This Star Just Wants to Learn

After reading more than 630 chapters so far, what can I say? This book is good-looking, but it is not the main plot. I have a habit of reading the whole chapter first before delving into the plot. This may be the reason. Judging from the plot of more than 600 chapters, the overall feeling is quite enjoyable. Everything the protagonist does has traces to follow (except for the events that happened in the early dozens of chapters to advance the plot, which were too deliberate and uncomfortable to watch) ) For example, when starting a company, it may be because "As a time traveler, with such a popular game in the previous life, it would be a pity not to start a company to make some money." But to be honest, there are logical points to write, but this type of branch line is not necessary {Besides, it is a bit weird for high school students to open a company (quietly)} But I didn't feel that the subplots mentioned by other reviews were redundant. Instead, I felt that the subplots of relationships between people in this book were more interesting than the main plot. Especially the branch line between Xie Mu and Ding 00 made me feel a lot. It would be great if I could write more about it. The plot of this line is scattered in various parts of the main line, which makes it a bit difficult for me to sort it out. I'm still looking forward to the story of Shan Hengxu and the autistic girl and the subsequent supplement about the incident with Ding 00's parents. Let's talk about the main plot, but I don't feel much about it. Maybe it's too idealistic as other comments said. It is indeed a beautiful daily story, suitable for listening to while relaxing, but if you really want to experience the plot, then forget about it. There are indeed many problems, and sometimes it is a bit awkward. It is recommended to relax your mind and open a book, lie on the bed, and listen to the daily conversations between the characters. You will really have a relaxing and enjoyable experience. (I like this feeling very much. This is also the only purpose for me to read novels. I can't stand the cool and weird novels. This kind of relaxed daily entertainment novel is still suitable for me.) General: The daily exchanges and dialogues between the characters in this book are quite good, and I did enjoy hearing the funny parts. This novel is worth reading if you like everyday light-hearted fun (\One Yukino/). But if you come here for study and entertainment, it's better not to do it. The plot is really awkward in this aspect (it's understandable considering that the author is a newbie and can't handle it well) OK, the general review is over. The next thing I want to say to the author is: "I was really shocked by your Spring Festival Gala clock writing in the opposite direction. To be honest, I didn't say I couldn't write it, but I was a little um. How should I put it? I was lying in bed at one o'clock in the morning before listening to your latest chapter. I was still thinking about normal. What program did I hold during the Spring Festival Gala? I couldn't stop laughing when I heard the clock in the opposite direction. It's very well written. I'd also like to see if I can write an extra episode about Shan Hengxu and the autistic girl!"

Sure enough, the setting will crash at the slightest disagreement. Others will crash after at least 50 years. You, from the very beginning, go from learning to be a good boy to a business tycoon in seconds. This early setting is like playing.

It's not a criticism, it's just that this book is not to my liking. The protagonist always gives me a feeling of being indulged in lust. He talks about not being a star and wants to study, while flirting with his deskmate. I really don't believe that a person who worked in the entertainment industry until he died of exhaustion in his previous life will not understand what rejection is. Forcing it to be reasonable is disgusting! If the author writes a campus article about reminiscing about youth, I believe it will be very interesting. The key point is that the combination of the entertainment industry and youth campus is a bit nondescript. I hope the author will write better in his next book!

I am out of the trap indefinitely. When can I write down the daily feeling of sweet articles and read them again? It is a bit difficult to accept that while reading a book, I also talk about the world and development. Is it because there is no audience for sweet articles, or is there no place to publish political commentaries? Does the author still remember the positioning of this book? (The original positioning of rebirth and study should not delay the daily life of Xiao Tianwen) Pu Tong is now a straight person in the political circle, literary circle, competition circle and entertainment circle. What will he write next? Write about the fishball who desperately chases his husband? It's really better to throw away some settings and focus on campus and entertainment circles. Personal opinion, I accept refutation, but I don't read it.

There are over 800 chapters, and I haven't graduated from high school yet. How many chapters are I planning to write? Instead of adding some useful information, I always use lyrics to make up the word count. That's too much!

Without 10 years of cerebral thrombosis, I wouldn't be able to write this kind of setting

If the author doesn't update for a month, is it a lie?

The conflicts between character motivations and plot plots are used to create conflicts and then advance the plot. This is a very classic routine, classic, even a bit old-fashioned, but it is indeed a classic. But in fact, there are also areas that require careful consideration. I think in this article (I have only read less than twenty chapters), the introduction of the characters' motivations is very natural. Because they became the playthings of capital in the previous life, they must study hard and stay away from the entertainment industry in this life. The process of generating this motivation is very reasonable, or in other words, this design is very reasonable. However, behavior induced by motivation is not natural enough. To be precise, it means that the readers (mainly me) did not see the reasonable behavior resulting from the protagonist's motivation of "study hard". In other words, the author paid too little attention to this aspect. I think this is one of the main reasons why some comments think that it is "both relevant and established". After all, basically everyone has been to high school, and basically everyone has seen the state of "study hard": studying hard is not just something you say. I think studying well in high school does not mean working hard to learn knowledge. That is what universities do. Studying well in high school is actually a process of competing with peers. It's about studying well, it's about studying more efficiently in the same amount of time, it's about how to squeeze out more time to spend on studying than others. The author wrote too little about this, which makes me feel that the protagonist's so-called studying hard is just a vague setting, a slogan with no appearance, and a memorial arch that is both fake and erected. What is even more unfortunate about this work is that everyone knows what high school is and what studying means. Even if you arrange it in other parallel worlds, unless you write down how it is different from the original world, relying on a time-travel setting to make readers (mainly me) feel "probably different from the original world, right?" This will inevitably create a sense of separation. Or, to put it simply, just use the character design of the academic master. The protagonist appears as a top student. He has traveled through time for a year. His knowledge in the previous life made him realize that he should study hard in this life, so he worked hard. At this time, the focus should not be on the experience of the past year, but on the actions that the protagonist is doing now, such as carrying a vocabulary book with him, relaxing after doing physics and English, and memorizing biological knowledge points accurately to the page number. You can even have an old-fashioned dramatic encounter, walking on the road with a vocabulary book and not looking at the traffic lights but being hit by the heroine's car. Classic, old-fashioned, but safe. Moreover, any attribute can be added to the character of a top student, such as a chatterbox, a poisonous tongue, a basketball player, an abnormal brain circuit, or even an Internet-addicted boy (must show restraint). A top student is not necessarily a fool, but he is most likely to be short-sighted. That variety show chose the male protagonist. At this time, as a top student, as a former low-level member of the entertainment industry who has been reincarnated here to study hard in the past year. What the male protagonist should show is worry - will variety show activities be concentrated after class? Will it affect my class? On top of this, I can give a brief description: the classmates are bragging whether they will become an artist because of this variety show, and will be a star in the future. The male protagonist thought for a moment, and then showed a conciliatory smile: Then forget it, I am still willing to study hard. It is important to express that this incident has created a ripple in the heart of the male protagonist. Now, in addition to studying hard, a second chance has come to him. Next, the heroine made her grand entrance, saying that she was good-looking and that her attractiveness was like the analytical geometry question on a math test paper, which was mysterious and intimidating, challenging but very rewarding. You know, within this limited time, it is impossible to completely solve this problem, but you can try to do the first question for now. After that, there are two branches. Either the male protagonist enters the entertainment industry and stirs up troubles, or the female protagonist enters school and starts a campus romance, but no matter which one it is, it must be reasonable. Having said so much, to put it bluntly, it is all just hindsight, and saying it and doing it are completely different things. As a reader, I am just standing here and talking without pain. If I was asked to cool down, I might not be able to write as good as this one.

Now that I've finished reading the free chapter, I've seen a lot of criticism and I'll give it some praise! First of all, the daily writing is very good, with many interesting points buried in it, and the insertion of many jokes is very appropriate. At the same time, these are the things that kept me reading. However, because of this, the writing on the entertainment aspect is a bit abrupt! After all, you can't have your cake and eat it too. Those who come here with the intention of reading exciting articles, you might as well try to go back and read the book from another angle and pay more attention to these daily routines. I believe you will definitely gain new insights. In addition, this book also has a good portrayal of the main characters. The characters have very distinct personalities. They are not like some books where the characters are very thin. Even several characters are created in the same way, which makes people feel that the characters are very single. But this book is different. There are quite a lot of characters in the early stages of this book, and the personalities, characteristics, performance, etc. Of each character are different. It can be seen that in the same new work, this book is excellent in character creation. Finally, let me summarize. The reason why this is happening is because the author is now in a state of wanting to write about everything (it feels like this to me), and then he falls into problems such as unclear themes and even off-topics. Because he writes about everything, it makes people feel a bit messy. It is too late to make drastic changes now, because doing so is a taboo for novel creation. Once the front part does not match the back part, the whole book will collapse. So before you officially start writing your next book, you might as well think about what you want to write and determine the tone of the work. If you write according to the tone you have determined, you will avoid such problems.

As a new author, the problems in this book are normal problems for newbies. Usually when we read a book, we will have a feeling that if we write it ourselves, we will definitely be better than him. But when you actually write an outline yourself and then start writing the plot in detail, the countless details and restrictions will gradually deform you, and eventually you will be deformed. The scene you write out is completely different from the scene you imagined... It is true that most of us readers have very good imaginations and can have wild thoughts wherever they come to mind. But when it is actually expressed in writing on paper, you will find that you are like a mute voice and don't know how to express it! Just like me, when I saw those exciting plots, I thought of many words to vent the emotions in my heart... In the end, I only managed to hold back one sentence: Hold the grass, awesome, 666... So, give more encouragement and tolerance to new authors, and accompany them to grow together if they are willing. , Please leave quietly if you don't mean to. It may be an unintentional complaint from you, but it is like a thunderbolt to the listener. You just take a pee and leave. You are happy, but the new seedlings may be fucked to death by your pee...😌😌😌

The star reality show is well combined with the daily life of youth campus love. It has a relevant atmosphere and a small number of two-dimensional elements. For example, the contrast between the mother who usually works independently and is very reliable, and the father who is a fan and wants to deal with the hero's class teacher after watching the interaction between the male and female protagonists... It is divorced from the reality of life, but because it is comic and interesting, there is no sense of violation. On the other hand, the essence of this book is a cool novel of the parallel world literary style, with no shortage of traditional cool points as well as interesting points. For example, the star heroine at the same table has a tendency to be given away at the beginning. The protagonist pretends to be sexy but is forced to do so without realizing it. She is widely praised for copying songs and ancient poems. She does not want to be a star but is forced to do so, which leads to a twist in the plot. She accepts a celebrity apprentice from Dihua. The culture of this world is really too backward. That's why I want to watch it but don't want to watch it. Please try to write as little awkward things as possible in the follow-up, there are too many forced things. But it's great for new authors to innovate. Come on.

I finished reading the latest chapter in 2 days. First of all, the theme is very novel, so the storyline and the author's advocacy of a relaxed campus atmosphere, and there is no such intrigue between characters, are all attractive points that attracted me to keep reading. However, because it is related to parallel world travel, most authors of this genre have weakened the advantage of a certain aspect of the world after travel to facilitate the portrayal of the protagonist. It can be seen that the author has added a lot of things into the work, which makes the depiction of the background of the world after the time travel a bit stiff. For example, the protagonist needs to use music to show off, which makes the original music level of the world look very weak. Similarly, when using culture to show off, the cultural background of the world seems to be average, but he also mentioned that this world also has its own famous cultural content. Without an entertainment method like Werewolf, the entertainment method would be very monotonous, but with video games similar to LoL, it would seem to have a sense of chaos that rises and falls. Then below I will make some sorting and analysis based on what I see about the male protagonist's current career line, study line, and love line. First of all, the career line. The career line of the male protagonist is actually mainly divided into two aspects: song creation and game company. The main one at present is mainly songs. I think the rhythm of one song based on the story lines of different periods is quite good. The second thing is that it has not been mainly described. I am a game industry person. Practitioners in the industry hope to enrich the background of the world when describing it. For example, describe in one sentence what popular game types are already on the market in this world, such as the same type of lol that is already popular, or the battle royale type in this world, the same type of csgo in fps, and there is no other For some types of games, for example, if we later cooperate with the LoL game in this world to develop the same mobile game, then the protagonist's game company company type is the main mobile game development, or the world line has described a game that lacks the werewolf killing type, then we can later integrate the popular Goose and Duck Killer, which is also a werewolf killing game. The type of game does not seem to jump around so much, because in the industry, one game company and different studios are responsible for one type of game. It is a bit unreasonable to have the protagonist company develop 3A, open world and other games all at once. The same career line can create intersections with the heroine's father. The learning line is actually relatively simple. It has been stated many times before in the novel that the author's time travel has led to a bad history. Although it may be a foreshadowing for the heroine's transcendence, I think it can actually be used to supplement the description of the cultural level and cultural background of the current world. And the author describes that after the heroine transfers to another school, she actually faces the second point, which is to divide the subject selection into classes or arts and sciences classes in the second year of high school. At that time, who will be the one? At the same time, there is no main line like this show before the college entrance examination in the third year of high school. In fact, the middle content does not need to be described in such detail, so if there is no similar special plot line, then the time span after the transfer may be very large, which can be used to describe game companies or other acting, and the time span of game development is very large. From the third year of high school to the present, it seems that the male and female protagonists have different college goals, which is another point of contradiction between who will get the better of the other. Studying after college is actually pretty good, but that's all for later planning. The love line currently seems to be that the male and female protagonists have acquiesced in each other, but they still haven't pierced the window paper. It feels like the male protagonist doesn't dare to fall in love because he hasn't done well in his studies, which leads to very slow progress.

As a bookworm for more than ten years, the book is very good and the writing is good, but the heroine appears too early. The emotional line appears at the beginning, and a lot of writing is given to the heroine. Some of it puts the cart before the horse. The main character's IQ decreases as soon as the heroine appears. The emotional line appears too early, and it becomes more and more unbearable.

Give it a thumbs up to bring some popularity Don't give up, author, and don't forget what you said before when it was published 😭 I really want to see the day when Wan and Pu's children can point at Yukino and say why aunt is stupider than me Furthermore, I think this book is really a breath of fresh air in time-travel romance novels. The characters' personalities are not only distinct, but more like real people with flesh and blood 😭[fn =12]😭 Of course, there are still some problems. I think the best part of this book is before the Spring Festival Gala. Later, the righteousness of family and country and the entertainment industry gradually occupy more space. Pu Tong is no longer the ordinary person who was indifferent to fame and fortune and only focused on study. Of course, it is understandable that if it focuses on this theme, the novel may be easier to write 😰 But I believe that more people are still willing to read the main story. The gang members were laughing and joking together, and the appearance of a few little ones actually depicts many people's perfect interpretation of the concept of "friends". The silly Yukino, the sinister Lin Yuxi, Pu Tong, who is a bit clumsy about emotions, and the considerate love-minded Yu Wanwan. If their stories ended here, I believe many people would be upset 😭 Finally, the author is actually a very easy-going person. If you send him a private message in Q and ask for advice, he will reply 🙂 Finally, let me tell you one more time about your acceptance speech. You have now written a very good online article. I wonder if you will still hide under the covers and code words 😜. If someone asks you whether you have fans or not, you can slap everyone's good or ridiculing sentences in their face (bushi

The first part is a bit embarrassing, but the second part is okay. It's just that the updates are a bit slow.

I think this book is already very good. It would be better if the protagonist takes more initiative.

I don't want to say anything else. I personally think it's okay. But for one question, the author, you were too damn slow. It only took seven or eight minutes to send one photo, and the longest one was only 10 minutes. It was still slow. If you want to make money, your brother should increase the price. Don't cheat people like this. I bought 5 episodes for 50 points and watched them in less than an hour. Not to mention other things, I still prefer to watch them, but you are too slow, too slow, too slow! ! ! ! ! !

I have read all the articles, so I will simply share them. The first time I was attracted by the video tweets, the tweets could not show the writing skills, but they showed me the selling points of the novel. The early stage of the article is indeed excellent, with smooth writing, tight rhythm, bold innovation and full of selling points. The writer dared to write what he wanted to write, created a protagonist with a distinctive personality, and also introduced several main characters. In the middle period of the article, the writer is obviously weak, and his level of regression is very obvious. Whether it is the quality of the plot or the characterization, it seems that he is not very careful. Many times it is rough and there is no improvement. The most important thing is that there is a lot less innovation, but it has filled a lot of holes left in the early stage. I have read half of the later part of the article. It is just as dull as the middle part. However, the author's level has improved to a certain extent. He has carefully portrayed some characters, and also absorbed some inspiration from life. In the projected novel, he wrote some good fragments. However, the images of the protagonists are still annoying. Perhaps the early stage shaping is too perfect, and the protagonist's setting is too excellent. On the contrary, the growth of the protagonist cannot be written, and there is no obvious progress in the image creation, and the impression is still stuck in the early stage. As a novel, it is definitely not good to read it with your brain. However, the shortcomings in the writer's writing level cannot be changed. It is destined to not perform well in the middle and later stages. It is a quite niche novel and only suits some groups. But it was such a novice article, but I still read it for him. The reason is very simple, because there is excitement in his blandness. Novel is a projection of life, and although the overall writing of this novel is very plain, it creates a perfect protagonist image for us, which is the most beautiful image in our hearts. I think I am one of the people who fit this article. The novel is a good representation of our pursuit of a better life. It is what we most want to be and what we envy most. Maybe we are no longer young, maybe we have experienced the changes of time. After relocation, we no longer have the ability or state of mind to pursue a better future, but I hope that we can still be like the protagonist in the novel. When we have another chance, after having hope, we will not give up but work hard, not be greedy for success, and be an upright and optimistic person. Article recommendation index: 3.5 (5 Points) Suitable group recommendation: 4.0 (5 Points)

I guess the author is still single🐶The subject matter is very good and the writing seems very comfortable. The character descriptions are too vague, the clothes are basically missing, the article is a bit bloated (it's just too watery), it's not a cool article, the love article doesn't have the feeling of love, and the daily article doesn't have a warm and daily feeling. It's like I was given an outline, and the details can be supplemented by my own imagination. Sorry for not subscribing. I couldn't stand the first dozen chapters after it was released.

Nice to watch, love to watch, nice to listen to, love to listen to. Recommended, watch with confidence, listen with confidence.

When I look at this masterpiece, the plot is full of ups and downs, and the foreshadowing is so deep that I can't bear to put it down every time I read it. I am eagerly waiting for the update day and night. I hope that you, with your wonderful writing skills, will not hesitate to work at your desk and publish a new chapter as soon as possible to comfort the longing hearts of all book friends.

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After reading your book, I can no longer read other books 🙂

The key to Gai Wen's writing lies in conveying emotions, and the beauty of writing lies in moving people's hearts. Guanjun's masterpiece is indeed a rarity in the literary world and a treasure for those who read it. Since the opening of the book, the writing style has been vertical and horizontal, and the literary thoughts have been flowing out. The narrative has been ups and downs, exciting, and there is no procrastination. Some foreshadowings are set in subtle details and mysteries are hidden in the silent spaces, leading readers to get deeper and deeper into it step by step, immersed in it without getting tired; some may express heroic feelings between heaven and earth, and convey profound meanings in the plot, making our generation's hearts surging, filled with emotions, and difficult to let go. Every time I read a chapter, I feel that the meaning is still unfinished. After closing the book, I still think about the direction of the story and the fate of the characters. During the day, I would sit at my desk and catch up on reading, forgetting the taste of three meals; at night, I would toss and turn and have trouble sleeping, looking forward to the next chapter. A group of book friends are all like this. They keep their heads high and anxious day and night. They gather together to chat and discuss your masterpieces. They look forward to each other and wait for the new chapter to be updated. In the past, Qu Zi's poems were a masterpiece that has been passed down through the ages; Sima's history writings have become the outspoken words of the whole family. Today's emperor's talent is not inferior to that of the sages. Writers are the voice of the heart. The author writes with his heart and soul, and the readers respond with true feelings. We all know the hard work you have done while sitting at your desk, burning ointment and keeping the sundial. We dare not complain at all about urging you, but are full of respect. However, when a masterpiece enters the soul, it is hard to stop thinking about it, just like drinking a fine wine, the more you taste it, the stronger it becomes. You can't bear to stop halfway, and you can't bear to stop halfway, and you can't wait to see the long river flowing and endless. The characters in the book all have lives, some have unfulfilled ambitions, some have unresolved grievances, some have an unclear future, some have unresolved fates. The readers are concerned with them, as if they are immersed in the scene, sharing the sorrows and joys of the people in the book, sharing the worries and joys. I only hope that you will write a continuation of the book to resolve this suspense and fulfill these feelings. In ancient times, there was Boya who played the harp and played the harp, and when he met his son, he became an acquaintance; now you write books, and when you meet my generation, you fall in love with him. Although we, the readers, do not have any wonderful writing, we are sincere and sincere. We give each other with monthly tickets, respect each other with rewards, and pass on word of mouth, just to help you keep writing and produce excellent works frequently. This chapter is temporarily suspended. Everyone's heart is uneasy, just like looking forward to the spring rain to moisten the withered seedlings, like waiting for the bright moon to illuminate the dark night, looking at each other day and night, and it has never diminished. Your Majesty Fu Wei, with his talents from all over the world and the wisdom of writing brilliantly, is well aware of the longings of readers and appreciates the admiration of the public. Temporarily relieved from the slight fatigue at the desk, I will once again display my pen and ink to continue the wonderful work of yesterday and open up the wonderful work of tomorrow. There is no need to write swiftly and swiftly, I just want to proceed in an orderly manner so that new chapters will continue, the elegance will last forever, and I will live up to my own talent and affection, and live up to the kindness of the readers. Imagine the world described in the book, with its majestic mountains and rivers, changing winds and clouds, romantic characters, and countless stories, all waiting for you to outline them with one stroke and lay them out with one ink. If a new chapter comes out, we will rush to tell each other, read and enjoy it together, express our emotions and express our admiration. Even as the years go by and time changes, this heart of following will never change, and the feeling of expectation will never change. I am willing to accompany the masterpieces forever and fulfill the appointment of pen and ink together. A few words can hardly express the fullness of hope. The paper is short but the love is long, but it is all sincerity. I only hope that your pen will be strong, your literary thoughts will be endless, and you will update it as soon as possible, so as to comfort all the book lovers who are eager to read and realize their dreams. I would like to dedicate this article to the author. His words may not fully convey his meaning, but he may observe and observe.

I just stopped reading it in the middle, and I'm a little afraid to read the book review post. It's a bit too intense, so don't affect my newly awakened beautiful fantasy!

Thank you readers for your support. If you have any discomfort or dissatisfaction during the reading process, if you have any opinions about this book or want to point it out, you can submit it in this building. New authors welcome criticisms and corrections!

There are nine inherent problems with this book. How can a regular school record a live broadcast like this for the program team? It will affect students' learning. If it goes wrong, it will become an online violence.

Shen Nong is Dead... Book lovers who don't read it with any brains can give it a try

If my guess is correct, this article should be similar to both being and standing. Because I know that generally in this kind of novel, what the protagonist doesn't want to do and what society wants you to do will end up being written as a character who is both realistic and independent.