When I Am Reincarnated in Tokyo, I Don't Want to Slay Demons.

The plot is okay, it's all good stuff but it's too dry. It would be better if it was polished a little. The sections also look a bit uncomfortable. I've only read 20 chapters and it feels like a long time has passed. The content of these 20 chapters would have been at least 100 chapters by other novel authors. It feels like there are several events. It has passed but I haven't written a few chapters yet. I traveled back in time, started practicing, first entered the academy, met the demon for the first time, trials, missions, love, emergencies, etc. It feels like a lot of events have passed. When I look at the chapters, it's less than 15 chapters. I can clearly understand these events, but there are only a few chapters. Add a little water, it's too dry, but the plot is really good, add a little water, write more.

The author's writing style is really bad. It feels like a primary school student writing a composition. There is no embellishment at all. It's like a running account. It's a good story.

I really didn't see the poisonous point, but it felt so boring and the content was so watery.

After reading three chapters, what should I say? My impression of this book is that it is a mess with no beginning or end. First, he was inexplicably reborn, then he was beaten, and the aura was awakened, and then he was sent to a school examination room where he learned how to deal with supernatural monsters. Then he was inexplicably beaten by a monster, and found that he could not be killed. He was even considered the boss by a fat man, and finally it was revealed who was the ninja and who was the miko. . . . It feels like looking at a ball of yarn, but it is still a ball of yarn that has been messed up.

I read a few more chapters. I wanted to read the story, but it was too dry.

The story is quite good, but could the writing be more delicate and the length more detailed? Instead of being abrupt and up-and-down

The writing is not good and it looks like I have no feeling.