Douluo: Angry Master at the Beginning

The content of this article by the author is quite good. The protagonist shows gratitude and repays his kindness. I hope the author will be more prudent in writing emotional lines in the future 👍

The thirty-ninth book that was fully ordered, what can I say, I read it in one day, I just barely read it without thinking. There are a lot of bad points, the most important thing is why so many chapters were deleted, and Lu Fei can't see that it has any big effect, and it's hard to give away the daughter.

Luffy is the biggest downfall of this book

Seeing the protagonist raising Luffy as a father and giving him all kinds of skills, I couldn't bear it. Luffy couldn't bear to give Hu Liena to him, so he started to get angry. When I saw Zhu Zhuqing giving it to Hong Maoyan, I couldn't bear it anymore and died of poison.

The writing was okay, but Lu Fei had too many plots. An original supporting character became one of the fixed characters. The protagonist shared all his skills with him, and the foreign server soul bone seemed to be ten thousand years old and was also given to him. What is the difference between him and the protagonist? Most people who read novels hope that the protagonist is unique, but what you have done here is that there is no difference between the two except for the proficiency.

The protagonist's name is Lu Yu. I don't know how to make tea?

It's a very good novel. Although it's a little bit toxic, overall the IQ is still online. Even if there are problems in some places, it can still be justified. Personally, I think it can be ranked among the top five in new Douluo fan fiction books.

It's poisonous. You can get away with a lot of money without getting anything when you enter the Wuhun Palace. Even a licking dog would lick like this. Not to mention sending a girl as a gift. The person who licked his cheek and said it was not poisonous and pushed it to me has been beaten to death.

It's very poisonous, just like the thinking of an elementary school student. The fat man next to him, Lu Fei, is a huge poison, with mediocre talent and low IQ. However, the protagonist received half of the jelly grass, and all the opportunities such as system rewards were given to him. He was forced to become a genius, and then he gave Hu Liena jelly grass and acted as a matchmaker to make them good. This nanny is disgusting. There is also an opportunity like a bunch of people from Wuhun Palace giving jelly grass when they meet for the first time.

If you don't even have a decent introduction, anyone with even the slightest bit of logic will be poisoned by your introduction. What does it mean to let people know what ordinary martial arts can do, and then come up with a systematic system? Then you are talking nonsense. If you weren't hanging, you wouldn't be able to crawl as well, so why are you pretending to be a big-tailed wolf? Just like Ah Dou and Zilong killing each other seven in and seven out, and then Ah Dou yelled that I can do seven in and seven out just like a baby. Isn't this just funny? I don't know what the actual content is, and I don't have the courage to click in. I say this because I hope the author can speak logically.

Why would you give Zhu Zhuqing to Yan? I don't understand. Regardless of whether you read the original work or the fanfic, this is what he is, a complete licker, and to put it bluntly, he is just a fucking passerby. If you don't accept it, don't give it away. What do you think of the author? You Duguyan, you want it, why don't you want Zhu Zhuqing? Even Bibi Dong doesn't want it if you have the ability! Give it to Yu Xiaogang, this is a little bit poisonous, and Luffy, don't tell me what I just saw, I'm all set, sorry

Author, you are over three years old

Let me talk about my personal views on the character Lu Fei. The author will try not to fall into this trap again in the future. To be honest, the role of Lu Fei has been solidified in my impression. If the author wants to remedy it, he can only downplay or modify his character flaws in the middle and later stages. For now, this guy has taken so many resources from the protagonist and has never done anything outstanding. It can only be said that he is quite decent, and the aura around him is completely built up by the protagonist using resources, and there is no bright spot in himself. Looking at this guy's performance, he has obviously suffered a big loss in the arena, lost half his life, and almost couldn't become a soul master. The protagonist begged his grandfather and grandma, first he owed Qian Renxue a favor, and then he owed Ye Lian Lian a favor to cure him. In order to repay the favor between the two, the protagonist gave away two elixirs. This may also be an arrangement by the author, who wants to promote the subsequent plot and bring the two of them together. No evaluation here. But look at what this guy did later. Well... I really didn't show much, and the matter passed lightly. Only a few days later, this guy started to live carelessly again, eating, drinking, and taking what he should. Obviously such an event that can change a person's life has happened, but I can't see any growth in this guy. He can accept everything the protagonist gives him with peace of mind. This is the most unpleasant thing. Don't say that Lu Fei is still a child now. He is still young and cannot have too high demands. Why is the character Zhu Zhuqing so popular? The early efforts of a girl with only level seven innate soul power almost caught up with Tang San, who had full innate soul power. In the few years after taking the fairy grass, her soul power improved even more than Tang San and others. If Tang San hangs up too much, Zhu Zhuqing can slap all the talented members of Shrek in the face by himself. Whether it was before taking the fairy grass or after taking the fairy grass, Zhu Zhuqing never relaxed a little bit. She kept strict demands on herself and kept chasing the footsteps of the protagonist group, because she knew that she had the worst qualifications among everyone. This is not about Zhu Zhuqingchui, but this girl's qualities are exactly what Lu Fei lacks.

I have only read the free chapter so far, and I feel it is okay, but one thing I feel is very strange, what is the use of Lu Fei? The author said that he is a tool man, but now I only see that the protagonist spends a lot of effort on maintenance and upgrades, but there is no use. I just want to find a way to conquer the Nine-Star Begonia. There is a family, but the family of a single line is definitely not big. It will not be awkward like Qibao if the interests conflict after conquering.

Is this Han sword handsome?

So the title of the book is "Angry against the Master", and the book must be written around the master's death-seeking behavior? Even after Chapter 180, the master is not killed. I think this is like the villain in many novels who repeatedly jumps around without killing him. It feels very poisonous... I feel that the master is the protagonist of this book. The author wants to write about how disgusting the master is, but he will not die. The whole plot revolves around how the master commits suicide and how to punish the master, while the other characters in this book are like foils...

This book is still okay. I ordered two chapters just to be able to talk, but I don't really agree with Lu Fei. Personally, I prefer the protagonist to go solo. And I also like the harem

Welcome to the above picture! ! !

1. In the Holy Soul Village or other villages at the beginning, Su Yuntao is awakened and agrees to join the Soul Hall, but he will not go for the time being. He will go to Notting Academy first, slap the master in the face, bully Xiao Wu, and bully Tang San. 2. Then he joined Wuhun Palace and became a disciple of Bibi Dong. First, he was made things difficult by two men from the Golden Generation, and then they slapped each other in the face. Hu Liena became curious, and then she gave them to him for free. 3. Find Poison Douluo, detoxify him, detoxify Dugu Yan, Dugu Yan will give it to him for free, and then take away the fairy grass. 4. You can also go to intercept Hu and Shrek's two beauties, and then go to Tiandou to meet Qian Renxue. Qian Renxue is curious and finally gives it to you for nothing. 5. Then he beat Shrek in the Soul Master Competition, stole the show, stole the goodwill of all the beauties from Tang San, and finally helped the Wuhun Palace team to win, taking away Tang San's soul bone opportunity, and went to the Killing City with Hu Liena, and took away Tang San's chance to go to hell. 6. It's almost developed, and it's time to cut off Tang San's late-stage soul ring opportunities and Tang San's chances of becoming a god. 7. Already strong enough, help Bibi Dong solve problems, help Bibi Dong untie her heart knot, and prepare to attack the army, Bibi Dong will give it to her for free. 8. Destroy Tang San's small team, the protagonist becomes a god, all the beauties are collected, and the harem ends. (Other details and concubines can be added and modified as appropriate)

Since there are enough manuscripts, how about two chapters a day? The most important thing about a novel is the highlights at the beginning and the number of published chapters. If you are lazy at the beginning, what will happen later? I don't say five or six chapters a day at the beginning, but there must be at least three or four chapters...

My name is Lu Fei. I was born into an ordinary family. I originally planned to eat and drink until I died. But when I was a child, a system called Lu Yu came from the sky. After I awakened my martial soul, I was really heartbroken when I found out that I was just an auxiliary soul master. As a result, the system automatically gave me a top-level skill. Sword Skills and Footwork When I didn't have any weapons, the system gave me a weapon that could be used for self-defense. When I found that the quality of my weapon was not enough, the system gave me an external soul bone. When I found that my current basic sword skills were insufficient, the system gave me sword skills and footwork that were comparable to soul skills. When I found that my soul training was very slow, the system automatically sent me the elixir made from fairy grass. Following the instructions of the system, I became a disciple of the Pope of Wuhun Palace and met three members of the Golden Generation. The system also instructed me to learn Hu Liena's sword skills to win favor This is a story about a fake protagonist who bears all kinds of dangers to gain benefits for the real protagonist.

Chapter 24, I can't stand it any longer. It's very retarded and poisonous. I'd like to put a hole in it to prevent it from being clicked in again in the future.

It's not enough to give Lu Fei the skills, fairy grass and soul bones. It is recommended that the protagonist give him his wife and daughter as lovers, so that he can be worthy of the protagonist's character. After all, the author is strict with Lu Ji.

I can only say that this book has some brains but not much. It would be disgusting to give to a daughter.

Is this still called IQ online? ? Didn't see any IQ.

The most poisonous point of this book! I haven't gone back to my parents once. Fatty seemed to have forgotten about it, and he didn't mention it in the end. Now, my parents have become passers-by 😅

There are enough manuscripts saved, so feel free to enter! Asking for collection, asking for investment, asking for recommendation, asking for everything.

I just want to ask if the author is a green turtle?

Damn it, this introduction made me excited. I thought the author was going to write a story about an ordinary person who relied on ordinary martial arts and level 5 soul power to finally reach the peak through all kinds of difficulties and prove to the world that there are no useless martial arts, only useless soul masters. After reading it, I wanted to click on it on the spot. Suddenly, the sentence "systematic" came at the end and made me confused. Then what are you talking about before? Just slap yourself in the face with the introduction 🤔

Seeing that the gift girl couldn't stand it, she just gave it to her if she wanted it. Lu Fei was of no use and invested a lot of resources, but he was just average until Chapter 130. He was raised like a father.