Sunagakure's Sandstorm Twins

After reading ten chapters, I have a few suggestions: 1. Don't just write about how handsome the pig's feet are. I'm really speechless. Do relationships only depend on face, especially when the classmate in front of you treats the protagonist as a monster, and the female classmate in the back instantly turns into a bitch? 2. To gain bonds, you don't have to focus on one person. Isn't it better to learn other ninjutsu first? It's not necessary to reach the full level. 3. I feel that there is no clear plan. For example, if you want to write about Gaara, you must take his father into consideration, instead of writing about his father's sneak attack and pig's feet being careless and not taking into account.

Not gay, not gay, not gay again. I just feel that Gaara was so lonely when he was a child, and suddenly he would feel embarrassed when he suddenly met someone who also had the same sand ability as him and was very enthusiastic about him. As I emphasized before, even among family members, no one behaves so intimately towards Gaara.

Let me ask you where you all saw my book. At first I thought my book had been discontinued, but unexpectedly there were some comments on it in the past two days. Did I get it randomly or something.

Full of gay love, a story with two male protagonists?

Wow, it does feel a little disgusting. . . Gaara arched like a kitten in the male protagonist's arms, rubbing against him, which was really unbearable. . Hahaha what the hell! !

Now I can't tell what the protagonist's stance is, and it feels a bit confusing.

Great, I like this book. It's very stylish, right?

Come in and take a look at the daily guide. It was updated two days ago? Slipping away.