Fusion of All Things: I Create an Immortal Dynasty in the Mortal World

The reviews of the books on the shelves are really clean. There is no arrogance or arrogance, and there is no understanding brother pretending to understand. It makes reading the book look better.

There is also the issue of labels. I remember reading several books and the author specifically said that sometimes the labels of works are involuntary. I hope everyone will be considerate.

I hope the author will pin my comments to the top, so that new readers will not see those comments that criticize you. Those comments are simply too abominable. Finally I know why there are only 30 comments. It's because they don't appreciate it at all. I tell you the author, your writing is superb, especially the settings. Even the peak of martial arts is only the Qi refining period. It has well written out the strong character of the immortal cultivator, and there is no problem with combat power. In the later stage of Qi refining, you can soar into the clouds, ride on the mist, go straight up to the blue clouds, fly into the sky and escape from the earth. You are omnipotent. There is nothing about the characters. They are really thoughtful and all are old Yinbi. It is simply a work of a great god. I dare to say that after a hundred chapters, the author will definitely become a god. Take a look at it if you believe me. You will never regret it. Go in and read it if you don't believe me. You will never regret it. In short, if you go in and take a look, you will definitely stay and give me a like.,,, You will all understand what I mean now,,,,

It's confusing, messy, and has a lot of useless lines. Anyone who comes to visit the flower boat will have to write hundreds of words. In Chapter 40, the protagonist asked them to go out, and then asked Zhu how to find the monster. I really don't understand why I wrote this paragraph. Momojiji didn't write out the reason until the end, as if these people were in the cabin just waiting for the plot to continue to develop. Before and after Chapter 40, it happened to be the climax point, and the result was written as a defense. It's the Chen family and Agent Hu. The author wants to write a plot, but he doesn't have the ability. He just needs to think about the characters carefully. It is recommended that the author write a detailed outline before writing this kind of plot. If you don't know how to write, start with a biography. For example, what is Qingyue's purpose, what is Zhao Cheng's goal, and what is the prince's goal. Write down the mission objectives clearly, and then think clearly about what makes it fun and how the plot will develop. Instead of writing like now, with a stick in the east and a stick in the west, it becomes a mess. A good beginning, just like this.

At the fifth level of Qi training, you still have to gain various enlightenments 🙂

Let's wait until the author finishes writing Three Hundred Years to catch up. A typical title is "I want to see you fly to the sky, but you end up swimming in the mud." You are no longer in the mortal world, and your dimensionality reduction attacks are 50/50 hits. Just reincarnate

It's easy to be pure, use absolute strength to suppress all dissatisfaction. Suppress all the little ones, stand aloof, and treat all living beings like ants!

During the qi training period, heaven and earth are all important. I was speechless when I saw what was written about the way of heaven...

With so much wealth in hand, but not invincible in the world, why not practice well first? There are so many irrelevant things in a day, and you interact with people every day.

To be honest... I can't keep chasing. I keep making fun of Tiandao... To pretend to be 13... But the more I look at it, the more disgusted I am... Tiandao is Tiandao... It's a rule... Now that you have found Tiandao, it's just like a brainless demon cultivator... Not powerful, but also seeking death... I don't know what those powerful people who guard the earthly immortal world are for... In short, the more you look at it, the more embarrassing... The more you look at it, the more chaotic you are... If you want to create a conflict, just find a big boss? Anyway, the protagonist is better at Qi training than Yuanying.

After reading more than 20 chapters, if I keep writing this trend, the mortal world will probably be better than the fairy world in the end.

You can say that he is invincible, but he has to be stubborn. You can say that he is stable. He is pretending to be in the mortal world. Moreover, I feel that it is better to let the person named Zhu be the protagonist. His character is better than Zhang Li. Looking at the whole story, the character of the protagonist is a mess. The novel is either pure It's a good book that can be read in depth. But this book didn't feel good enough for me, and I couldn't get into the details. I wanted to give the protagonist a tall character, but the result was completely different. Moreover, the feeling of disconnection in the previous chapters was too serious, and the protagonist seemed to have no sense of existence. It was quite abstract.

There are more than 30 chapters in "Fifth Level of Qi Training", including group portraits, and profile descriptions take up more than half of the page. People who don't know may think that you have already conquered the world at the fifth level of "Qi Training". If you don't do anything serious every day, you still learn Fu Tao. The function of the golden finger is to let you pile up resources until you are invincible. How much time does Fu Dao take up? Just to get the word count, right? Rewarding people around you with scraps to show that the protagonist is rich in the world is like stealing a million dollars and pretending to be the richest man in a remote country. If this kind of fun is not well controlled, it will appear very low-level.

The first dozen chapters feel like a historical novel, full of trivial matters, intrigues, and the world of cultivating immortals where strength is paramount. . . It's all about things that have nothing to do with spiritual practice. How can I keep reading? I might as well read a historical novel.

The protagonist likes to show off too much. I can't say show off, I can only say show off. He always likes to put on airs and act like a strong person. People who don't know better think he is a real immortal.

It's not a group portrait novel. It doesn't write about the protagonist. It's mostly nonsense. The first ten or twenty chapters are good and the rest is hard to finish...

The author has 300 years, so he might as well deduce the exercises himself

Those who don't know think that this national master and the others are great masters at the Nascent Soul stage in the world of immortality. They can obviously abuse them in the later stage of Qi training, so why do they need to fix their immortal style bones! So how should we describe a true cultivator?

Highly toxic identification completed

The plot is slow and updates are slow. There are too many things in the screen and it feels a bit difficult to unfold. Does the author not want grades? This level of updates is slow and slow. I feel so good that I haven't started writing, there are too many ideas and they are too complicated. I wanted to pretend to be x, but I couldn't pretend to be x, so I didn't feel happy. There was so much foreshadowing, which actually overdrawn the readers' expectations. It feels like the loss should be relatively large. Are your writing skills a bit weak? It is recommended not to suppress yourself and seek balance. The update speed has increased (although I feel that the author is struggling to write (his writing power is limited?)), The short story should be written more completely, and the pretense requires the scene and scale, otherwise it will be stiff, so just write more if you want.

In order to explain why he treats the second-level Qi practitioner like a dog, a lecherous, old man, and a supporting male who enriches his own pockets. Just force him to be given the identity of a boss who has lived for 3,000 years...

You are already a real king, why are you hiding again? Not pretentious. This is not how you find the mastermind behind the scenes!

I saw Chapter 71 and it's really well written. Why do so many people say it's not well written 😰

I think it's pretty good. Everyone has their own preferences for radish and green vegetables. Come on, author, don't be a eunuch.

The book is okayi