I Caused a Natural Disaster of the Undead in Super God

Let me make a suggestion. Sexual abuse is born in the soul sea and gradually disintegrates the protagonist's authority. This is unacceptable to me. Is the protagonist like this? It will be countered by your own computer, and you are causing an Iron Man rebellion. It is better to change it to a large amount of emotional energy entering the soul sea and eventually forming the four evil gods. The four evil gods cannot affect the Necron due to special factors. The protagonist can delete the four evil gods at any time, but the soul sea will still form the four evil gods again over time, so the protagonist is too lazy to care. Everything after that is up to the author to make up. Just a suggestion, don't comment if you don't like it

This book is so awesome. The protagonist only appears in 12 chapters, and then there is no such thing as the protagonist. I just want to say one thing, such a good subject matter. What the author writes is crappy. A good hand turned into a bad hand. There is no one left. No matter how much you lay out the background, you don't need to lay it out like this, right? Chapter 66 is tmd still laying it out?

The author simply cannot grasp the key point. What is the name of the book, Scourge of the Undead? The direct keywords are Arthas and Warcraft. This can attract a large number of nostalgic players, readers, sub-keywords, and super gods. This is another large group of two-dimensional readers, but what did the author do at the beginning? I ran directly towards the online game, climbed the technology tree, and stormed the army. . . . These can be reasonably added to the key word plot, but they are separated into chapters.

Since the author wrote about the Styx Galaxy, then Karl came here, discovered the obelisk, studied the obelisk, and discovered that there are more advanced civilizations in the universe. This kind of plot can be

Is this sleeping cannon fodder

What is this writing about? If you let yourself go, you can create a very awesome and invincible pervert. Just tell me that the protagonist is invincible. If you are invincible, I will continue to read. If you don't answer and are not invincible, I will give up, okay.

It's not that I want to scold you, the author. The first few pictures I read were pretty good, but the further you go, the less I understand what kind of shit you wrote! At first, I thought you wanted to write the Necron as the background, and slowly turn it into a super plot, but now what do you write about any situation?

After tens of millions of years, it is reasonable to say that technology has surpassed angels countless times, but the result is so rubbish, it is simply embarrassing to the Necron, and they have the nerve to brag about how powerful it is. High-level civilizations are crushing low-level civilizations. The protagonist's civilization has existed for millions of years, and the lack of technology cannot crush angels that have only existed for a mere hundred thousand years. Part-time workers are so rubbish. A single detector of the three-body system can destroy two thousand battleships on the earth. The expressive power of the Necron written by the author is exaggerated.

I don't understand whether there is a protagonist in your novel? If you really can't write a world, just travel across the heavens and write the novel as a narrative.

You call this a natural disaster of the undead? Natural disasters are just sleeping, right? Let others rob your tomb, right? Moreover, the main plot has not been advanced yet, 6

Originally, he was just a normal novelist, huh. . . . . Writers of the general public, when encountering this kind of subject matter, can use flashback group portraits in the early stage to write about the battle between the three major forces of Pangu, the Undead, and the Void, to highlight the grand battles of various races for their own development, and then the emergence and development of each race after the disaster. Through layer-by-layer reversal and objective description of small characters, the concept of evil gods is brought out, and finally the system of super gods is slowly drawn out.

I declare this book officially finished. This book has no meaning at all now. There is nothing wrong with the author's self-interest. But he became more and more self-indulgent, more and more high-spirited, and had no friends. Now he is the protagonist. He basically didn't appear after Chapter 12, and he was only mentioned in a few words. And the Necron only mentioned a few words. We are here to see the Necron, not to see some rubbish. A bunch of rubbish came out. You can obviously get rid of them in one go, but you still have to be practical. You are really boring. We just want to watch that Tai Company do evil in the universe. We just want to watch space videos, wander back and forth in the universe, and then do all kinds of things, but what the hell are you writing about? The writing was too biased. We just wanted to see the Necrons, but the main character basically didn't appear after Chapter 12. What are you doing?

After reading it, I didn't know what I was watching. I put too much stuff into it and it was too messy. Even if it's Warhammer, the protagonist is a tech guy, but why are the green skins also coming out? The bean sprouts have also come out. Will the birth of the Four Gods of Chaos come next? What on earth am I looking at?

To summarize; I have read fifty chapters but haven't finished it yet, and it gives me the feeling that I just want to send out the outline directly! On average, there are not many words in a chapter, and the main text is only about 500 to 600 words, and the rest is just a bunch of words! The evaluation is: perfect creativity, well-explained, easy to understand, and two beautiful words Abbott...🐶

The idea is good, but the writing is bad. It feels like a running account, and it's a little off topic, rambling here and there.

If you really can't write it, just cut it off earlier. There's no need to send out the outline to make up the word count.

Forget it if you write less, you still haven't played an advantageous game for such a long time, why? Wearing readers' patience? It's rare to see a good Super God fanfic, but now it's gone too far?

I feel the readability is not as good as primary school compositions

…I began to regret it. I shouldn't have booked all of it. I began to feel heartbroken for my 205 points.