Crazy, You Call Him a Stalker

After reading it, I didn't understand what I was writing at all. There is neither main line nor branch line. The character design is a mess, with a devilish smile and a ruthless attitude? Are you going to create a killer? Perverted murderer? Fortune teller? Or a domineering president?

I didn't understand Chaos, there was no background explanation, the beginning was chaos and killing, I couldn't understand the two worlds, so I left.

Either no heroine, or many heroines, single heroine is boring

It was a bit confusing to watch, but I still liked the plot.

I think the plot is messy, but the hunting game is well written and the writing is average.

Little black or big black (unreasonable association)

What are you writing? The previous game suddenly started to depict reality at the age of 19, and then the characters were not introduced at all.

The front part is okay, but the back part has no meaning at all. It's a self-titled article again....

The protagonist smiles evilly and the author disappears

Is the background outside the game a high-tech aristocracy? Is it biotechnology? There are quite a few bugs! The character background creation failed, is he an experiment or a modified person? The dead companions gave him a goal to survive, and he killed for a living, mainly killing nobles. His teammates are unreliable, they are still engaged in scientific research, and they have poor moral values. In-game. . . What the hell? It looks like a high-level player, but it is actually a chess piece or variable that others use to open up the situation. The plot is interesting and the operation is totally astonishing. The writing needs to be improved. The plot alone is fine, but the whole worldview is ruined.