Comprehensive Comics: This Friendly Communication System Is Too Friendly

It is a pure retelling of the original work, without any creativity of its own. Throughout the text, there are twitching words and words with unclear meanings. After reading more than 20 chapters, it is not clear what the original motivation of the protagonist is and what the core goal is. It is not so much a novel as a highly personal plot introduction that retells the animation. As a text content creator, your writing method is completely unqualified. I hope your next book will improve these shortcomings.

It feels like the protagonist is not complaining, but he is rude ヽ（＿；)ノ

I have read Chapter 294 so far. I just want to use less adjectives. Please, can you move the plot faster? Don't be so stupid. I am really convinced after four or five chapters of Conquering Geli Pai. I really don't have the mood to read it when it is so boring. I just skim through each chapter now and there is really nothing to read. I can't watch it at all, but I'm curious about what's going on behind the story line. There are a lot of Japanese transliterations that are really unnecessary. Everyone knows that it's not a Chinese comic, so there's no need to include some and none every time. And when you say hello in the morning, you can just say good morning to each other directly. There is no need to say hello twice. It's really stupid...

This system is disgusting enough, I'll just ask you to quit.

What kind of thing is this protagonist created? Complaining is not like complaining. He is simply mean and bad-mouthed. I suspect that the author wrote the world of Cardcaptor Sakura to destroy the readers' beautiful memories and disgust them.

The character design of the protagonist, I think the first one is better, it has a pretty juvenile feel

There's nothing wrong with accepting Chise, but it's hard to break up Sakura Wolf. After all, the tragedy in Tsubasa Chronicles was essentially caused by Crow Rido, and it even formed a time closed loop, and there's no way to remedy it. Thinking this way, you can understand why Sakura grew up happily in Cardcaptor Sakura. Will Crow Rido really allow the protagonist to break up Sakura Wolf?

The more I read, the more I feel that the pig's feet are useless. The pig's feet are only used for daily dialogue. It doesn't matter whether the Clow card has pig's feet or not. The protagonist has no sense of existence at all.

Tomoyo is a little girl, so don't always write her off as someone with a deep scheming mind. A little girl who is a few years older should be written off as a pervert.

The setting is not very good. The main character is always sarcastic and weird, which is really annoying.

The male protagonist is Nantong, and he has been sleeping with Cheng Cheng, and Cheng Cheng is still a man.

The author is a gay or a rotten girl. Every time he writes about Li Xiaolang appearing to see the male protagonist, Li Xiaolang must write about blushing once. He does it every time without getting tired of it. It's so embarrassing and disgusting. Don't worry about it a few times, just keep coming! 😒

He came here for Tomoyo, but he looked like he was not sure whether he would accept it or not. I'd better wait and see ´_>`

I feel that this book is quite satisfying, except that the plot is a little delayed. The plot is only the second card before it is released. If Sakura is the main plot, she should be involved in most of the card collection plots, witnessing Sakura's growth, etc., Plus some plots from other anime, the book may be very long. In terms of plot description, I personally suggest that the simple description of clothing and appearance can be reduced, and the length of mutual criticism can be increased. It may be better to incorporate small details of appearance and clothing to express the character's mood.

Let me mention in the front row that Sakura Tomoyo Berry Rei seems to be on the verge of quitting, but she always reminds herself that she is an adult soul, but looking at Sakura and others with "red lips, cherry mouth with white teeth, and faint fresh red lips", she has a sense of immediateness like a 30-year-old uncle and a little loli. Isn't it a bit evil to be attracted to young children?

Communication means having a bad mouth. I feel like I have a book on my elbow (눈_눈). I started with an enemy mentality and ended up feeling disgusted no matter who it was.

I didn't realize it before, but I found out after recently rewatching Variety Sakura that Sakura, the first-generation cute king, was actually the earliest Chinese daughter-in-law 😂

I wanted to continue watching, but a Tiga cub made me feel bored 🙂 Thank you.

After Berry Ling came out, the writing became more and more weird. It feels like the personality of the protagonist has changed, and I insist on adding more harem characters. Sakura and Tomoyo are the accumulated feelings of the previous hundreds of chapters. The plot of the subsequent characters is really strange.

After reading it for a while, I would like to give the author a suggestion, that is, the protagonist's mouth really needs to be fixed. It's too much. I know that the author probably wants to write a joke that is funny, but you have to control it. I don't think the protagonist seems to be a joke, just a pure curse. It's really annoying. If Xiao Ke regains his strength, I will definitely praise the protagonist as soon as possible.

Crowrido predicted that Sakura's magic power would surpass his own, but after watching the anime, I didn't think that Sakura had surpassed Crowrido. According to the Chronicle of the Wings, Sakura and Crowrido are still several dimensions apart.

I vaguely remember saying that the magic will be exposed in the later stage, but now the system is gone and it's all about love.

It's very good. Come on, the author. It's rare to find a Sakura fanfic. I hope you can write it well. Besides, I really want to see the protagonist and Sakura fall in love. It's not the kind of heroine who just goes through it casually and is done. Qiulipao.

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The writing is really good, but the pace is too slow. I just got to Yingpai. At this pace, many people will read books.

The author should update soon. I can't wait.

I just read the first chapter and saw that it was written about Conan. The protagonist will go to Conan in the future. I don't care if the cp is removed or not, as long as Conan is not allowed to continue to have the benefits of the original work. (Just tell Xiaolan directly that Conan is Kudo, Jie Jiejie. You still want to take a bath with Xiaolan? Impossible) It's best to imitate Maori and beat Conan's head from time to time.

I still feel that the Tiga cub is the most speechless, I don't understand the author's xp, but I still insist on keeping it

So is it related to Chinese comics? They have been talking about the Wang family and they don't write about it. In the modern background of Chinese comics, the family with the surname Wang can only think of one person.

It's really embarrassing. This is the author's first time writing a book. There are many places where the terminology is really confusing. But to be honest, I can't see many Sakura fanfics. You already have favorites and subscriptions. But I still hope that the author can adjust well and write down seriously. No matter what happens in the end, I can accept it.