Where the Moon Sets

Let me tell my friends that the book "Where the Moonlight Lands" will consist of two parts. The moonlight is as beautiful as the moonlight, and the moonlight is both a solitary guest in the world and a pure joy in the world. The first half is all my beautiful fantasies about youth, and the second half is the regrets and misses in real youth. "Mistakes are temporary regrets, but misses are eternal regrets."

After reading it, I would like to make a few suggestions: 1. Your book is a relatively new one that I have read so far. It uses the first person perspective and has a strong sense of immersion. Regarding the first person, someone once gave me some suggestions, because my first book also used the first person, but it was not as good as your book, so I think the first person is very good! 2. Well... How should I put it? I feel that one chapter is a bit short. It can be written step by step, about 2,000 words. It will be easier to read and some places can be written in detail. In this case, the number of words can be increased and the description can be more detailed! 3. I don't know how old the author is, but I am a sophomore in high school. After reading your book, I thought of my own campus life, haha, I have a strong sense of immersion! 4. Overall, the subject matter is good and the writing style is novel. Come on!

It's very interesting. The college student said he misses him very much.

The immaturity of youth can evoke memories for many people. It is recommended to use the environment to exaggerate the characters. Dialogue is not very evocative of memories. Come on.

Come on

Chasing third place, daily three votes. You have suddenly become busy now. You are always online so late.

What is unique to her is also indistinguishable from her, so beautiful! Great work, more updates, Mochizuki, keep watching

Oh my god, Wangyue is late because she has been busy with audit work recently! It had been a few days since most of the movies were finished, and Wangyue just rushed over. Sorry!

Come here to applaud the boss for his persistence.

You haven't updated for a few days again. I've already released new books. When will you release new books?

Why did you stop updating? I have been watching it.

Why haven't you signed it yet? Are you refusing to sign it? Qidian's signings are getting weirder and weirder. They're signing all kinds of bad fan stories, but they won't sign such good original works.

At this time, he is actually only third...

The biggest advantage of this book, I think, is that the writing is fresh and moving, and the reader has a strong sense of involvement, and can unconsciously recall the years of the lush campus. The disadvantage is that it relies too much on the sense of substitution. How should I put it? It's just very empty and hard to explain. It allows the protagonist to go through some more difficulties (maybe I said it too early, I'll write about it later). How can I say that true youth is not only bad, but also sad. Such as parents quarreling, friendship breakdown. Without these, it would be like a utopia. Although it is very beautiful, it lacks some human fireworks But I still have to praise it^ω^ This article is the most refreshing writing I have seen this year. This is what I came here for at the beginning, so cheers^V^

2000 Recommendation votes and no signing, are the editors *🌚🌚?

How did the author end it?

After 9 days, it seems that the author has abandoned the article!

Your writing style impresses me. I like you very much.

{"NickName":"36 degrees Celsius","UserId":402656800} The author felt that he couldn't write anymore, so he deleted the second volume? This leaves only the first volume, which is considered complete. Although there is no way around it. But I still feel it's such a pity.

Another book of yours has been removed from the shelves, so you can only continue to vote for this one. When will you come back and continue writing?

I haven't seen anyone for so long, where have I gone...

Have you changed your account and been resurrected? 😰 Long time no see