Prayers for Gentle Country

The writing is very beautiful and spiritual. I would like to offer two ideas in terms of form and content. I declare in advance that my level is very limited and I am just a newbie. Please forgive me for any mistakes I make. Formally, it is recommended that when dividing into segments, it should be divided into smaller pieces. Divide one sentence or two sentences into paragraphs. This is because mobile typesetting is different from traditional books. The characters in mobile typesetting are too small and too dense. If there are not enough paragraphs, it is easy to be serialized. I didn't know this until later, so I spent a whole week revising the paragraphs of six to seven hundred thousand words. In terms of content, I would like to mention this: Whether it is an online article or even a traditional novel, there is a popular way of writing, and the secret is "if". If you read many online articles, they all start with this theme: What would happen to me if I traveled through time with a system and became Qin Shihuang? What would happen to me if I returned to northern Shaanxi with a universal treasure box? What would happen if it was Vegeta instead of Kakarot who came to Earth? What would happen if my first love and my lover changed bodies ... Many novels throw out this "what if" at the beginning. Even the more extreme trend is that for current novices, from the title to the introduction, you must directly state the "what if" you want to tell the story. This process is to screen readers. Qidian claims to have hundreds of millions of readers. Not everyone wants to see Vegeta, and not everyone wants to see Shaanbei. In the beginning, even throwing out "what if" in the title can help you get readers faster. On the other hand, if you don't throw out "what if" at the beginning, readers will simply ignore it and read the next one because they don't know what story you are going to write. This makes today's so-called "Three Golden Chapters" or even the "Golden Chapter" extremely important. Although it is not good, there is nothing we can do about it. This is the law of communication. Just imagine, if the videos on Bilibili or even the short videos on Douyin were not clickbait, would you continue to watch them? You may not necessarily have the patience to wait for the video up owner to slowly lay the groundwork and slowly build up suspense, right? The same goes for novels. Titles are very important, and the core of headlines is to show what you are going to write. The key to this "what to write" is the word "if". Your story is beautiful, I like it very much. But if we don't retain readers, such a beautiful story will be missed. Wouldn't it be a pity? The above is purely my personal opinion. I welcome criticism if it is not in place. 😊😊😊 Wish you good luck with your creation

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I'll wait for another five months and I'll be able to update all the time. I couldn't help but start posting eagerly before the college entrance examination. We will keep updating during the winter vacation, but we will stop updating after school starts (tears) (Damn it, I'm so impatient) The exam will be over in two weeks, and I'll be able to write properly during the winter vacation soon (tears)

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