Tokyo Is Not Too Cold

Akina

A great writer is a great writer, but a director's status is not as high as that of a great writer.

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Tokyo is not too cold, just a little hot🙂🙂🙂

The pace is too fast. When we first meet, we talk about our sweet dreams. When we meet for the second time, we confess our feelings to each other. No cool novel is so fast.

The rhythm is too tight and the characters seem underdeveloped. Give me some water. It's dry.

As a secular person who is sworn in with gambling and drugs, is greedy for sex, and is full of righteousness, well, the title of this book is in line with my taste, and it makes people think about it.

My family members try their best to stay away from it. Now it all depends on the number of readers. Recommendations are all based on this. There will be a recommendation next week. Thank you everyone~

The author is really dedicated, but there is only one left.

Writing in this era, the heroine Akina Nakamori uses too much, which will cause aesthetic fatigue.

After reading the introduction, do you think you don't consider intersecting with China?

Akina, who is only 17 years old, is too fast. . .

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Hanabi is not a beautiful girl in anime! It's easy for a man to make a scene with such a name. Next time the protagonist should be named after discussing it with the readers. He might as well call him Shower. Are you the only one who likes me? Laugh

I feel like the author could use some caution. I feel like the route I chose for this book. That's right, there's nothing poisonous about it. But I just feel like you are writing an outline, right? There are 8 chapters in total, an opening chapter, and a parent line in the middle. I have finished writing two novels, one of which was serialized in a magazine and published. The other one, "X's Devotion", won an award directly, and then started a music line immediately. We met the heroine for three chapters without any plot at all, and they got together. The heroine still took the lead. The overall plot is not poisonous, but if you write it like this, let the readers take it into their own hands. I am dizzy.

It's still too fast. The same heroine Akina has not confessed her love for 400 chapters. In these ten chapters, we have been together. We have also written a book and printed 4 million to make a movie. What happened next? It's too rushed.

Can the author write more about Akina's daily life? Japanese entertainment novels rarely write about single female Akina. There are also some YY novels. I rarely see novels that I like to read 😭