I Can See the Experience Value Panel in the City

The Zheng Gu and Zheng family are written so powerfully. Ridiculously powerful! Everything goes well, Zheng Gu surrounded the protagonist and kept up with the protagonist's strength. What's outrageous is that Zheng Guangli has an implanted alloy skeleton, an electric drill, 3000-degree continuous fire, and bomb energy. This is so outrageous. He can easily catch up with the progress of the protagonist, who is so stupid, and can even beat the protagonist at one point, so that the protagonist's physical strength cannot keep up. If the body is beaten, he can only use plug-ins to stay alive. The Zheng family is so powerful, they might as well send a team with bomb energy buried in their bodies, which can kill the protagonist even if they can't kill him. One team's self-destruction can bury several kilometers around. . The Zheng family, which is so awesome, cannot be seen at all in the book. How can the Zheng family, which has no money and no power, come from such awesome strength? ? Even when we besieged the Heyi Sect, we didn't see the Zheng family being strong, they were just trying to survive, but now you tell me that the Zheng family is awesome, rich and powerful, it's just outrageous. Are you bragging now that you don't even need the most basic foundation?

Bazhen Decoction has only a little effect, and Shiquan Dabu Decoction is not effective at all. It should be too exaggerated. After all, Chinese medicine specializes in treating Qi and blood deficiency. You are just starting to reach the first level and you must need secret medicine. Then don't write about Qi and blood deficiency in the front, otherwise I will really think that you are belittling Chinese medicine. In addition, I should learn other things such as Tai Chi, Baji, Xingyiquan, etc. Later, otherwise it will be difficult to make progress if I stick to Hong Quan for too long.

Hong Family Iron Fist

The protagonist who is a bitch is almost killed by Zheng Gu several times. Does this protagonist have a pure heart or a trashy snack? Then why don't the Zheng family, with all their ruthless technological skills, destroy the country and become the emperor themselves? If that doesn't work, destroy the Pacific Fleet of the United States and seize a few aircraft carriers to dominate the world.

To be honest, if there was such a panel in a city like this, who would actually practice martial arts all the time! Of course I'll just twist it. If it were me, I would definitely learn physics again. Try to get a scientist who is awesome. At the very least, I will not think about practicing martial arts until I achieve financial freedom. After all, even with the help of this thing, in this magic-free world, you can only dodge pistol bullets, let alone rockets, after more than ten years of practice. An AK submachine gun would be cool.

There are already plug-ins, and mathematicians are beginning to explore high-dimensional research on the universe. You are still torturing your physical body like a dump truck. Since you are practicing martial arts, why not try direct infusion of glucose and protein powder? Aren't these things cheaper than older Chinese medicine?

I really like the description of the realm of acupuncture points in this book, but the hostility is a bit inexplicable. I hope that the outline of the following chapters will be well thought out, so that a bunch of opponents will not suddenly appear and really appear for the plot.

I obviously got the experience panel, but I started practicing martial arts at the beginning, and I instantly lost interest.

It is better to directly cultivate the earthly immortal way, improve the environment, and take the path of the cave spirit realm. After all, there are really no paths in the city, and the martial arts path is really not wide, unless you take the path of the immortal martial arts.

Don't explain it. Once you explain it, there will be a lot of it. It feels like the author is overstating the number of words.

You haven't explained anything. Why do you practice martial arts? What do you rely on to survive in martial arts? Where does the money come from? The writing was confusing.

The claws are rich in skills, including grabbing, pinching, and flipping up and down. The shape of the claw is like an eagle, dividing the muscles and bones, and penetrating the muscles and bones.

From the beginning to the end, there is no girl. How many people can watch it?

Writing a novel like this should focus on health preservation. No martial art can compare to the electric baton for self-defense. It is cheap, convenient and legal.

Your story is messed up and completely off-kilter. The social background of the Chinese martial arts is not well established. You also added a film and television setting. I don't know where to complain. How about using personal detachment to promote the development of the Chinese martial arts? You don't even know why there are so many great masters in the society now. Why is the Chinese martial arts so lonely?

This guoshu book is the weakest guoshu book I have ever seen

Okay, follow this rhythm and write

Ten times the limit of the human body, reaction in all aspects, the gun can hit the pill with too much strength. The cicadas wake up before the autumn wind stirs, and they are not killing indiscriminately. When I saw the method of moving qi, I knew that I should first practice martial arts, then meet the gods, then refine qi, and then swallow a golden elixir into my belly. My fate is up to me. Then the elixir transforms into the soul, and finally becomes an immortal. The subject matter of the book is good. It is normal to cheat and upgrade quickly. The plot is just too watery. There can be a lot of plots interspersed in between. There are no passionate fighting scenes like those in Chinese martial arts novels.

Poor in literature and rich in martial arts, but have no money to practice martial arts and commit suicide?

He's thirty, pig's feet are a bit old, he's considered an old thing

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It's so awkward to watch. The protagonist has a system panel and communicates with other people's martial arts normally for a month. He hasn't learned any skills at all. The panel is still a Hongquan. It's so awkward to watch. Is this the first time the author has written something like this? I feel like he doesn't know how to do it at all? !

The anti-theft is so good that I can't find it anywhere on the Internet.

Poor quality

The meaning of Chapter 20 is that through the training methods and secret medicine of Hongquan, different people with different physiques can be transformed into convergence through exercise, and then general solutions can be applied when breaking through the bottleneck. However, the protagonist has not undergone systematic transformation, so he needs to come up with his own solution to break through the bottleneck.