reading it, I felt that it was mainly because of the author that this book was too bland. Let's talk about the advantages first. The logic is self-consistent and not childish. The story is very complete and it can indeed be said to be a Conan for adults. But the shortcomings are also too obvious, which makes it extremely difficult to enter. The relationships between the characters are complicated and there are many personal settings, but there is no further explanation. There are too few inner descriptions of the characters, and the whole story is just reporting, resulting in unclear character characteristics. I didn't feel the climax after reading the first volume. It was like someone was just telling you what to eat today, what to eat tomorrow, whether the food is delicious, without mentioning any characteristics. Logically speaking, Scotland's death should be regarded as a flashy one, but the result is still mediocre. When people take photos, they will highlight the layering and priority of a photo. The same should be true for novels. You have to use words to describe the layering, catch people's attention, and outline the story in the reader's mind. However, the author estimates that it is just a messy puzzle with unclear story lines and unclear character outlines. Even Gin and Belmod, who are familiar to everyone, have become like template characters. This is not a problem that can be solved by just giving a character relationship diagram. Give me some advice, the author, you should build a template for the character, that is, perfect the character. It is actually difficult to write the daily life of the black side. You can make the daily life of the red side warm and funny. On the contrary, the black side can resonate much less. The protagonist is pure black. As the author, you should think about how to arouse everyone's resonance with the character, how to identify with him, and how to discover his bright spots. These must be described by you, not summarized by you.

The author actually writes very well. The reason why so few people read it, I guess, is because the author didn't follow the plot-following style of a fan. People who read fan fiction often feel a sense of relief that they know the plot in advance. What they usually want to see is how the author "adapts" the plot. They actually don't want to waste their brains. The author basically did not write any original plot, and judging from the current development of characters and story, even if we enter the timeline of the original plot, the story will definitely be completely different. It's normal that few people read it, because this book is not a fanfic at all. Except for some character backgrounds, this book is completely original. The author actually wrote really well, but maybe he put the book in the wrong area.

I didn't figure out how to include illustrations in the article, so I'll put them here first. The compression is too blurry!

According to my little personal understanding, such a structure has been established for those people in the grassroots organization (without the wine name). Applies to Volume 2 C14 onwards. I hope the way the chart is made can help you understand the current plot better.

I haven't seen it on the shelves so far, but I feel that it is well written. Only in the author's writing can we really see a huge and complex transnational criminal group, rather than a black organization like Qingshan who plays house. By the way, Qingshan has really done everything to make money in recent years. Not to mention the various main plot conflicts, it is like squeezing out toothpaste, and the publication is suspended at every turn. 🙂🙂

Happy New Year to everyone reading this book

It seems that everyone has a pure black dream 🙂, come on

Is Belmode the heroine? Did she and Gin have a relationship in the setting of this book? (No malicious intent, just curious)

Let me ask, since it is pure black, is it the kind of cool story that kills the characters on the red side indiscriminately? In the ending, will the protagonist win and kill everyone on the red side Or will the protagonist be defeated as a boss and then be taken to prison and sit back and watch the organization be disintegrated? (This question may not be answered to prevent spoilers)

From what I saw in the new book, I am a little interested in pure black.

Among Conan fans, this novel is probably one of the best. I don't know why the author's previous books were so popular.

Among the pure black Conan novels, the best one now is probably "Conan, But the Winery". His processing method is a group portrait. The protagonist has a main perspective to describe his plan, but he mainly describes the red party's life and death in the protagonist's hands and explores step by step to establish the protagonist's image. Although the main perspective is less, the influence of the protagonist is everywhere. As Black, if you kill a lot, then watching the protagonist of the original work being brutalized is completely meaningless; if you don't kill anyone, then the protagonist is too useless; if you take an intermediate value, it will be unclear, and the amount of plot will definitely be very small, and the progress will be slow. After all, no author really works for the black organization to draw materials. Black can't write anything fancy, so he can only write about spoofs and fun. But this depends on talent. Even books like Snake Disease and The Corpse Scavenger are books that you can't pick up after you put them down. It is very reasonable to focus on the perspective of "struggle and sacrifice" of the red side like that one, and the new character of the red side in that book is the protagonist's daughter, so even if the protagonist's conspiracy is revealed, the readers will not be too disgusted. However, all the protagonist's goals have been achieved. Currently, he doesn't pay much attention to Conan's minions. The main enemy is the official organization. The shortcomings of that book are of course also very fatal. Basically, the plot (of the movie) is changed to be driven by the protagonist. It becomes boring after too many times. But I think this idea is very good.

The writing is very good, and it can be seen that the author really wants to write a good wine article. But I think there is also a problem, that is, the book is too long. After all, this is a Conan fanfic. Everyone comes to read it to see how it is related to the main characters of Conan, but so far I don't feel that it is related to the main character. For most readers, this may be an original story wrapped in Conan's skin. Readers who cannot feel the atmosphere of Conan's story will naturally not have the patience to read the wonderful organizational stories written by the author. I abandoned the book several times and couldn't find a pure black novel about wine, so I read on with patience. The first thing that persuaded me to quit was the name of the wine. It's hard to remember unfamiliar wine names, and they were a mixture of Chinese and English. Even sometimes, as an English-illiterate, I see that the English wine name does not match the transliteration of the wine name, which makes me confused when reading the storyline. When I read the whole article for the first time, I didn't know what it was about. As for who was whose subordinate and whose relationship was with whom, it was really hard to remember. This is the first time I have given up. The second time is my own problem 😢 I personally don't like the confusion between the black protagonist and the red Sydney. (It has nothing to do with the original work, it's just that I was scared of other creative works with the female protagonist Sydney). I watched it for the pure black protagonist, but I don't know if I missed the introduction the first time. I didn't see the heroine on the introduction. Later, when I read the author's reply in the book circle, I found out that Sydney is the heroine. This is the second time I have given up. But I really couldn't bear to part with this article (although the plot rhythm is a bit problematic, the writing is good), so I read the article patiently. Later, I found out in the book circle that the author set Sydney to be pure black. To be honest, I think that important setting issues such as the heroine's position should be explained in the introduction at the beginning, otherwise readers will default to Shirley's red side. However, the male protagonist was originally created as a pure black side. I really can't think of any emotional drama between pure black and pure red, and it will feel like the author is going back on his word. 😵Others, I don't have the energy to type. Let's talk about it next time. If the author feels that I am too offensive, I will delete it myself.

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After reading one chapter, I felt that the plot was my cup of tea. Considering the introduction, it should be the real villain camp. I wonder if I can see the limited black version of Shirley.

The writing is very good, and it describes what a truly dark organization looks like. A dark organization cannot be full of lunatics who kill without batting an eyelid, and will kill at every turn. There will be all kinds of people in it.

This is the best Conan fanfic I have read so far. I couldn't help but read it in one sitting😱😱😱

Knock on the door~ Is everyone still there? 😭😭😭

It's good to read. I feel like this book and "Stay Away from Conan" can be called two Conan fans.

Damn it, it's super cool on my brainwaves, come on

Come on! Come on! Very well written

Well, I also looked at the Scarlet Giant Tower a little bit, and the other Kanno was much better than the current one. The main reason is that the background of the protagonist was revealed in advance, so I knew the positioning and it was very interesting to watch. I'm so confused, and when I glanced at the ending, my heart almost broke.

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What are the naming rules for wineries? I already know that strong alcohol is male and light alcohol is female. But I'm curious what is the name of a wine? What is a brand name? I know that wines like Ocean Blue will not be named after it by the winery. So what about Erguotou and Laobai doing this? If the winery chooses a name, will it be preceded by the word "Chinese"? That is, Chinese Erguotou and Chinese Laobaigan? Moutai, I know this is the brand name, but can its Maotai-flavor liquor be directly called Maotai liquor? After calling it Chinese sauce wine, can the winery use it? Another question is whether Jiuliang wine can also be used as Jiuliang wine? And I saw Cointreau in this book, but isn't Cointreau also considered a brand name? Isn't Cointreau a foreign surname? Is it possible to pronounce the name of a wine after time has settled? So can Moutai do the same? After all, the current domestic translation software basically translates Maotai-flavor liquor into Maotai, which is Maotai-flavor liquor. Although I don't think it feels right. . . But if Cointreau can also be used as a code name, then Moutai should also be suitable, right? Is Cointreau a secondary design?

To be honest, it's pretty good in pure black text, come on!

Will there be a relationship line with Sister Bei? Thank you~

I've been looking for Conan fanfics lately, and I finally found a book that suits my taste. I finished reading it in one go, and it turned out to be a formal completion, which was a bit sad. I hope the author can really finish this book. 😆