Beyond All Worlds

The writing is good, but the author is indifferent. Among the more famous novels of the same type, the main world encounters difficulties, and then travels to other worlds and uses golden fingers to push all the way to change the world in a short period of time. And this novel can be read as another novel in other worlds. It is too long-winded and does not distinguish the priorities at all.

There are only about twenty chapters in total, and we didn't travel until more than ten chapters ago. Please, please highlight the main plot, okay? Why are you wasting so much time talking? I've never seen a gold finger officially used until more than ten chapters in. Besides, what kind of resources are you wasting? What's there for those people to investigate? You should not collect the skills first, but seize the time to travel. There is also the author's question about the energy levels of the world. You have to describe the upper limit of each energy level and how many sources of energy correspond to which energy levels. You can't be the Riddler. The settings are really fun.

I just saw that this surname Gu reminds me of King Gu.

The book is okay, but the plot is too strong. For example, pig's feet are on the run, and end up fighting with garbage enemies? Just to learn from combat experience? I'll go and wait for you to kill this person and change your identity. Can't I learn from the experience? Do you have to fight with someone at the risk of being exposed? As a result, the identity was exposed, and a lot of enemies came. The plot was too blunt. I hope the author can write it well.

This book is not bad, but the plot is too cliche, it is a cliche plot, and there is no new idea. It can be seen at a glance, and it is not very attractive. What I am looking forward to is the daily life after the protagonist and the eldest princess get married. It is a pity that the author did not write these first. After reading 25 chapters, I really can't stand it because it didn't attract me. I feel that I have read more than 50 books with this kind of plot. It is so cliche that I have no expectations. Please kick me when you see the protagonist and the eldest princess get married. I will read it then. Thank you.

I really can't stand it anymore. A bunch of ghosts are talking about priorities. How come there is no distinction between priorities? It's only a few chapters and a few words, and yet you're saying that it's indiscriminate? Is this too long for a copy? Is it necessary to write it like a simulator with two chapters and one world? And I said from the beginning that you won't see it in all the heavens and worlds? The more worlds like this the better. Finally, maybe you can go to a high-level world to break the level limit of the main world. And isn't it good to have diverse systems in each world? For example, fishing in Zhutian, but it's a pity that it's unfinished.

Yuanli hasn't made any move yet, right? This thing should be real-time. For example, you get as much as you get on the list, and you get as much as you do for whatever you do. It's too profitable to settle the calculation in the end.

Why is the copy so long? Distinguish priorities

There are too few originals in the world, so finally there is another one. I hope the cultivation system is not about cultivating immortals. I am tired of cultivating immortals.

The energy levels are too different. A bowl of ten-degree water cannot exceed 11 degrees no matter how much is added. It is useless to put ten-degree water into 2000-degree water.

In fact, the author's plot is very good. As long as this status is maintained, the monthly tickets will slowly increase. As long as the style remains the same. The style has changed and the taste has changed. The taste has changed, but don't write too much about the Virgin. I have read nearly hundreds of birth mother books. I'm tired of watching it. The author should write more decisively about the sofa. Or it should be written that the protagonist is vicious and vicious, and will do anything for profit. This may be a selling point. Because there are relatively few books here. I've read too many books about the Holy Mother, and everyone likes this kind of broken sofa.

It feels good, but there is no distinction between priority and priority. This is a common problem of many such books. You should write about the main world. The world is just a golden finger for the protagonist to add to the background. Otherwise, it will be inferior. There are too many chapters in the sub-world and the plot is too long.

This book cannot be read, why do you say so! How can anyone read a slow article if you don't have any fans? It's not a question of whether the copy is long or not. If you can update more than 10,000 words a day, it means you can write a copy of hundreds of thousands of words. If a newcomer writes a slow article and the update is slow, who will follow up? So when you say your copy is too long, it doesn't mean that you write too many numbers in one copy. It means that your copy actually lasts for more than a month. If you finish writing it like this, it will take more than a month to finish. Who will read it.

It's okay, but it's too wordy. It could have been solved a long time ago, but I kept putting it off. I was being chased and it was still so stained. I don't know what the author was thinking. He was not decisive at all.

Are all original worlds?

The 11-year-old fan came uninvited.

The first world was too long.

If the author does not understand the class divisions, he can design levels 1 to 5. If the author has better content, I'll forget about it. When it comes to level five, it's neither too high nor too low. If designed this way, the protagonist will not be too over the top.

Just a small white text, spray lightly. Withdraw

I'm afraid you're a eunuch. Books like this start with a very exciting beginning and it's gg before the 200th chapter.

It seems okay, why is there no update?

Author, can you please update more? Otherwise, I won't give you a monthly pass.

Update soon. The author writes very well

If you update the author, I will update the two pages together. It was more than 12 o'clock when we separated. Just update it together when you update it.

The author writes about the next world, a world of monsters and monsters. Like Cthulhu of the East. The title should be catchy.

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