Hogwarts: Sanctuary of the Mind

As a free prostitute, I would like to apologize first. But I still want to say that I like the author's theory very much. There are actually very few students who are inherently bad. But I think this theory actually includes Draco, Snape, and even Voldemort. . . The author of Draco has already commented, so I won't say more. Snape, when he was in school, could never be the leader in the Snake Yard. (After all, he is not only good friends with a lion but also a Muggle. He who has no parental power cannot be the center of a circle in the snake yard. So when Lily discussed with him as if he would succeed if he stopped those people and how influential he was in the eyes of other people in the snake yard, I really felt that Lily didn't know anything about the snake yard. She didn't care about Snape's situation in the snake yard at all.) She thought Snape could influence the attitude of the leader of the snake yard? Do you think other snake houses would take Snape's feelings seriously? In school, the attitude of the four towards Snape was that they did not consider him to be someone's follower (that is, no seniors stood up for him) When fighting with him, they would not ridicule one of his followers (so Snape did not have any "fans") When I meet him many years later, I won't have any fear of being hurt (he may have created a spell that can seriously injure and kill him when he was in sixth grade. Snape, who had already lost Lily at that time, definitely had the urge to die with the foursome, but when Harry was in third grade, several people didn't pay any attention to Snape because he had been hurt before. It shows that Snape never had that line in his heart when he was a student. As a digression, Harry can be impulsive under Draco's ridicule. The foursome are several times more extreme than Draco.) I think Snape's status at the time was as follows The relationship with Lily made him unable to be accepted by most people in the Snake House. The remaining few are more likely to take a fancy to his talent in potions, or simply dismiss him. (And the so-called bullying is not that "severe". It is more of a spiritual impact than a physical curse. When Harry was in fourth grade, the professor said that according to their magic, even a death curse would only cause a nosebleed at most, so the black magic might be a stick with the front teeth, dancing, leg stiffness, petrification and other spells. It cannot be said that it is not harmful, but in fact, even the twins' pranks are not necessarily as harmful as it is.) (Of course, there is still a psychological blow, and it is also considered bullying, but does it really have anything to do with Snape?) Snape looks down on Muggles, but he will never discriminate against Muggle wizards. Otherwise, if he marries Lily one day, will he plan to persecute or even humiliate the other person's parents for fun? He who befriended Lily openly and honestly was a traitor by nature in the Snake Yard. (Lily herself said that all her girlfriends and friends persuaded her to give up Snape. Will the Snake House, which values ​​its position more than the Lion House, take any action? The school obviously does not care about the conflicts within the house. Just like the Goblet of Fire, when Harry was isolated from the whole house, he did not see McGonagall or Dumbledore do anything.) Who does Lily think Snape is? President of the student union? Did what he said have any impact? There is a high chance that he is just a little transparent person who barely uses his own brains to make ends meet. In the eyes of the group of people who lead the bullying, he may not be very obedient (huddled with the Lion Academy), but he is still barely a junior in this academy. He usually hangs out with the neutral forces who disdain to be as knowledgeable as a lion (Snake Academy will definitely produce people with background and strength who dare to make friends with other colleges, for profit? Personal hobbies, etc.) But falling out with his senior in public for an unfamiliar person? Do you want Snape to be completely isolated in the Snake Yard? Lily was bullied, maybe Snape would rather abandon everything and stand up, but others? Why should Snape? (He is not a hero destined to defeat the Demon King. The so-called Half-Blood Prince is just a title he crowned himself. How can he ask someone who has no strength, no power, no background, no power, and even no relationship with the victim to be the resistance hero?) And he has a causal relationship with the foursome. Snape couldn't just deliberately stir up trouble when he saw the large number of people on the other side and thought he could bully the other side. After all, he only knew how to ridicule the other person for being rude, and waiting for a lot of adjectives (the same pile he told Harry) Snape was upside down in his memory, and the only person who helped him was Lily. He obviously had no status in the Snake Yard. (Not to mention the people who were also members of the Snake House and came out to resist the foursome. There were not even those who did not want the Snake House to be humiliated.) Did he truly agree with Voldemort when he later joined the Death Eaters, or did he actually have no other choice? (A potion master is not born with one, and has the financial resources and raw materials to cultivate his talent and grow slowly. If he had other choices, would he sincerely join an organization that discriminates against Muggle wizards (Lily) and mixed-blood wizards (himself)?) As for the Death Eaters. Stop insulting early Death Eaters with later Death Eaters. Just like don't use the later Voldemort to touch the early Tom. Tom's evaluation in school is that he is a student loved by all the colleges and teachers. (Perfect Charm) (Except for Dumbledore, who went to pick him up and saw him before he entered school and was wary) What is the connection between a Tom who was fully charming and knew how to disguise himself, and the cruel and ruthless Voldemort who only knew how to rule brutally in the later period? I am more inclined to the influence of Horcruxes. For example, someone was accidentally killed in school, and Tom lost his humanity. (If you feel like killing someone, just kill someone. As long as the profit is enough, you can kill as many people as you want) I tricked the old woman into getting the golden cup, killed her, and lost my patience (I could work for so long and be patient for my own purposes before, but after making a Horcrux, I lost the caution of planning everything before taking action) Killing my uncle, I lost my feelings. In that box, he lost his eloquence, charm and so on to seduce others And then step by step he turned into the Dark Lord in the later period who had no brains, no charm, not even planning and reason, and only had magic power. Not to mention other second-year Tom can also charm Harry's super fan Ginny. In the box, he also had the ability to seduce Ron and turn dark, but after rebirth, he only knew how to yell, curse, kill in public, and humiliate to build his power??? After all, to put it bluntly, Hagrid is a giant half-blood (his brain is not good and his grades may not necessarily pass, and his strength cannot keep up with other peers) But he was wronged by a person from the Snake Yard. After all these years, he actually didn't think that the Snake Yard was deliberately setting the blame, that the other party was deliberately causing harm, or even that the other party was discriminating against him, but that it was a misunderstanding? ) It can be said that Hagrid has grown up after so many years and no longer holds a grudge, but I prefer to believe that it was Tom's charm and disguise ability back then. To put it bluntly, if Tom had kept pretending and gained recognition from so many families, he would have been the Minister of Magic a long time ago. But one wrong step and the other wrong, getting the first Horcrux may be the moment that Tom's life goes off track. Slowly, he changed from a master of disguise who knew how to pursue long-term interests and allowed himself to grow patiently and face everyone cautiously, to a terrorist who only saw short-term interests, was ambitious and didn't know how to hide, was bloody and cruel but didn't know how to disguise, had no charm, only knew how to use torture to threaten and oppress his subordinates, didn't know how to exchange benefits and lure, and only knew how to commit murder everywhere. . . After all, Dumbledore is an old concealer, everyone agrees with this, right (at least he is almost perfect in hiding himself) But what is the kind of ghostly appearance of the second-generation Dark Lord who opposed him and asked him to establish the Order of the Phoenix??? Not to mention anything else, even Ron, Harry's best friend, dared to try to turn him into a black man when he saw him. If Tom in his prime (complete with soul and sanity) saw the first-generation Dark Lord who fell in love with and killed Dumbledore, wouldn't he try to persuade him to turn dark, release him to stir up trouble, and then slowly lurk and become a fisherman? The later he gets, the less he looks like a leader. He cannot even express his emotions and anger and become a reckless man. It can only be that the Horcrux misled someone. I don't want to whitewash him, I just feel that the reckless man in the later period is completely inconsistent with the image of the charming master of disguise in the early stage. There are too many contradictions between the two. Then there is Professor Kino. I quite like (Hogwarts' Professor of Magic) (now a eunuch), but I think many of the comments in it are reasonable. For example, the evaluation of Professor Chino. Obviously the back of his head was parasitized, but he went to great lengths to create a giant monster with the same weakness in the back of his head to use as a level Obviously there was a bigger giant in the level, but he was stunned by a smaller one (reasonably causing others to doubt him) Obviously in the magical world, accidents often happen, and falling from a height may not cause death, especially in a scene where there are teachers, seniors, and referees. (To warn others that the target is Harry) (Just as Snape, the potions master, was bitten to death by a poisonous snake, but Ron's father, who was also attacked by the same snake, had no sequelae as long as he was rescued in time) In front of everyone, I don't believe that Harry can fall to death in public. And you can use perfume to cover it up, but you have to use garlic. (Disrespect to Voldemort?) In the end, as an adult wizard, he gave up his spells and wands, and had to fight Harry, who had restrained himself, with bare hands. (Seeking death???) I prefer to believe that he is not weak, (he has been using Occlumency to hide his true thoughts and convince the brainless Voldemort to believe in the plan that is full of leaks) Garlic also deliberately made it more difficult for Voldemort to stay awake and give himself more space to think. (After all, no one dares to uncover other teachers' clothes. Snape still has the Dark Mark on his arm and he doesn't wear robes every day.) You put a fixing charm, add a little perfume or a deodorizing charm, and no one will notice what is under your hat. . . So in addition to the fact that Harry Potter is a children's book, the villain must be simple and clear, and all actions must have a direct connection with the later period. (Troll's back head, Kino's back head, etc.) I prefer to believe that Kino, the former Muggle professor, is not the same person as Voldemort. Being parasitized, I couldn't resist openly, but I was always holding back secretly. It was a bit confusing, sorry. I hope it won't disrupt the author's main plot. As for why I say so much, I can only say that I quite like the author's stance. The people on Harry's protagonist's side may be righteous on the whole, but that doesn't mean that all of their actions are correct. On the other hand, although the villain is generally wrong, it does not mean that they have no room for correction. In the book, they are all children in the process of growing up. Many of their later behaviors do not mean that they were blackened in the early stages. In the later period, Dumbledore was assassinated for the sake of his family's life, but that doesn't mean that Draco didn't really want to be friends with Harry at the beginning. Joining the Death Eaters in the later period does not mean that Snape was a person who showed off his power and bullied others every day during school. Many things have cause and effect. People who turn black in the later stage do not mean that they are irrescuable in the early stage. The correct protagonist in the later stage also does not mean that all actions in the early stage are correct. Personal position I hate the quartet, and I feel the same way for Snape. After all this experience. For example, I used to queue up for lunch. Someone I knew but was not familiar with came over and asked to jump in line. If you object, you are not giving him face. In the future, he may make trouble for you and say bad things about you, but if you acquiesce, they will not treat you as a friend because of this. At most, you can just chat a few words to maintain the relationship so that I can take advantage of you in the future... But in the eyes of others, you may just agree to let them jump in line and bully all the other people waiting in line behind you. . . Lily acted as if someone behind the team told me afterwards that he wanted me to resist the opponent. They are a group of people who smoke and dye their hair in school and skateboard and fight in school. What ability do I have to seek justice? Isn't it enough that I know that I will not jump in line or bully others??? Just because he is my classmate, I must fall out with him in public and sever all ties to ensure that I am not his accomplice??? Isn't it enough for Snape to avoid staining because of the sludge (without taking the initiative to bully the Lion House) Must he purify all the sludge or cut off ties with the sludge and become a withered flower without any nutritional supply? He is not the protagonist, and he does not have the ability to reverse the opposition between the Snake Court and the Lion Court. Not all people who stand by and watch are perpetrators, many may just be poor people who dare not express their attitude. (Sorry. I said too many unintelligible things.)

It seems that many people want to know if there is a female protagonist and who is the female protagonist? Let me tell you here that there is no role for the heroine in the synopsis for the time being, (I am single myself, why does O Luolin have a partner! Unless there is a rich sister who wants to customize the heroine, then please contact me!) Even if there is a heroine, it is unlikely to be the main role. After all, O Luolin is a 32-year-old wizard. Looking for a child of the same age will mean that he is descended from several generations out of thin air. Moreover, in Ouluolin's case, it is unlikely that he will fall in love with others. As for long-term love and the like, it is not love, but too much emotional investment that makes him reluctant to bear the sunk cost. However, there will be no shortage of scenes for the main characters. After all, I think the fans really like to see what the original characters will look like when instigated by butterfly wings.

Wake up, come and post pictures. Thinking about coloring. There are templates.

1. Draco Malfoy was assigned to Gryffindor; 2. There are many original characters; 3. The protagonist often disappears; 4. The Quidditch game is basically skipped; 5. There is no heroine; 6. More world views are shown through dialogue; 7. The second setting is more more; 8. The rhythm is more relaxed; 9. There is no pretentiousness; 10. There are many pitfalls, and some foreshadowings are in the form of bugs; 11. The author has a bad temper; 12. To be added... Statement: as logic Weird, reasonable party, I really like well-founded criticism, such as what is not logical, which sentence is problematic, which word is inappropriate, etc. If this happens, please point it out boldly, thank you very much... If the logic is clear, but you can't turn a corner for a while, it doesn't matter, feel calm. He Di pointed out that I don't mind part-time guest appearance as a Chinese teacher. After all, this is not a mindless novel. It's normal to not be able to read it But you clearly can't understand it and you still insist on quarreling with it. Then please get out of here, or let's have an online trash talk PK. I work for myself anyway, so I'm very free. The author who only tries to code words when he has nothing to do at work has a bad temper, so forgive me)

There are too many private affairs, and the plot content is far less than the large sections of private affairs. Although private goods are usually introduced from the plot, the lack of content often has nothing to do with the plot. They are all the author's speculations about the original work or simply secondary settings to supplement the background. Moreover, the protagonist seems to be a fun-loving person who likes to show off and bully others. This is very different from the author's emphasis on the protagonist being a low-key and powerful genius wizard. The author also explains the reasons for each bullying to the protagonist to supplement the past plot, but this seems to be as childish as a little boy in kindergarten bullying a little girl to attract the other's attention. Even the illusion magic that the protagonist is proficient in has no effect except bullying students and his own people. In the pre-release content, the protagonist was simply tricked with black magic items, which was of no use at all. Although the author's writing style is not bad, there are more private articles than the main text. The fragmented image of my protagonist really pushed me to the limit. I hope the author will continue to work hard and the content in the future will not be so empty.

Peacock is the first book by a new author. He is a relatively egocentric author with his own ideas, and it is difficult to take care of the needs of all readers. This book was relatively slow to catch on in the early stages. It has been building its own story background based on Harry Potter. I hope everyone will be more lenient. It is still a seedling that needs care. The foreshadowing is just because everyone has a different perspective. I also feel that the current progress of the story of three steps and one pit is a bit difficult to read and cannot be understood. But I believe that Peacock's writing style and Peacock's personality will definitely give you a reasonable explanation later. At the same time, I also hope that when this book is finished, it will become a good book worthy of everyone's nod of approval. It turns out that it is worthy of everyone to go back and read it a second and third time, and carefully consider every word and paragraph. I hope everyone will give him more time and support.

It's Saruman! Finally finished touching it! Although it is already the second day of the Lunar New Year, happy New Year! Now that all three have been touched, it's time to play! (paralyzed)

Happy New Year! Touch Oluolin who was forced to give out red envelopes! Maomao and Crow will be posted tomorrow!

I was forced to post the picture by the fear bird (trembling) I touched it before discussing the specific appearance, so there are some wrong things, such as the hat I was too lazy to draw (?), The three rings are large, medium, and small... But I don't want to change it (paralyzed) The posture is a reference (after all, a rookie) (thoughts) The sideburns should also be long, but, I don't want to change it. The summary is to open up!

(Thinking as shown in the picture) (There is a template) (But it has been changed) (But it is still weird) (Keep going!)