I Began to Live Forever on Earth by Eating Evil Spirits

I feel like there's been a bit of a lack of story recently. Well, I can't really tell what the main plot is.

It feels like it will collapse, both in terms of combat power and plot. The protagonist's combat power is improving a bit quickly now, and the main plot is vague. It feels like I only wrote an outline at the beginning, and then continued writing in one go. It is recommended to decide on the main line first, even if it is temporary, and extend the story through the main line, so that it is easy to piece together the story. ps: (This is not to start a war, not to be a troll. My parents are still alive and in good spirits. I am just expressing my opinions objectively. If you don't like it, please ignore it. I have no idea of ​​​​opening a book by myself. The literal meaning is not yin and yang. If I feel offended, I will apologize in advance. Above.)

As soon as I read Chapter 11 of the College Entrance Examination, I felt more and more uncomfortable. 1. It is really nonsense to make a soul that the original body died but came back. Goldfinger is still the soul of the original body. He only feels speechless and has no pleasure. As expected, he is confused. Chapter 2.11 Says that he is going to study in the school that was originally recommended but was robbed of his place. The purpose is to teach the people who robbed his place... At a glance, you can tell that the plot of A+C will be gradually installed later, and there will also be a link of beating a young person to old age. ... Can't you just wait and cultivate and grow? I have to install AC. This was written several years ago. Too many people have written it and I'm tired of it.

Friends, please remember to follow Achi's reading (see the latest chapter). If you don't follow up, there will be no recommendation. If you don't recommend the book, you will die. I can't stand it for the sake of love (capitalized miserable)

Friends, if you have any interesting, weird, and horrifying folklore stories, you can tell the author about them (I will just copy them and use them!) <(｀^´)>

I came from the portal of the courtyard next door. You have so few words. Let's collect them first.

Hahaha, air conditioner, hahahahahahaha, no matter how eunuch you are, you can't stand the word air conditioner 😂😂

2 Monthly tickets, 11 recommendation tickets, you know what I'm talking about. . . 😁😁😁😁

Author, your cheating finger might as well be a system. You goldfinger looks unhappy. The protagonist will have a wife in the future. When you two are doing exercises, is he watching?

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What does it take for you, the author, to be willing to write more chapters a day?

It feels like there is no main line, it's like pieces put together. It's weird to read and not very smooth.

Will the protagonist later establish a physical structure for things in the underworld? If some authority can be divided among others, others can indirectly send ghosts into the hell gate. Not only can they grow faster, but they can also share the excessive pressure of ghosts in the world.

The author needs to be more diligent. Before it was published, there was only one chapter a day. After it was published, you can't do anything about it.

What motivates you to write! ? Even after writing so much, I still got this result

Do you have a fan base? At least I think it's okay, it's just food

Alas, the author might as well create a new system for defeating demons. The Taoist gate must be installed in such a nondescript place.

"Sword Cut Ascension": [Immortal Hero] + [Goldfinger (touch corpse)] + [Fairy Birds and Beasts] + [Immortal Realm] + [Ascended Person] + [Sword and Magic Dual Cultivation]... Ascended Person? Isn't that the kind of person who comes up on his knees to beg for food?