Legend of Greenery

I've read Chapter 20 and would like to give the author some advice. You don't need to have so many emotional scenes. This is a football novel after all. Emotions are only secondary and football comes first. This is one of them. Secondly, the author is also making progress, and his writing style is also very good. His writing is becoming more and more delicate, which suits my taste. I just found this one when I was shopping for new books. It is very good. The author should continue to work hard. Thirdly, there can be fewer chapters in the high school stage, focusing on how to go abroad to play competitions and go to college. These two are necessary. High school students can write appropriately, but not too much, otherwise it will be bad. In short, the author is quite promising and I will keep pursuing him. Come on.

Junior high school games in schools usually last for half an hour, sixty minutes, or three quarters of 20 minutes. They will not play for the full 90 minutes, and they are two matches at the same time. One big field is divided into two sides and two small fields. The physical fitness of junior high school students cannot run in the big field, and they are usually nine-a-side and eleven-a-side systems are not enough. In most areas of the country, there are very few people who can play football.

The first chapter seemed a little awkward to me, and I don't know if it was because of my writing style or something else, but I originally wanted to show the noisiness and liveliness of children. The impression may not be good, so please read it patiently 😌. I was able to write the chapter with ease until the graduation chapter. Although the first chapter was cumbersome, it was also the beginning of the protagonist and could not be deleted. Later I wrote more and more smoothly. Happy New Year by the way! ⚽️⚽️⚽️

It looks good, but it's just too little. The author should be tied up and write 24 hours a day, and he won't be given a meal until he finishes writing. Author, I have no other intention. What you wrote is really good, but it's just too little. Please, please write more, thank you.

It feels pretty good. I have the feeling of watching my children grow up slowly. Suddenly I feel that this kind of slow novel is also good 😁

Nice! The first part wasn't very good, but the more I read the later part, the more I liked it. Especially the plot about going abroad was very well written, but I don't understand why it's not popular.

I heard that updates are very slow, and the timeline is closer to reality, so save it first and wait for more updates before reading. Also, I have a small wish. I hope that the protagonist will play football with Messi so that Messi's final football career will have a happy ending. Don't always write about defeating Messi like other novels.

This introduction will persuade 90% of people to quit!

In the face of malicious foul play by others, the protagonist is described as having a soft temper. It's a bit frustrating to watch. I suggest that you can fight back like Ibrahimovic, or else just flop, personal opinion

I read in the introduction that talent is the speed of Ronaldo. Ronaldo's speed is nothing in football. People like Kaká, Owen, Bale and Mbappe are pretty much the same. Ronaldo is still far behind.

Is it too late? The protagonist is only 20 years old in 2023.