Start with the Mechanical Wizard

You mechanical wizard, where is the mechanical embodiment? Just a nail gun? Not as good as an artificer! Where are the things of my job? If you have time to make that nail gun, it would be more meaningful to make a revolver.

The protagonist's school should show more various magical creations, not just skeletons, but more imagination! Think of Hogwarts, the Whomping Willow, Magic Train, Ghost Professor, and many more. These are very fantastic and imaginative. For example, there are all kinds of magical creature transportation mounts, all kinds of weird pets, whimsical mechanical creations, etc. The typical ones are all kinds of strange and huge insect mounts. Magic should fill every aspect of life! Show more imagination!

It doesn't feel like a wizard stream, it doesn't have a wizard flavor. I don't know if it's because in the small world, there is no authentic wizard inheritance, so I don't feel like a wizard in the academy, but like a mage. I hope that in the main world of wizards, there will be wizards who are crazy for knowledge, enslaving all races to dimensional wars.

Isn't the wizard style specializing in the development of imagination and absolute adaptation? There is no late stage for Archaeological Wizard, I'm afraid it's not a fairy type.

Not like a wizard, like a fantasy novel...

Mechanical Wizard should be a branch under Alchemy. . Can I get a job directly in the small world?

Those who have read The Witcher should know that the level of a wizard is not described by level, at least the wizard himself would not describe it that way. The first sentence of the first chapter says that the level 6 mechanical wizard is, and the mechanical wizard should be a certain level.

This undercover agent acted like everyone knew his identity. You didn't even bother to hide your identity and just went to the meeting without any hesitation? Although wizards are all geeks, it cannot be denied that those who can be wizards are smart people.

The author's writing style is actually pretty good, but the logic is not smooth in some places. If it were the first book, it would be fine if it were written like this😌 Write according to your own ideas and enjoy the process. Don't care too much about the readers' opinions.

To be honest, if you don't have the brains of Great Technician Han, don't try to challenge a higher difficulty level. Where is the Siren King, whether it is an oath or anything else, it is too childish.

Brothers, I recommended it, the data is very important, it is related to the life or death of this book. If you have any suggestions, please point them out in the comment area. Although I may not necessarily adopt it, I guarantee that I will definitely read it carefully! Nuoyuan shamelessly asks for follow-up reading and free recommendation tickets! Feeling everyone again! !

How is it reasonable that a second-level wizard has more information than an apprentice with no background?

I don't feel anything at all, it's so childish.

He was poisoned and died. Let's talk about the early stage when the little poisonous spot was just talking to himself in front of the doctor and a bunch of people. Later, he punched the experimental subject to death. The female spy boss was glued to her body as soon as they met. She was poisoned and died immediately after entering the secret room.

During the mechanical dance. Shaved ice flow. Came out

The writing seems to be okay, let's take a look 🧐

Not like a wizard, more like a person with super powers who can practice

It can completely become a data life, directly changing from a wizard apprentice to a corresponding level 7 to 8 wizard. Who said wizards can only rise step by step?

Don't be picky, the author can listen to reasonable suggestions; that's good.

This is not a wizard novel, it is just an extraordinary novel in the skin of a wizard. As we all know, the core values ​​of wizards: equivalent exchange, learning and experimentation, knowledge is truth. And the level gap