The Return of the Dragon King of Douluo

The article is full of typos. When Ma Xiaotao's evil fire breaks out in the plot, her martial soul is shattered by Ma Xiaotao. The information between the two parties is not equal and the other party does not know that you can repair yourself. According to the author, ordinary people are already useless. Ma Xiaotao has no guilt and shamelessly comes to joke and touch, just to help himself purify the evil fire. The protagonist is really generous and has no temper at all. He is really a great saint. Shrek is also awesome. He told Ma Xiaotao what good things he would get after meeting the protagonist, but did not mention the consequences of losing his mind at all. He also did not propose any compensation measures for the protagonist. Is it just cultivating in the golden tree? According to the information obtained by the other party, this can at best keep the body well, but the person's cultivation talent will be ruined. How can a normal person endure this? Is the title Douluo, the father of the protagonist, just a decoration?

The Blue Electric Tyrannosaurus is not domineering enough, so it needs to be called the Blue Electric Tyrannosaurus.

The writing of this novel is really disgusting. I have been kneeling and licking her as a nanny all the time. The author even calls it a favor.

Shennong is dead and Wuhun was deposed by Ma Xiaotao. There is no explanation. It is really disgusting. From this paragraph, I can probably tell the future of this book, so I will take a step first to avoid wasting time.

First of all, the title of the book is embarrassing Secondly, I suspect that the author has never even read the original work (although what San Shao wrote is a piece of shit), but you kid just eats the setting Secondly, there are so many typos that are scary

How to say it? If this novel was born in five or six years, it should be okay, but now it is a bit poisonous Although I haven't read much of Entering the Academy, it is too homogenous with the original work; When the protagonist has a soul power of up to thirty-sixth level, Huo Yuhao is still the squad leader, which is also unreasonable. It is not convincing; In addition, the pace of the writing is uncomfortable, the details are not appropriate, and it is too fast when it should be slow; In addition, it is more frustrating to read than the original work. Although it is not meant to be fun all the way, it gives people the feeling that the protagonist is drifting with the flow, has no independent opinion, and the family has no deterrent effect.

There are too many typos and sentences in this book! This is not the key. The key is that I mentioned it to the author and he still didn't change it! I have tried the poison for you. If you haven't read this book yet, you can go, you're welcome!

How will you deal with the relationship with Shrek and Huo Yuhao in the future? If you want to become a god, it will definitely be impossible without becoming an enemy of Tang San. If you want to lick the KKK, you should tell them in advance.

The subject matter is quite good. Before entering Shrek, it was just okay. After entering Shrek, I basically copied the original work. There are many poisonous points and typos, which wastes my creativity.

I didn't finish reading the injury part. I don't know if there will be compensation. But i left

I feel like the protagonist is just a licker, with no opinions of his own at all. If he continues to develop like this, he won't have many future achievements.

It's all typos and grammatical errors, gone

I remember that the Noumenon Sect did not participate in the first Soul Master Competition, and no sect participated in the Xingluo Competition.

I have bad eyesight. If you find typos, you can post them below (thank you and kowtow)

The protagonist should say, use thunder to crush the darkness ('▿')

Is it the Crooked Dragon King, or is the Dragon King returning? Has anyone finished reading it? Tell me, will it be embarrassing to watch?

Not quite. . . All I can say is that the future is promising. . .

The protagonist's martial soul's name is really good. Let's change the author.

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