Become the Dark Night Wind Lord from Devouring

I haven't read the original novel yet, but I've watched some anime before writing a fanfic?

I just finished watching War of Geniuses, and I feel that the author's arrangement of the protagonist is reasonable. Although the protagonist himself is powerful in combat, he only understands the wind attribute. If he cannot understand the attributes of space and time in the future, the most he can do is wait for immortality. Even the immortal king cannot achieve it. In the original work, the immortal king knows how to teleport or the speed of time in the attributes of space and time, so Bolan is asked to stop the protagonist here to see if the protagonist has understood the advanced attributes before making the next judgment.

Niubi, Hong and Luo Feng can definitely enter the top 100 in the universe, but the author is just writing randomly.

The title of the book has been changed. Although the results are not good, this is my first time writing a novel. Please forgive me. There is also the secret method discussed by the two brothers. I really didn't think so much about it at the beginning. I would like to thank brothers Mo and Feng for pointing out the error. It has been corrected now. As for the problem of still not defeating Bolan, we can only follow the backlash that caused Bolan to die first in the original text, otherwise all subsequent chapters will have to be changed. There is also the problem that everyone said that they have not read the original work. In fact, I have read it 4-5 times and also read many fans. However, the author reads the novel very quickly, which is the kind of reading ten lines at a glance, so many details are not grasped in place. The original intention of this novel was It was a whim, and I really couldn't find any fanfics that I could read. They were all the same kind of winning the first place in the genius battle, so I thought that the protagonist would not enter the primitive secret realm and the Taichu secret realm, but come to the secret realm of heaven and earth and rush to the primitive secret realm with his own efforts. But when I was writing, it was very difficult to grasp the things. I didn't know how to start. Sometimes I couldn't finish a chapter for two or three hours. This made me feel the feeling of being high-handed but low-eyed. It really looks simple but is difficult to do. I couldn't even use symbols well at the beginning. It was really a waste of reading so many years of reading. (Here I pay homage to several good Devouring fan fiction authors.) The author is a science student and is really not very interested in Chinese.         ，，，，， Finally, I would like to say sorry to the brothers, and thank those who pointed out the mistakes. I hope everyone can comment more. Whether it is criticism or encouragement, the author welcomes it and will actively correct the mistakes. Thank you, readers.

Don't write science fiction the same way you write fantasy. Sea-based instability does not require a planetary understanding of the realm. If you realize your planet, you will only have better talent than others and start earlier than others. Luo Feng relied on the golden-horned behemoth to break through the realm of cosmic comprehension. The golden-horned giant beast eats metallic substances every day. Do you think its foundation is unstable?

The feudal-level secret method cannot defeat Bolan's problem. Did the author seem to be talking about giving Bolan seconds directly? It was just because he was seriously injured or had backlash that he died before Bolan.

As the adopted son of the second most powerful man on earth, he also has a very good relationship. Isn't he the god of thunder? I still couldn't give you any advice, so I ran to the Extreme Martial Arts Gym in a miserable way, even taking my daughter with me. You simply followed the original work. At that time, you were still a warrior-level Thor and a planet-level master. It was more than enough to just organize it, so why did you have to take advantage of the popularity? I have to wait for Luo Feng

Are all the world masters of the secret realm of the apocalypse recognized by the law? It was written in the original work, but the mistake was admitted by the law before he was barely qualified to enter the secret realm of the apocalypse!

Based on what you wrote, I might as well review the original work. When I read Chapter 7, I just didn't feel that I was a fan, so I followed the original work all the way! Embarrassing😅 Slip away

No more opponents?

I've been so busy these past two weeks that I didn't even have time to watch the Devouring anime. I just watched it today, the one about "We follow Major General Luo Feng to attack!" Totally makes my blood boil! ! !

After reading two or three chapters of this novel, it reminded me of a Douyin video of a primary school student writing a novel. This Devouring Starry Sky fanfic is the only one I can't stand 🙂

The fan writing is okay, come on, author, don't give up. I've seen a lot of good fan writing, but for some reason, it all ends badly.

I'm tired of reading it. There is no punctuation mark. Isn't it okay to use "" when speaking? If you don't want to bring one: This one will work too. Line feed and page feed do nothing.

I would like to give the author a big suggestion. Please change the punctuation marks in the first few chapters. It is really uncomfortable to read. The chapters that were originally designed to attract people to read have caused readers to run away because of the punctuation. Isn't it more of a loss?

Did the author overlook something? Babata had no entity during the Earth Chapter. Its original body was destroyed. Luo Feng gave it a body in the middle period. After Luo Feng resurrected Huyanbo, Babata returned to Huyanbo. He only brought a clone of Babata.

Rubbish, just follow the original work again