The Rumored Almighty Beast Master Is Actually Me

The subject matter is very novel, but the detailed description of the battle and the subtlety of the language are not enough. At the same time, the characters still need to be strengthened, and each person's character is not obvious enough. Come on! Come on!

I'm sorry to trouble you all about following up╰(⇀‸↼)╯

I hope there will be more interactions and conflicts with people to expand the description of the world, and I hope there will be more emotional exchanges between the heroine and her beast. Otherwise, the whole article will be like a running account, only about the heroine, not connected to the world, and it will look boring. The whole story seems very dry. The golden finger is too big and has no limitations. It seems that everything is very easy. However, it lacks links and descriptions to other people, and there is no comparison or conflict. It seems that the heroine has nothing to do and is busy working blindly. There is no feeling of being positive and working hard to move forward.

Introduction: There is a book club group Everyone can join the group chat to chat, whip the author or something

5 Characters on the first floor~, if the price is over 4000, it is limited to the first floor for one day (ʃƪ ˘ ³˘) Dear friends, add some dumplings (´∀｀)♡

If you have any questions about this book, you can write them below this post and the author will answer them when he is free ∠( ᐛ ∠)_ The chapter review is not easy to answer, so I will answer it here Thank you again for your support (*๓´╰╯`๓)♡

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